Date: May 12, 2017 3:24 pm Title: Chapter 18
Well for once Craig seemed on his best behavior...well for him anyway.
I'm glad Shelby's parents like Hunter and the rest of the family. Can't wait for Justin and His to get back to Brian.
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2017 4:20 am Title: Chapter 18
Fantastic chapter. No one got nasty. Loving it.
Date: May 11, 2017 10:40 am Title: Chapter 17
First, my apologies, I haven't been available to keep up.
Hunter, he's coming right along. Good for him.
Poor Gus. He's going to need extra attention, I'm sure the boys can handle it.
They are lucky they werent struck blind, lol.
Date: May 08, 2017 6:33 pm Title: Chapter 17
Justin did the right thing when he called Brian to talk to Gus. Poor kid who has been thru difficult situations with his mothers while he couldn't have his father with him.
Hunter is funny when he tells Justin he will have to figure out Justin' disorganized organization.
Michael's story about Lindsey was hilarious!
Date: May 08, 2017 4:54 pm Title: Chapter 17
It's kinda funny. I'm reading this story and keep expecting someone to do something bad, or act in a negative way. Everyone is getting along! There's the usual little blips i nteh raod, but that's found in any and all friendships, realtionships...family etc. They're all growing and experienceing life.
Really glad that B&J were able to reassure Gus. He's understandably nervous because of previous experience with L&M. Hopefully everyone, especially the girls will be able to help in that reassurance as well.
Hunter is getting so much experience. What a terrific opportunity for him. Glad that Lindsey has realized the opportunity given to her as well. that she's realized how poorly she behaved before. this really is the better opportunity for her.
Poor Michael...not something he expected nor wanted to see I'm sure. LOL! Naturally he had to share his misery with Justin. Both will be well on their way to inebriation just to get the images out of their heads. LOL.
such a great story!!!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: May 08, 2017 10:24 am Title: Chapter 17
My poor Gus. I hope he does understand that they will not stop loving him due to a new baby. They are right, their situation is very different from Mel and Lindsay. I think he'll be the best big brother.
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2017 4:57 am Title: Chapter 17
I'm glad that Gus decided another baby might not be so bad. But Michael walking in on Lindsay. Ewww.
Date: May 08, 2017 3:43 am Title: Chapter 17
Awesome chapter! It's really ashamed that Mel and Lindsay's selfishness and vindictiveness towards each other has tormented Gus so much that he's afraid to trust that Brian and Justin won't do the same. It's sad that he equates getting a new sibling with being the forgotten child. Brian and Justin did an amazing job reassuring him of his place in their lives.
EWWWWWWWWW!!!! and at the same time LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! That was probably the closest Michael has ever been to the female anatomy for his entire life. And the fact that it was Lindsay... well even Justin, who has far more experience with the female form- especially drawing it- even needed his fair share of Beam, thinking about seeing her naked...LOL
Can't wait for MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: May 07, 2017 5:31 am Title: Chapter 16
Interesting talk between the guys; what is in the box? Can't wait to find out.
Date: May 05, 2017 3:25 pm Title: Chapter 16
Justin was so encouraging towards Shelby. Good that he has that from an artist like Justin.
Absolutely adore Gus and Jusstin's relationship! So loving. Gus is perfectly content in the knowledge that Justin sees him as his son. They obviously love each other deeply.
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: May 05, 2017 10:31 am Title: Chapter 16
I love Gus putting in his two cents. lol Him and Justin have a very unique relationship. I'm glad Gus has two dads.
[Report This]Date: May 05, 2017 3:13 am Title: Chapter 16
Shelby is learning more than how to be an artist. I love that Gus loves Jus.
Date: May 03, 2017 4:11 pm Title: Chapter 15
Interesting talk between Mel and Justin: maybe she will understand the dynamic that exists between Brian and Justin. Maybe will she see how her couple could work better.
I hope Gus will find his place when the family will expend.
Date: May 03, 2017 4:25 am Title: Chapter 15
The talk with Mel was truly enlightening for her. Justin was always lauded for being the most mature person of the group and it definitely showed here. He told her things that the gang never knew about why or how Brian and Justin succeeded. It wasn't sex; it was love in its purest form, not a preconceived definition of it. I really think that now that she has a better understanding of her part in Lindsay feeling stifled, she'll let Lindsay fly and just be there to catch her if she falls.
As for Justin's thoughts about Hunter, WOW! I can certainly understand Hunter being overwhelmed at hearing someone he admires sees the greatness he has the potential to be. I'm so HAPPY that he now sees the same thing in himself and isn't shying away from it. I just hope that on his road to being the best, he takes the time to really enjoy himself along the way. Out of all the characters, no one deserves peace and happiness more than Hunter!
Looking forward to more of this amazing work!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2017 12:35 am Title: Chapter 15
I see a side of Hunter I wouldn't have expected and that he can do greater things than Lindsay. Justin's talk with Melanie was educational too. Gret chapter.
Date: May 03, 2017 12:09 am Title: Chapter 15
I love Hunter's character in this story. He's amazing and he should know it.
I hope Gus will be okay with having more siblings. It's always tough when you are the oldest and have to learn to share your parent's affections.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2017 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 15
I liked this chapter, you put Hunter in front made him see what good is is to others.
Thanks for all the hard work in put into these stories.
~Teresa~
Date: May 02, 2017 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 15
So that last little bit almost had me in tears. Man alive....you worded that so beautifully! It was so emotional. I am soooooo glad that Hunter was able to hear all that and understand how great he is. How important he is to those around him. He's really seeing what remarkable possibilities lie ahead for him.
Interesting conversation between justin and Mel. Like Mel said, it seems teh student has supassed the teacher. He spoke truth to Mel. Hopefully she didn't just hear it, but actually listened. We all want to protect those we love, but by going overboard, we don't give them them opportunites to screw up and learn, or to blossom and grow. I think Lindsey will be able to really make a mark for herself in this new job. definitely something better suited for her than as Justin's assistant.
What a wonderful chapter!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: May 01, 2017 5:28 pm Title: Chapter 14
Hunter is so impressive in this. He's all grown up and really setting up a terrific life for himself. (& Shelby) Hopefully shelby will also learn to accept his own abilities. It seems he has a real talent. Hunter handled Lindsey in the best way possible. She didn't intent to come across so bitchy I don't believe. She was simply hurt by being looked over for a position she felt she thought herself good for. Justin definitel ymade teh right decisio nin hiring Hunter, and he was able to make Lindsey undertand Justin's reasoning. The fact that Justin was still trying to involve Lindsey shows that he sees she has talent, but doesn't want to involve her in his own business.
cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2017 1:10 pm Title: Chapter 14
All's well that ends well. And this chapter is no exception.
Date: May 01, 2017 10:37 am Title: Chapter 14
I'm glad that Lindsay apologized to Hunter. He didn't deserve her anger that he got the job over her.
I can't wait for Gus to be with the guys. Good idea to have Rachel on standby for when they need some time alone.
Date: May 01, 2017 9:11 am Title: Chapter 14
Hunter is all grown up and has a huge sense of how to deal with Lindsay's state of mind. He's gonna be good at his job because of that and also because he has seen Brian and Justin's relationship for quite some time now.
Lindsay can't miss this opportunity: she won't have another one anytime soon.
Michael is really mature here: he can honestly talk about his love for Brian and not seems needy anymore.
As for the magical duo, they are mature, but also very playful and can't get enough of each other, especially when they know they won't be together for some time.
Date: May 01, 2017 3:18 am Title: Chapter 14
Hunter is a real gem! I liked the way he handled Lindsay. Hopefully she will get out of her pity party and start to design a life for herself. Justin is really giving her an opportunity to reinvent herself; she better take it!
Brian and Justin are always HOT and thankfully Rachel understands them. Maybe it's because their passion is so pervasive in a wholly wonderful way that one cannot help but feel and honor such a rarity. I can't imagine that someone as uptight as Stephen or Lindsay could accept it with the good grace that Rachel does.
Looking forward to MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Apr 30, 2017 7:32 pm Title: Chapter 13
Michael the mother hen: hilarious, but I could see him do as his mother does.
The doll is also funny, especially when Brian takes it.
Lindsay should get spanked, slapped, anything that will make her ideas "straight".
Date: Apr 30, 2017 9:59 am Title: Chapter 13
You tell her Jen. I'm so glad Gus gets to see Brian and Justin in London.