Date: Mar 11, 2017 7:09 am Title: Chapter 5
What an amazing chapter: it flies from every corner. It's so interesting to have Blake and Brian friends. Emmett is finally asking the right questions. Mel is staying out of the battle for once. Good dynamic!
Date: Mar 11, 2017 6:39 am Title: Chapter 4
Lindsey is so much funnier and spirited than in any other story. It's nice to understand why their trio is working. As for Ted, for a smart man, he doesn't get the messages he's getting from Lindsey, Emmett and Justin.
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2017 6:09 am Title: Chapter 6
Emmett is seeing reason, while Michael is trying to be innocent. I don't think it's working. lol.
Date: Mar 11, 2017 5:58 am Title: Chapter 1
This fast becoming one of my favorite of yours. Probably say that every time though. Lol
Loved that Carl gave an earful to Ben. Seems like Deb is willing to listen before running over to Brian again. Hopefully she really hears it. Ben is being a dick. Letting Michael get away with treating everyone badly.
Nice evening for L,M,B,+J and Gus of course. Justin will have a bigger group of friends than he thought I bet. Blake will be included as well.
While Emmett seems to be seeing the ugly side of himself, he's still judging. Felt bad for Blake having to give two bits of truth to Emmett. How long before he sees the ugly truth about Michael?
Even if Emmett and Ted do come around, it's going to take some real effort to become friends with Justin. He's not going to take any crap. He'll also stick up for Brian as well.
Thanks foe today's chapter!!! Loving this to bits.
Cheers
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2017 5:03 am Title: Chapter 5
I am Loving this story Star!!
I love that Deb and Carl are going to see Mount Michael erupt in her kitchen, and it's not going to be pretty.
And I love that Brian is standing up to Michael.
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2017 4:09 am Title: Chapter 5
Ok Emmett is on the Justin train. I'm glad he went to Ben to find out the truth. Shame Ben took the easy way out with Michael and Justin's expense. Ted is learning that he needs to change. Now things are about to blow.
Date: Mar 11, 2017 3:19 am Title: Chapter 5
I have gone back to thinking you are the devil...Really!!! Leaving it there? It's like you're trying to drive me crazy(though admittedly, it's a short trip). How could you make me hate Ben in one scene? I cannot wait for the next update....Hint, hint, hint. Another great story.
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2017 12:34 am Title: Chapter 4
I'm not sure but I think Ted is getting the message that what Mikey thinks isn't the way things are. This is what shoulda been, so I'm looking forward to what will be.
Date: Mar 10, 2017 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
I can't believe you actually have me liking Lindsay. I still hate that Emmett and Ted are being jerks but I'm still with you.
Thanks for the update.
Date: Mar 10, 2017 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
this is what I love about fanfiction. Taking a character and making them slightly different, but also keeping them within the realms of possiblity. I can totally see Emmett this way. Not mean or anything, but conflicted and easily swayed by those he considers friends and easily manipulated too. Nobody has pointed ut his, Ted's or Michael's behaviour to him because they only stick to themselves. Michael keeps everyone else at bay.
Blake was brilliant! Complete truth teller, and made Emmett question things that, till now, have seemed proper. Those who are being manipulated, in many cases, don't see it happening. Shame that Michael's influence on Ted and Emmett caused T&B's relationship to end. Will Ted see it as such or will he still be misguided?
Brian is sure in what he wants and it Justin. He's not going to take Michael's crap or Deb's either. wondering if Deb is going to be blindly backing up Michael or will she also see that Brian deserves to have a life?
Am already completely hooked and looking forward to more.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Mar 10, 2017 3:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
It's unusual for Emmett, but he went to ask Blake, instead of going to Deb or Michael. I hope he won't get worse than that.
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2017 3:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
How refreshing this is the Emmett at the beginning of the series. And Blake certainly told him the truth. Maybe Emmett will be able to help. As for Ted, this is what he was like as well. I'm going to enjoy this particular story just as much as all your others.
Date: Mar 10, 2017 11:42 am Title: Chapter 3
Please don't let them ruin Brian's first relationship. He's making progress and evolving. Can't wait for the boys weekend with Gus.
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2017 11:19 am Title: Chapter 3
Awesome.......micheal is such a bastard ...poor blake... cant wait for more....thank for posting.
Date: Mar 10, 2017 11:00 am Title: Chapter 3
What did you do to Em??? I'm just joking, he was fine in context. I just never get to complain about your stories so... Lol
OMG you have a very interesting set up, Mikey is in a relationship sabotaging everyone else and being enabled by the same. I can't believe he was sitting on the car. Someone (all of them) need to find a back bone and some smarts. Even Brian, he said the right things but he seemed to neglect finishing Mikey and making things crystal. If he wants Justin it's going to require some work.
Im loving it!!!
Date: Mar 10, 2017 8:53 am Title: Chapter 3
I like your fresh take on the ways Mikey's obsessiveness adversely affects not only B and J, but also Ted and Blake. I'm not disliking Emmett (yet?), but I enjoy seeing him conflicted. Well done!
Date: Mar 10, 2017 6:06 am Title: Chapter 3
Already sucked into this story.
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2017 5:19 am Title: Chapter 2
Great going....i like it.
Date: Mar 10, 2017 2:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Love it already!!!â¤
Date: Mar 10, 2017 1:04 am Title: Chapter 2
Ok, I liked this too. It is so easy for me to stay with the Lindsay is a nut job and Melanie is a huge bitch. Truthfully, two days ago I decided I was tired of that and was looking to read something they weren't in. Well, here they are and I don't have to hate them. YIPPEE. I count that as a win.
I could say I felt that about Michael, too. But, I love to hate him. Weird I know.
This is refreshing. More please.
Date: Mar 10, 2017 12:54 am Title: Chapter 1
This was so different. It worked though. Different sets of circumstances change us all.
I liked 'this' Brian and Justin. As always, I'm a sucker for them to fall in love.
I'll keep reading.
Yes, very interesting. Thanks
Date: Mar 10, 2017 12:43 am Title: Chapter 2
I really like this story!
Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really love the way this is going! Justin is smart and Brian seems ready - what a terrific idea. And I'm never adverse to the shadow of Mikey in the background, needing to be put in his place. Thank you for writing.
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm liking the changes in characters. Lindsay is pleased for Brian and Melanie isn't jealous. Gus, of course, is a little sweetheart. Now we just have to see if Mikey runs true to form.
Date: Mar 09, 2017 8:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm so loving this story. I like how open Brian is about his feelings. Gus is a riot. I can totally picture him walking around with no pants on.
Thanks for the update.
Hugs,
Jessica