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Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2017 6:14 pm Title: Chapter 8

Have calmed down slightly since yesterday's chapter. DAYUM that was emotional! totally gut wrentching. I was a fall down mess after reading that. Goes to show just how talented you are. Your gift is termendous to be able to achieve the emotional reactions you inspire in your writing!

How is Brian really? He seemed to have gone from near catatonic to seemingly OK in a relatively short time. I really hope that he doesn't retreat into an emotional black hole. That he realizes the huge support he has around him and holds onto that.

Oh I hope they are able to keep Deb away from Gus. I can't even imagine the shit she'd say around him...

she certainly has deflecting down patt and taught Michael the same thing. Things don't bode well for any of those 3 and rightfully so.

Jennifer and Daphne are a welcome addition and perfect timeing. They were able to negate what Deb was saying.

So incredibly intense sessions. Brutal and so emotional. It must be exhausting to write.

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Yeah it has been knackering and C9 was not easy either.  But its back to the pooor-widdle-Mikey show in the next few chapters and B&J start to reconnect...

Hope you still enjoy

Cheers

Nicole

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2017 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 8

So relieved that Daphne and Drew came: every support that can help beat the Novotny is welcomed.

We learned some small facts (Hunter knowing the kitchen at Britin) and a big one (the nightly visits at the hospital).

Deb can be very mean, but Jennifer as a WASP is trained to do so and she loves her son, so much better than Deb does for Michael. She will fight dirty if she has to. Daph will fight too because, after Brian and Justin, she's the one who knows how they are together; she knows all details a real best friend can deal with.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2017 3:51 pm Title: Chapter 8

Was wondering when Jennifer and Daphne were going to show up and set the record straight for Deb who like her son is rewriting history to fit her narrative. (She is lucky Drew is there or else she be getting her Ass kicked from one side of the street to another)

Brian could never sleep with Michael because he isn't attracted to a whiny-assed Mama's boy who needs his Mommy to hold his hand and explain his sexual orientation to him.

Jennifer throwing Deb's words back  at her just goes to show that Deb always knew Brian could never love her son and her pathetic attempt to say otherwise is her trying to control everything yet again.

How much did Brian give Michael to pay the mortgage and what new toys did he buy instead.

No amount of apologizing is going to fix this Deb is in the deep freeze with Michael and Lindsay.



Author's Response:

She gets worse in the next chapter...and the answer to your chapter questioin is in there.  

But the poor-widdle-Mikey-show comes back into town...snicker!

Hope you continue to enjoy.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2017 11:32 am Title: Chapter 8

Good thing for Daph that Drew showed up.  Jennifer and Daph both let Deb have it and she still deflected back to Brian.  Do we ever find out if Michael gave Deb the money that Brian gave him for her?  Another great chapter.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2017 6:01 am Title: Chapter 8

Damn! This chapter and the previous one have both been so gut wrenching but also amazing! Very happy that not only has Daphne been included in the session but so has Jennifer. And also happy that Drew came along to prevent Daphne and Emmett from stomping Deb and/or Mikey! They don't need to be in jail!

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

Deb

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 2:54 pm Title: Chapter 7

Just so intense... the balls (sorry for the that) of Debbie to out Brian's cancer as if he deserved it because Michael is an unlovable asshole... Michael WAS loved by Brian as a brother, but that wasnt' good enough... and she WAS loved as a mother, but now she's just a mother fucker and lost everyone's love!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 10:42 am Title: Chapter 7

Damn Deb!  She is so vindictive.  I can't believe she threw his cancer in his face.

I'm glad Justin is there to take care of him.  I just hope Brian will be okay.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 7

You are a fantastic writer because I want to climb into the page and slap Deb until her style changes.

What she did putting Brian's cancer out there and staying that he deserved to get it there makes me so effing mad that not even striking her is enough I want her destroyed beyond measure.

Deb is the worst kind of abuser she mentally beat down an abused child and then moulded him to follow her dictate or she would pull her love away, after years of that of course Brian wouldn't know how to fight back he was trained not to.

She also taught Michael to use the same triggers to get Brian to bend, then one night a hot blond was standing under a lamppost and their control began to crumble.

They were all conditioned to ignore the insults and cruelty because it was disguised as 'It's a joke, or ' I didn't mean it, you know how I am.

Or the record that will never change: After All We Did For You.

It is about time for Deb to reap what she sewed and see that in the mirror is not The Mother of Liberty Avenue, but The Bully of Liberty Avenue.

Mel, Hunter, Ben and Emmett got me all teary-eyed with their reactions, but Brian's broke my heart because Deb may have just destroyed the last little bit of love Brian had for her.

Smart to keep Deb away from Gus.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 7

Wow! This was a difficult chapter! But it was an amazing one, too!

Deb finally showed her true character - Brian is to blame for everything and if it's not Brian then it must be someone else's fault because she and Mikey can do no wrong!

"And you only apologised because you wanted me to feel sorry for you having fucking cancer!  In the one place you deserved it to get it!" That is probably the lowest most disgusting thing she could have said. She will never have Brian or Justin in her life again after saying that.

"No longer listening to you, you abusive bitch!"  Mel glares at her.  "So glad that Gus will have nothing to do with you either!" Well said, Mel!!

Well, I hope Deb's happy with only Mikey in her life because she just blasted everyone else out of her life!

Looking forward to more!

Deb

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 7

The thing is that I would have loved to see Emmett tell her exactly why she's wrong about it being Brian's fault.  Maybe someone should get Deb a mirror so she can see how hateful she's become?  How dare she say what she did.

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 9:35 pm Title: Chapter 7

Wow....you weren't kidding in the least. How can Deb face herself in the mirror after saying such cruel shit?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 7:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

You're right, C7 is hard to read, but it's the true sign of a talented author: make the reader FEEL the pain, the joy, the pleasure, in short, the Life!

Great job because I was feeling Brian's pain, as well as Mel's and Hunter's!!!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 7:21 pm Title: Chapter 7

Whoa!!! I thought we went thru some major trauma, but this is a disaster for Brian.

How could Deb do that to him? That's right, Michael got it from her and his actual father who didn't live to spread the truth either.

I loved the reactions from Mel, Hunter, Ben and Emmett. Ted already knowing, he couldn't act surprised, but helped to clarify Deb's lies.

Deb is worse than Joan, because she did it on purpose, each and every time. Joan was too weak and/or drunk.

Reviewer: Kateeni Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 7

Wow...just wow.   Not what I was expecting, but very good.  I probably shouldn't have read this chapter at the office.   If I as a reader had a hard time reading this,  I can't imagine what you went through writing it.  Great job.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 6

The drama starts to unveil and it's not pretty!

Mel, Ben, Hunter, Ted and Emmett are such strong support for Justin and Brian; it would be overwhelming if it wasn't in this horrific context.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  C7 is unpleasant just a heads up.  Hope you continue to enjoy.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 6:41 pm Title: Chapter 7

Holy FUCKING SHITBALLS!!!!!! I want to reach through the computer screen, and throttle Deb! No...not enough...I want to reach into he rthroat with my balled up fist, grab onto ner vocal chords and rip them out! I want to slap her across the face sor freaking hard that she'll still fell it next freaking year!

O.......M..............F...............G! She is as bad as Joan, if not worse! At least Brian KNEW whatJoanwas like. He thought he had a mother in Deb. Now he actually knows the truth. OMG...Please don't let him suffer to long the trauma that is Deb. I hope it really doesn't trumatize him too much and that he is able to withstand the rest of these sessions. And PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, make Deb SUFFER the pain of a gazzilion firey ants eating at her twat! 

adn for teh gang to find out about the cancer they way they did.Mel's reaction in particular was so touching and heartfelt. I'm so glad that they are on teh same side in this one.

OK...I'm a bit emotional after reading that. I need to go back and read it again though. Fuck me! I'm so bloody freaking pissed off! LOL.

Dayum that was a most excellent chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 6

So disappointed in Deb. It's a travesty that she seems to want to cling to the idea that her son can do no wrong, or that if he doesn, it's only due to someone else's actions or behaviour. Naturally she points fingers at Brian sadly enough. Apparently there's a price to pay for and assistance that she may give, and I guess being forever indebted to not only her bu to Michael is that price. Constantly having to clean up his messes or to at least forgive/excuse all his antics.

Hot DAMN! Carl was great! Loved his parting shot at Deb! hehehe. Oh I bet that is going to stick in her craw! I'm assuming that she will blame Brian and Justin for his leaving her? 

Man....Vic must be looking down on them right now and be so disappointed in Deb and Micheal.

Ted and Blake as well showed their convictions. Really proud of them both!

So much information coming out about the backstory in each update. It's facinating! Will Deb ever come around or will she remain as she is, completely blinded by a "mother's devotion" to her son. Will she ever learn that true devotion comes from making the child accountable and independant.

Most excellent!!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 9:35 am Title: Chapter 6

Wow!  Go Carl.  He just told the truth Debs.  She really does have blinders on when it comes to Michael. 

I hope that Brian and Justin can be happy soon.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 5:51 am Title: Chapter 6

I'm beginning to think Deb's problem with the whole situation is she's feeling guilty. She knows deep down that she is at least partly to blame for Michael being the way he is and she just can't bring herself to admit it to anyone.

"Actually Debs, he stopped me from drinking it all."  Ted smiles at Blake.   "If I had, then I would've been dead.  I chose to take GHB. I could've said no but I didn't.  This is not Blake's fault!  I've forgiven him, why can't you?"  You are so awesome for touching on so many of the points that drove me crazy! Blake did try to stop him but nobody ever knew that except Ted. Now I will admit that Ted's memory could have been screwed up because of the drug and the coma so that could be why it was never revealed to the others in the series. They did at least have Blake tell Ted that he did call for the ambulance and waited to be sure they found Ted. So glad you have Ted acknowledging all this and letting the others know.

Well, Lindsay now knows for certain what it feels like to have someone give her a pseudo apology!

I wonder who Michael thought he was going to get any sympathy from with the comment about Carl would tell lies about him.

Thank goodness Carl stood up to Deb and told her exactly what her son truly is.

Looking forward to more!

Deb

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 12:39 am Title: Chapter 6

So Michael, if I've got this right, took advantage of Brian and was staying at the loft while Brian was away?  Lindsay drugged Justin and placed him in a sling and Michael hit her over the head to make it look like it was all her?  Michael not realizing his fingerprints was on the trophy was stupid.  Even stupider is Deb defending Michael.  Timewise when did Ben leave Michael before this all went to shit?

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2017 12:25 am Title: Chapter 6

Is Deb for real here? She is doing some serious victim blaming and that's not cool.



Author's Response:

Yes she is and guess who she blames for Carl walking away?  So glad you're reading this too.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 6

Need to know why Michael is the way he is just look at Deb trying to blame Brian and you can see it started with her, she can't stand anyone knowing about her being upset about Michael bringing up Vic but she wants to know everything about Brian and Justin just like Michael and Lindsay<smh>

Seriously you want to hurt these three don't tell them anything they instantly revert to a two-year old throwing a tantrum at MacDonald's.

Quite eye-opening the report Carl gave everyone after Michael and Lindsay left, no one needs to see Michael gloating for what he almost did and wishes he could still do or Lindsay trying to play victim again.

All three of them (Yes I include Deb) are so jealous, petty and vindictive about Brian being in love with Justin for their own selfish reasons.

Smart move for Carl to walk away because Deb doesn't want to change she wants back the control she had and she will hurt anyone to get it.

Too bad she can't be charged aswell for all the games she played because I bet she was whispering in Michael's ear that Brian would choose him after all they did for him???

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 9:44 pm Title: Chapter 5

Brian and Justin seem to be on the road to recovery as a couple. I love how Brian highlights what Justin is doing as before. It only shows that he was very attentive to what Justin was doing, even simple things as a leg over his own or sweat pants borrowed.

I'm so relieved by Ben and Hunter's testimony; they are honest.

Ted's laughter was so funny, so inappropriate to the context and so genuine that it allowed the pressure to come down a little. It's true it was an epic moment in the series (I remember Brian's beautiful hand over Ted's head and then the assault on the bed).

Mel is as sharp as usual, but for once, it's not against Brian.

Deb is awful in this. I thought after the "Vic" incident with Michael she would have understood, but no, she still charges Brian with guilt.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2017 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 5

Yay!!! Justin's getting better!!

"What? You were going to say 3!" That is so Brian! LOL!

So happy that Mel finally sees that Michael would either lie or exaggerate everything Brian said or did and that she told Debbie.

Deb still flip-flops about Michael. She won't look at him but she still tries to defend him!

Michael has the gall to ask where Brian and Justin are? Wow! Sure glad Ted put him in his place. Then there goes Deb shoving her nose where it doesn't belong making Michael think she's on his side, but fortunately Emmett speaks up and then Ben just shuts her down!

"We have the right to know!"  Debs folds her arms. I always knew that was where Mikey got it from!

Way to go Hunter! Smack down on Debbie and Lindsay!

Gotta love Ted! I can see him trying not to laugh and failing which sets off Brian, Justin and the rest! I love that scene in the hospital!

Ha! Mikey stuck his foot in his mouth big time!!!

This is an awesome story!

Deb

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2017 5:15 pm Title: Chapter 5

Michael is a dumbass! Lindsay needs to get over herself! Deb needs to buy a clue because all her old intimidation tactics aren't working this time!

Love how everyone is seeing how what they did individually lead to the problems Brian and Justin had, and how the truth was sitting there but they all chose to ignore it to keep the peace.

Mel apologizing to Brian for how she treated him because of her own insecurities is a good start to her moving past how she allowed Lindsay to manipulate her and took it out on Brian when she gave in instead of fighting back.

They all needed to laugh to alleviate the self-righteousness coming off Michael, Lindsay and Deb.

Deb better be prepared for what is about to come her way cause it time she faced the hand she played in this and the consequences for her blindness when it comes to Michael.

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