[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2025 7:39 am Title: Chapter 13
This ended well. Everyone seems happy. Thanks for this awesome story.
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2025 3:46 am Title: Chapter 12
Forget my star rating.
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2025 3:44 am Title: Chapter 12
I liked how Michael shut Debbie down.
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2025 3:03 am Title: Chapter 11
I really like this: They could face just about anything as long as they were together. That's perfect.
It must be about time for the baby. Right? :D
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2025 2:48 am Title: Chapter 10
I wonder what Debbie thinks when she looks around her table at Thanksgiving and other than Michael's family, it's empty?
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2025 2:29 am Title: Chapter 9
Talk about Karma. Now, Michael is struggling with a cognitive brain injury, just like Justin did. However, I don't see Michael working as hard as Justin did to get better.
I'm not overly thrilled with Michael getting off do to his stupidity. He did the crime, he should do the time. So he messed up so many lives, and he gets no punishment. Not my cup of tea.
What a witch Lindsay is! I can see her jumping for joy at that 5k a month. I just hope they have an ironclad contract. I hope they have in writing that she can't have anything to do with Gus until he's 16, and can make his own choices.
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2025 2:07 am Title: Chapter 8
That stupid S.O.B. He was more worried about himself, that he never gave a thought to how this would not only affect Debbie and Vic, but also the rest of the family.
Debbie was so out of line to blame Brian. But what's new? I hope Brian and Justin give up on Debbie, too.
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2025 1:45 am Title: Chapter 7
I liked Jennifer's explanation about Brian and Justin having new friends that are BOTH Brian's and Justin's friends. It's kind of what I was saying last chapter.
I'm glad Ted found someone. I like Ted a lot.
Parental Rights? One of my favorite storylines! I'm excited to see how that works out. I hope Lindsay ends up with nothing!
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2025 1:27 am Title: Chapter 6
I like the addition of new friends for Brian and Justin. They certainly need them what with all the strife in their lives. And Dan and Charlie seem like special people.
Michael is self-destructing. Big Time. Especially since Woody's has already banned him. If Babylon carries through, where will Michael even go? I suppose the diner, but he has no friends. He will become a pariah on Liberty Avenue.
Is Michael still using Justin's money to drink and buy drugs? So when things hit roch bottom, is that going to be Brian's fault too?
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2025 12:59 am Title: Chapter 5
It seems things are gradually moving forward. I'm super happy that Emmett is gradually pulling away from Michael. I'm glad I've never been in a position like this.
I wonder where Emmett is living? Maybe Vic and he could share a place to live. I feel more sorry for Vic, though.
I can already see the viciousness and envy that will be steaming out of Lindsay when she sees the new cars.
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2025 12:39 am Title: Chapter 4
Emmett really does think his "Friend" Michael is getting the short end of the straw. SMH. I'm disappointed in Emmett. But instead of Emmett questioning what will happen to Michael, he should be asking Michael where all the money is.
YAY! For Ben. I assume Hunter will follow Ben. What will happen to the house (which must be in both of their names) when Michael gets hit with the lawsuit? Will it be taken away? What will that do to Ben's credit?
What I can't figure out is how Michael stole and spent that much money without Ben knowing about it? Put aside what he spent on merchandise and upkeep to the store, how was he able to buy a new car without Ben questioning it?
All these people are just blind. It's so frustrating.
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2025 12:10 am Title: Chapter 3
I'm a little confused. Brian told him he had 30 days to pay Justin, or they were going to the police. Now it's been three months. Now, if it takes a couple of more months for court, Michael's just going to think he can get this. You know, keep detaining it.
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2025 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
It pays to dream big.
I'm curious to know what side Ben and Hunter will choose. If Ben is undecided, maybe Hunter will be too.
Emmett surprises me. And we haven't heard enough from Ted, so that's up in the air too.
[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2025 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! What a powerful first chapter. Everything is lined up perfectly going forward.
How are the other members of the family going to take this? Will the family be devided? Who will side with whom?
Date: May 02, 2025 8:45 pm Title: Chapter 4
Nooooooooo, not Emmett! );
Date: Jul 12, 2022 2:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
So disappointed in Emmett!
Date: Aug 01, 2021 11:03 am Title: Chapter 13
Loved it!! I loved how Brian, Justin and Mel of all people, became a little family.
Date: Jul 28, 2019 11:38 am Title: Chapter 13
had to read it again
Date: Dec 30, 2018 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 13
This was such a wonderful story! It was a pleasure to read. I love how Michael was redeemed and Mel became a good friend to both Brian and Justin as well as sharing in the custody of both children. What a refreshing story!
Date: Oct 30, 2018 6:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hope Brian wont pay Lindey anymore and find a way to get Gus
Date: Oct 30, 2018 5:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
Take everything from Michael
Date: Jul 20, 2018 9:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes, fuck you Michael. FUCK YOU.....
yes, I love a good Michael smack down.
Running to read the next chapter.
Date: Apr 26, 2018 7:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic story. I loved it :-)
Date: Mar 31, 2017 2:05 am Title: Chapter 13
such a good story and perfect ending... !!! <3
Date: Mar 31, 2017 1:58 am Title: Chapter 12
ok, I never thought I'd say thank goodness for Michael... he has to tell Debbie to stop now??? wow... lol