Date: Mar 10, 2018 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 6
I really liked the story, I'm glad I read it. I could learn the original story of Evan and Brian. Thank you very much, Judit from Hungary. March 10, 2018<br />(I'm sorry but I do not speak English, I used the translator.)<p></p>
Date: Oct 15, 2016 1:12 am Title: Chapter 6
It was exactly what I expected. Awesome chapter! I'm sure it was difficult for you but you did a great job!
Author's Response:
Glad the chapter lived up to the expectations. :)
It was especially difficult, but I managed apparently.
Date: Oct 14, 2016 5:47 pm Title: Chapter 6
Nice emotional talk. So glad Justin wants to give a second chance. Brian is being really honest about his sexual past. That's a proof of his remorse.
Nice beginning with the cat and Justin looking at Brian's ass.
Thank you for finishing this story!!!
I hope you will post a new story soon as I love the way you write.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the constant feedback. I'm glad you liked the story.
There's only one last chapter for the main story left. I have quite a few new things on stand by.
Date: Jun 10, 2016 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm not a cat person but this kitten is to die for.
I loved how Brian fell for the blue eyes because of Justin's.
I loved the call with Daphne; they always had good relations; both straight to the point and no BS.
[Report This]Date: May 30, 2016 4:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm not totally against Brian and Evan having a friendship as long as it's within the context of business. However, if Evan can't respect the boundaries then he needs to remain part of Brian and Justin's history.
I now get why Evan pursued Brian so hard even though I still kinda hate him for that. It's easy to sympathize with him in that context because of how women tend to be treated when they reach a certain age. Many are traded in for the 'trophy' wife who is younger, thinner or whatever else men might deem more attractive. Nevermind that the first wife was there behind his back, holding him up when he failed and helping to shape the man into who he may have become... That kind of reasoning makes someone like Evan more human and again, I have to applaud your efforts as a terrific storyteller because of it!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: May 29, 2016 6:05 pm Title: Chapter 4
If they can stay honest with each other and Justin agrees, they could have a constructive friendship.
Date: May 27, 2016 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
In mourning too but I'll wait to see how it turns from this point of view, knowing where they quite are in NYSoM... Not so angsty at the moment but who knows what you have in your mind for us.
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2016 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lawd Ham Turkey!! Evan is the MOST frustrating piece of ....man I have read in a long time! And whereas I feel for Brian, I still want to bite him in the kneecap! It takes me back to Justin saying to Brian in the series, "The only one who never broke a promise is you," and then he goes and breaks not only one but THREE of them. <insert deep sigh here> I'm really trying to be sympathetic to Brian's wants and needs as far as branching out Kinnetik but this thing with Evan... I just don't see how it could get any better for Brian and most especially NOT Justin.
In mourning (and hoping it's temporary) for the B and J show,
~Nichelle
Date: May 17, 2016 7:25 am Title: Chapter 2
*sigh* I'm really trying here...I swear I am. I just don't understand why of all people Evan has to be in the picture. Couldn't Brian have called on an old college buddy? Or even another business acquaintance? And for the love of everything holy....why would he take Evan to the diner? It would have been just as easy for Ted to meet him somewhere else.
You know I love your writing and please know that I really am trying to give this one a chance ;)
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2016 7:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
I realize Evan is helping with the business. But so far Justin only sees that they are together and it hurts.
Date: May 16, 2016 7:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Evan is all about Evan and he doesn't seem to care who he hurts as long as he gets what he wants. If Justin were in the same situation, I can see the same things happening. At least when they got to NY Evan seemed to develope a concious.
Date: May 07, 2016 3:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
So exciting to see this posted. Gosh - I've got a lot of new reading to do! TAG