[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2025 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
Six-month pregnancy ~ I like your world!
I am so angry that Billy got off scot-free. Although I know it would be nearly impossible to find him and recover the money.
Good old Albert. I'm glad he had a few good memories of Justin to carry him through his final days.
This was another exceptionally good story.
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all your comments. I enjoy how you try to predict the direction the story is going to go. Do you write your own stories?
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2025 2:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
There must be something else going on with Brian. Some past sorrow.
I'm so glad Brian reciprocated Justin's feelings. They really haven't known each other very long.
Wyoming sounds like a good place to raise a daughter. Lots of open space ~ and clean air.
OMG! Only one chapter left. I really hope Billy is found and caught. Even if all the money isn't recovered.
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2025 2:14 pm Title: Chapter 7
So glad that Brian was cleared, even though I knew he wasn't the culprit. I guess I thought 'guilty' as charged.
What is going to make Justin realize Billy has been gone this long?
I'm afraid that the woman Brian was visiting in the hospital, maybe lost his baby.
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2025 1:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh Lordy! Sounds like Billy took the money and ran! I assume nobody will have any clue as to where he would go.
I sure hope Justin knows it's Billy.
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2025 1:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
Maybe Brian had an emergency job ~ possible but not probable. If he's like the original, he wants to make the rules.
I'm still thinking about Billy... If he took Justin's money, he probably left the Quoin. I'm not sure if Manny will be able to do anything or not. Besides, it was plumb crazy that Justin had all that money in his room. He should have kept that banked with the rest that Manny has.
I know... sic Brian on him. :D
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2025 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
Brian has a secret. We haven't learned anything except that Brian didn't like working in the factory.
Did he have a past pregnancy that he somehow lost the baby? Is it something to do with his family?
I guess all will be revealed.
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2025 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
BTW, I absolutely love In the Year 2525. I've listened to that so many times. I wonder, when it gets to 8510, will Earth still be here?
God, good riddance to Max. It would be nice if Manny had a way to charge him lots of money. Well, Max will never be able to visit that place again.
So Brian and Justin have officially met. Can't wait to see where this goes.
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2025 11:17 am Title: Chapter 2
Are the men supposed to use condoms? Or was the guy who got Justin pregnant just decided not to use them?
I sure hope that nobody gets into the coffee can. Especially when Justin talks about saving money. They will know he has money somewhere in his room.
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2025 10:39 am Title: Chapter 1
My heart goes out to Justin. He sure has a tough time since the bomb hit.
I don't know if Justin could explain to Manny that if Max comes back, he can't take him. Is Manny good with the boys? Will Justin be able to explain how Max hurt me? I guess I'll find out.
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
Date: Jan 11, 2020 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 9
I just knew who took Justin's money! Very good story!!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it.
Date: Aug 14, 2019 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 9
Love it
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: Apr 30, 2017 1:34 pm Title: Chapter 9
I loved this story. Any chance you might do a sequel so we can see how life in Wyoming turned out?
Author's Response: not very likely, although I do like this story.
Date: Apr 29, 2017 3:23 am Title: Chapter 9
Nice happy ending - just the way I like it. Thanks for writing this one. TAG
Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting.
Date: Apr 29, 2017 2:38 am Title: Chapter 6
I'm with Justin - no, no, no, no ... the money's all gone? No! Lol. TAG
Author's Response: What a blow!
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2017 1:44 am Title: Chapter 3
I can just see Brian's sexy, slim hips with that low slung tool belt around them... yummy. Lol. TAG
Author's Response: That was the inspiration. LOL
Date: Apr 29, 2017 1:32 am Title: Chapter 2
I really like how you write Albert - such a sad, sweet, old gent. TAG
Author's Response: Thank you, he reminds me of some people I know. I guess that's where he came from.
Date: Apr 29, 2017 12:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Haven't read this one for a very long time - can't wait to give it another read. TAG
Author's Response: Hope you enjoy it once again. It's one of my favorites.
Date: Apr 28, 2017 4:56 pm Title: Chapter 9
Albert was really a good guy; I suspected something like that when he gave Justin the envelope, but I forgot about it.
I hope Billy will rot in hell or will find someone worse than him.
So glad Justin got his dream all real.
Author's Response: Things do work out sometimes.
Date: Apr 28, 2017 4:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
It seems Brian is also having a hard time. Although, he didn't talk about his past.
Author's Response: Perhaps that is to come.
Date: Apr 28, 2017 4:25 pm Title: Chapter 7
Justin might not have 1500 on his SAT if he doesn't even suspect Billy, who is AWOL since the last morning coffee.
At least, Brian has been cleared.
Author's Response: This Justin is different from canon Justin.
Date: Apr 28, 2017 4:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
If Justin had put his money to the bank, it wouldn't have happened; maybe there was no more bank?
Author's Response: So many ifs in this story.
Date: Apr 28, 2017 3:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
Justin is really naive regarding Billy: he didn't even check his coffee can after his neighbor got away.
As for Brian, I bet he doesn't want to be pushed, and Justin seems to be doing just that.
Author's Response: Justin can be naive even in his line of work.
Date: Apr 28, 2017 3:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
I hope didn't take the money that was in the coffee can. Brian cares about Justin, but doesn't want to be involved more than he already had. What is his secret? Did he lose his family too? His friends?
Author's Response: Mysteries to be solved.
Date: Apr 28, 2017 3:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
That was a close call! What a nutso this Max! At least, Justin was able to introduce himself to Brian.
Author's Response: I think in those kind of places nutso is pretty prevalent.
Date: Apr 28, 2017 2:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yeah, what a first impression Justin made! Bittersweet chapter, with almost tenderness with the old guy.
Author's Response: "Almost tenderness" - good point.