Date: Mar 09, 2017 8:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
Good that Lindsey, Mel and Brian will have a positive realtionship in this one. Enjoyed their intereactions. Exciting for Lindsey to be able to use her art with Justin's business, and I like how she gave him a heds up about Michael.
Justin was up front about his interaction wiht Michael as well. all seem to starting things off on solid ground. Brian really wants to persue this with Justin.
Michael's head is going to spin off once he finds out who Brian is involved with, LOL!
Date: Mar 09, 2017 7:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
Mel and Lindsey seem to be very nice and friendly with both Brian and Justin.
Gus is so much fun with his "queening" about his clothes.
Date: Mar 09, 2017 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really love this beginning; Brian isn't desperate yet and I'm happy Justin saw that there might be more to come.
Date: Mar 09, 2017 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Terrific start to what will undoubtedly be another terrific story. Loving the fact that you are so keen on writing, and that you have so many ideas.
Curious as to why Michael is being beligerant to Justin. Is Ben talking about him? Praising him as a student and Michael is being a jealous idiot? I'm assuming the 2 guys that pulled him away were Ted and Emmett? Have to say, I may be one of the few who are looking forward to reading Ted and Emmett being misguided about Justin. I've often mentioned that it would be in interesting aspect to the story line. Of course they come around fairly quickly as they both figure out what's really going on, but it makes for something new and interesting. Their loyalties would naturally be with their "friend" Michael.
Brian is taking the initiative. Great!! That they took their time before sex again showed Justin that brian is serious. Can't wait for them to return to the Pitts! What Michael's reaction is going to be will be amusing I'm sure.
Great start!! Definitely looking forward to more! Kind of jealous of Lorie as she gets to read everything first. LOL.
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2017 2:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the variety in your stories. Brian is the Brian he could have been. Justin is independant from the get go. Michael is an irritant, so nothings changed there. lol.
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2017 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Another amazing story....love it...... cant wait for more...thank u so much.
Date: Mar 09, 2017 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Definitely loving the start of this. I'm not keen on Emmett and Ted not being likealble characters but I will trust your creative mojo.
Can't wait for more.
Hugs,
Jessica
Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay a new story from my favorite author!!! Justin is being harassed by an irrational Mikey or is Ben saying Justin's name in his sleep? And I am assuming he's manipulated Ted and Em into thinking his fears are right. I'm hoping it's a short distance for them to get to the truth. Ted is best at Kinnetic and Em is best hanging with Baby.
Brian is very sexy so far. I can't wait to see how this progresses.
Date: Mar 09, 2017 10:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, I have to agree with the last reviewer, Amy. I keep thinking "this is it, she can't come up with another original take", then...BAM!!! Another original version. Please, don't make me hate Ted and Emmett, your takes on Ted have made me reevaluate the character. Can't wait for another update.
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2017 4:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh My God! How can I already be hooked in less than 2000 words? I'm kind of nervous about Ted and Em, but I love all of your stories, so I can't wait to see what's next!
Thanks!
Amy :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2017 4:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh man, I can tell already this is going to be a great story! ðŸ˜
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2017 4:14 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this story. And I love being your beta because I get to read everything first and you write great stories.
~Lorie