Date: May 08, 2017 4:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
yup... you've done it to me again... I'm hooked into this story already... i can tell that 11 chapters won't be nearly long enough for me to enjoy your story... you always keep me so entertained and happy and I get immersed in your worlds... when they end I always feel a sense of sadness that I'm done.. but have loved every word.
Author's Response: What a wonderful compliment. Thanks so much.
Date: May 07, 2017 9:17 pm Title: Chapter 7
One question: who had to clean the mirror on their second trip to the restroom? It would have been fun to see Brian's reaction if Justin have asked him as nicely as he was asked the time before.
The "top" battle is going to be epic in the coming days/weeks.
I think Brian is realistic when he thinks about his "friends" potential comments on Justin, who is also realistic when he says "some friends" that call Brian "asshole".
Author's Response: Don't know who would clean the mirror. LOL I don't think they were too worried about that. Friends can be a problem in many different ways.
Date: May 07, 2017 8:49 pm Title: Chapter 6
Whoa! What an emotional chapter! Super hot, then cold shower with Brian escaping, then big surprise in the end. Well done!
Nice touch when Justin asked what would have happened if they had met on Liberty Avenue when he was 17.
Author's Response: Thank you. glad you liked those little touches.
Date: May 07, 2017 8:12 pm Title: Chapter 5
Justin is right to want to know Brian and take time outside his studio. His idea of fun is so different from Brian's, but he has him to agree for a full day.
The end was hot as hell, and then again, Justin's idea of pleasure is nothing like Brian imagined. And the night is still young...
Author's Response: LOL They have a lot to learn from each other.
Date: May 07, 2017 6:17 pm Title: Chapter 11
Even though the meeting with his parents went badly it was still a great chapter. Brian's reaction and declaration was both cute and hot. I loved this story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
Date: May 07, 2017 6:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
He is going to see his parents? That's going to be a tough chapter.
Author's Response: Perhaps.
Date: May 07, 2017 5:50 pm Title: Chapter 9
I knew Michael wouldn't take it well but he doesn't know Justin yet.
Author's Response: I don't think Michael will ever like Justin.
Date: May 07, 2017 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 8
Well that was an introduction of different kind. How long will it take to alarm the whole family?
Author's Response: Probably not long. LOL
Date: May 07, 2017 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
I bet Brian didn't think he would end up sleeping like a baby without even touching Justin! The massage can be very sensual.
Author's Response: Yes, very unexpected.
Date: May 07, 2017 4:49 pm Title: Chapter 7
I hope for both of them that this will work out.
Author's Response: Let's hope so.
Date: May 07, 2017 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
So Brian got over himself and went after what he really wants. That's so amazing. I can't wait to see what happens when they get to Pittsburgh.
Author's Response: For once Brian took the initiative without knowing the outcome.
Date: May 07, 2017 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love that they did so much stuff Brian would normally never think of doing. The ending of this chapter was pretty great too.
Author's Response: Thanks so much.
Date: May 07, 2017 3:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
At least, Brian wasn't rejected, but this is not going smoothly.
Author's Response: Not yet anyway.
Date: May 07, 2017 3:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
The longing started. How many hours will Brian wait until he makes his move towards Justin?
Author's Response: Brian doesn't know what to do with this Justin.
Date: May 07, 2017 2:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Excellent beginning! What Brian would be a boring business trip might become something more...
The idea of mummy painting is genius! It's also to have Brian out of his comfort zone.
Author's Response: Brian is definitely out of his comfort zone, and then there's Justin.
Date: May 07, 2017 6:52 am Title: Chapter 4
What is he planning? Whatever it is, I hope it will work.
Author's Response: It will all work out.
Date: May 07, 2017 6:27 am Title: Chapter 3
They talked to each other. That's a start.
Author's Response: Not much but a start.
Date: May 06, 2017 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
Brian seems absolutely fascinated by Justin. I wonder what Justin's full story is.
Author's Response: Brian will always be fascinated by Justin I my stories. LOL
Date: May 06, 2017 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a start for a story. That was really hot. I can't wait to see what comes next.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it.
Date: May 06, 2017 11:12 am Title: Chapter 11
I loved this!!!! Very out of character but not for Brian. I'm so happy he went back and begged Justin to come with him.
I want a painting too! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so very much! It' ice to write a kinder, gentler Brian sometimes.
Date: May 05, 2017 8:25 pm Title: Chapter 11
Hiya,
Reread this one again and guess what? I still like it!
It felt like meeting an old friend again. And I really enjoyed "the meeting".
Once again thank you for posting your work on KD
XOXO
Meriam
Author's Response: Thanks so much for this lovely comment. I'm so happy that the story was still interesting to you.
Date: May 04, 2017 9:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hiya,
Thank you for posting this story here. I really, really, really love this one. I read this ages ago and couldn't find it back for a long time. So now, here you are. I will reread your story and leave a review when finished.
Once again a big thank you.
XOXO
Meriam
Author's Response: Thank you for your comment. I hope you enjoy the story once again.