Date: Apr 09, 2017 7:33 am Title: Chapter 5
Deb is finally taking some time off (from her son). I would love to see some pictures of Brian and Mel at the camp; that would be SO interesting and funny!
Nathan is adorable: the way he explained why he was eating with his dog!
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2017 3:43 am Title: Chapter 5
You managed to talk Emmett into marrying without a prenup. Now we just need for Grant to tell Dan how much he's worth. Grant is thrilled that Daphne is going to have a baby! Now we have Joanie showing up. What on earth is that about?
Date: Apr 09, 2017 2:41 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow. What a way to end.
Date: Apr 05, 2017 9:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hysterical! The fake couple was the funniest!! I agree that camping should involve electricity and being inside, preferably a five star hotel. Ok, these kids are skating the line on being special to being "special" . I don't advocate kiddie leashes but, Justin might consider it, lol.
Be safe, we'll miss you...
Date: Apr 05, 2017 6:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
the camping trip...Funny as hell!!!!!! I'm imagining it in my head and the visuals were just hilarious! Had to laugh when Gus even went along with it.
I had a flashback reading the part about Nathan eating the dog food. I remember munching on one of our dog's milk bone biscuits when I was a wee one. I think all kids try it at some point.
That family are going to have their hands full with Nathan and I get the feeling that Penny is going to be a little instigator too.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Apr 05, 2017 10:46 am Title: Chapter 4
Well I can't say that kids aren't curious. I'm sure most kids have tired dog food at some point. lol
Poor Brian. Everyone wants him. I was laughing so hard at Brian and Mel pretending to be a couple. The nicknames were just too much.
Date: Apr 05, 2017 4:51 am Title: Chapter 4
Ha ha ha, Mel and Brian out in the woods and fishing!!! Hilarious!!!!
Date: Apr 05, 2017 1:29 am Title: Chapter 4
That was so fun. Kids just love pet food, at least it wasn't the canned kind.
[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2017 12:57 am Title: Chapter 4
Nathan has an excuse for everything. Emmett's getting married! Brian and Mel on a camping trip together? Oy Vay.
Date: Apr 04, 2017 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
Gus has a point. Speaking of which, that's a timeout moment. She could have poked his eye out! Nope no coloring for the little barber.
Date: Apr 04, 2017 10:41 am Title: Chapter 3
Penny, Penny, Penny. She is going to use Nathan as her little play thing. Cutting his hair, dressing him up...oh, dear. It brings back memories of my childhood. lol
I love that Brian/Justin/Gus still do things just the three of them. That's important. I know they always want him to feel included.
Craig is an ass. When will he ever learn. He lost his chance to be a father.
Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Hugs,
Jessica
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2017 12:38 am Title: Chapter 3
LOL Love Penny's attitude and my oh my what poor Nat is going to put up with :)
~Teresa~
Date: Apr 04, 2017 12:07 am Title: Chapter 3
Lawd Penny.... that is ALL!! LMAO! As for Craig, he really needs to give up and go find his own life. He's an opportunistic jackass that wouldn't know the true meaning of family if it broke his nose. Now there's an idea that has a lot of merit! He wants to know his grandchildren... man sit yo' ass down! No one with half a brain would want to know Craig 'Delusional Deadbeat Asshole' Taylor unless it's by reading the comic titled 'Boo-Boo the Fool' or the obituary in the Sunday paper.
Justin handled him with style and grace though. I also liked the way he spoke to Gus about Craig, tying it into a life lesson for the budding young man. He didn't try to hide it or sugarcoat it, just gave it to him like it is. If Justin has anything to thank Craig for, it was showing him what NOT to do when he had his own children.
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Apr 03, 2017 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
Excellent!! Those kids are so funny! Brian in the outdoors under the stars! That would be interesting to witness. Maybe he would do it for Gus.
Date: Apr 03, 2017 4:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
I kinda get Deb, or am at least somewhat empathetic, but there definitel ycomes a time when you just have to cut ties to a degree. she doesn't really see that he's just manipulating her. Pouring on the guilt trip to get her to give him what he wants. thankfully the boys are making her see things as they really are. I hope Carl hangs tight. I also hope she really does sell the house, adn using it to pay off her own mortgage. I don't see Michael going into that program that Carl was talking about. See what happens when he finally gets out should be interesting. Nobody in teh gang is going to put up with any of his shit. wonder how long it takes for him to go back in? lol
Nathan...what a little cutey patootie! what a little minx! I can absolutely see how Mel and brian are the softies. dosnt' surprise me at all. Oh what a fun ride parentling is going to be.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Apr 03, 2017 1:03 am Title: Chapter 2
loving Nathan- I have a 3 year old grandson - not as mishchievious as Nathan but the things that come out of his mouth are hysterical and prescious
Author's Response:
A lot of this is what my son's did as they were growing up. The peeing was actually my nephew and he called his parents to see and the result was the same.
Date: Apr 02, 2017 6:39 am Title: Chapter 2
Deb needs to open her eyes and close her heart if she wants to move forward! She can't let Michael win this.
Author's Response:
Deb will alway regress to wanting her son happy, but Carl is making her see that she has to let him go.
Date: Apr 02, 2017 3:07 am Title: Chapter 2
Loving the story and Nathan! "I couldn't help it, I needed it". Love it. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks Nathan is a combination of my sons.
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2017 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Poor Deb. Nathan seems to take after Justin.
Author's Response:
In my head I saw the kids being the opposite of their biological father.
Date: Apr 01, 2017 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
Nathan could very well be the cutest kid in the world.
When will Deb learn?
Author's Response:
Really after Gus, there was no way for Nathan not to be.
Date: Apr 01, 2017 7:14 am Title: Chapter 1
I just can't imagine the face of Brian having his Armani flushed and his tub pooped in by HIS son! Priceless!!
I bet you will have us some more laughing in the coming chapters. This is going to be so good.
Date: Mar 31, 2017 5:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thansk for teh warning!! Duly noted. This....Star my friend...this was a FANTASTIC chapter to start the second part. I've always loved your sense of humour and you most definitely did not disappoint. Loved every single word of it. I laughed so much throughout. I could absolutely envision Brian and Justin's expressions throughout.
BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Author's Response:
I wanted the kids to be fun and show Brian and Justin as fathers.
Date: Mar 31, 2017 11:55 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG!!! So hilarious! Life is surely NOT dull with Penny and Nathan. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Also wwonderful to know that Molly has gained some direction and perspective in her life and that Mel and Lindz remain happy!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Author's Response:
To me Justin and Brian as parents means two kids that will run them in circles. Thanks
Date: Mar 31, 2017 10:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Potty training, lol. Why does this seem familiar to me? LMAO!
Good for Lindsay, drawing better than we thought, and impressing Brian.
I wonder what's in store for us? Penny seems like a pistol and Nathan's a terror, big fun!!
Author's Response:
i'm relieving my childrens life throught Nathan and Penny.