Date: Dec 31, 2022 1:31 pm Title: Custody
That was a great ending to the story, and I agree with Brian, that if Melanie continues the way she has been, he very well could be asking the judge to terminate her rights to Gus. I can't see her changing anything about herself to try and get along with Brian at all. That woman is too stuck in her ways to do that. And Michael, he just lost his best friend, because Brian won't have anything more to do with him at all. And it's his own fault, too.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and the way the characters played out.
Date: Dec 31, 2022 6:35 am Title: Kidnapped!
This was a great story, from start to finish!! I'm so glad that they were able to get Gus back safe and sound. I can't wait to read the sequel!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. So pleased you liked it.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 8:41 am Title: Custody
Cute banner..perfect.
Author's Response: Glad you like it. Sabina does great banners.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 8:40 am Title: Custody
That was intense,..really.
Mindblowing work..thank u for sharing.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 8:31 am Title: Custody
Gus is so sweet and cute.
Author's Response: Yes, I believe he would be.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 8:04 am Title: Custody
Stupid mikey ..he does not know that mel had used him..now he lost his Best friend.
Author's Response: That's Michael for you.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 7:43 am Title: Custody
Uggghhh...i hope she does not back out later ..as she is mother of JR too..she will want to be there for her too.
Author's Response: That remains to be seen.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 7:32 am Title: Kidnapped!
The sweet reunion made me cry...such a awesome story...thanks.
Banner is simple but very effecting..suiting.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for your lovely comments.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 7:21 am Title: Kidnapped!
Mel should give back her rights when gus is back..she clearly does not think gus is her own son.
Author's Response: She certainly doesn't act like she thinks of him as her own son.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 6:45 am Title: Kidnapped!
This is a awesome story.
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 6:39 am Title: Kidnapped!
I think i was little bit right..mel's case have something to do with gus's kidnapping..mafia is dengerous they dont play by the law.
Author's Response: Exactly.
Date: Feb 16, 2019 6:32 am Title: Kidnapped!
Brian is not the only one who have enemies ..mel too can have ...maybe someone from her work did this..she is a lawyer maybe someone wants her to back off from some case..lets see who is the real culprit.
Author's Response: Soon to be revealed.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 6:19 am Title: Kidnapped!
Poor brian ..he is hurting the most.
Author's Response: Yes, he is.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2019 5:56 am Title: Kidnapped!
Like the plot..great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: Jan 29, 2019 5:30 pm Title: Custody
I read this a very long time ago on your other site. Loved it then, loved it now. I think I have read this at least ten times. It's the best kidnapping series I have ever read.
Starting with Kidnapped, I was so happy that it was because of Mel that little Gus was taken. The things she said to and about Brian were horrendous. That first day at the loft when Brian kicked them all out, had me hating all of them. Deb was as bad, if not worse, than the others. I was surprised by Emmett's and Ted's reactions, though. The trials and tribulations wondering about Gus, and how everyone seemed to just forget about him, focusing on JR, well, WOW!!!
Many months later in Custody. Thank heavens Deb gave a good review in court. Michael and Melanie, were total asswipes. I would love to see a sequel after the six months are up. Melanie's continued hatefulness, can only lead to her downfall, and I loved to see her parental rights terminated. Michael needs to have the people of the Avenue turn against him for not standing beside his best friend (Christ! I HATE that term.) and tell him to stay away, and not have anything to do with him. I certainly hope Brian severes all ties with him for etenity.
The excuses Melanie gave throughout this story, how she couldn't focus on Gus, couldn't go to Sicily, all of it, was bullshit! She had Michael and Debbie to take care of JR, if she really wanted Gus back. But because he was Brian's son, is why she didn't go. THAT"S why I say she should lose her rights to him as a mother,
AWESOME Story! Thank you for sharing.
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response: What a great review. I agree with you on almost every point. At this time there is no plan to have a further sequel.
Date: Jan 27, 2019 9:54 pm Title: Custody
hope thre is a sequel and Brian wins his case and dumps Michael forever
Author's Response: No sequel, I'm afraid. Thanks for reading.
Date: Jan 27, 2019 9:41 pm Title: Custody
fucking Michael
Author's Response: lol
Date: Jan 19, 2019 1:28 am Title: Custody
Great story. Oh that Michael. He is the worst person followed by Melanie. They make a pair. Poor Jenny Rebecca getting genes from them LOL
Author's Response: lol Yes, JR doesn't have the best genetics.
Date: Jan 18, 2019 8:04 pm Title: Custody
Great first chapter. Off to continue reading.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: Jan 18, 2019 12:46 am Title: Custody
Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I really love anti Michael and Mel and Lindsey story's . This was great to read. Looking forward to more by you.
Author's Response: Thanks for your positive feedback.
Date: Jan 17, 2019 9:03 pm Title: Custody
The fight is not over: I don't see Mel going to let Brian "win".
Author's Response: I don't think she has any choice.
Date: Jan 17, 2019 8:49 pm Title: Custody
I was surprised to read that Debbie didn't go the same way as Michael. Good for her, and Brian.
Author's Response: Sometimes Deb has a mind of her own.
Date: Jan 17, 2019 8:35 pm Title: Custody
Brian is hurt, but he is not acting like a grown-up; the baths, then visit to Michael who is witness against him. I hope Mel won't use that as a threat.
Author's Response: Brian is out of control.
Date: Jan 17, 2019 8:20 pm Title: Custody
Michael sure knows what is best for Gus! What a friend!
Author's Response: Does he?
Date: Jan 17, 2019 8:06 pm Title: Custody
This going to be bloody! Mel is out of her mind and she hates Brian so much that it blinds her.
Author's Response: Could be very bloody.