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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2017 9:05 pm Title: Plans are Afoot

A great start. The whole family is going on a vacation. They seem to need it. 

Reviewer: Dailani Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2017 1:57 pm Title: Plans are Afoot

Great story! Love it sooo much! Brian, Justin, originals - they are perfect! 

thank you!

And I really hope that for the one of the next stores you will chose one of this plot bunnies: http://www.kinnetikdreams.com/Adminftp/eFiction355/viewstory.php?sid=356&chapter=59 or http://www.kinnetikdreams.com/Adminftp/eFiction355/viewstory.php?sid=356&chapter=77

 



Author's Response:

Hiya...oh yes that one is on my list of stories to write!

So glad you enjoyed Cruise, it was a joy to write!

MissMerlot

Reviewer: lizmaccb Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2017 10:20 am Title: Plans are Afoot

such a great story. i love everything you write. While I hate to see this one end I can't wait to see what is next from you. Well done!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2017 8:10 pm Title: Plans are Afoot

I'm hooked on another one.  Gus is so damn cute 

Michael is going to hate that the whole family is coming.  Im glad Lindsay isn't in this.

I'm confused about Britin.  If he hasnt met Justin yet, how does he live there?



Author's Response:

He bought it after Lindsay walked away. And about Lindsay...

Happy reading...it will be fun honest!

MissMerlot

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2017 1:17 pm Title: Plans are Afoot

Amazing start...although someone is missing...lets see where he is..???  awesome story line...thank u for the great work.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 8:50 pm Title: Plans are Afoot

I'm already hooked for this story... this is gonna be FUN!!!! I wanna be on that cruise just to see it all!!!! :) 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 7:59 pm Title: Plans are Afoot

This is another wonderful start and a delightful end of chapter!

This relation between Brian and his son is beautiful. Emmett, Ted and Debbie are quite realistic concerning Michael who is already a pain in the ass!

I can't imagine Mel finding out what Lindsey did, in fact she didn't do what she was supposed to.

Reviewer: Erbear4474 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 3:16 am Title: Plans are Afoot

OMG! OMG! I'm so excited about this story, need more.  I can't wait for Brian and Justin's "meet cute"!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 2:39 am Title: Plans are Afoot

Oh now this is delicious.  Brian and Mel?  Mikey cheating to get Brian alone on a cruise?  I'm so glad that Ted and Emmett and Vic are going along and best of all Deb, Mel and Gus are going too.

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 1:04 am Title: Plans are Afoot

Poor Mickey, getting c*ckblocked even before the trip starts. (EWWW I need Brain Bleach now with the visual I gave myself)

 

Glad that he is bringing Mel, Gus, Vic and Deb along. 

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 12:14 am Title: Plans are Afoot

Very nice start!

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 12:14 am Title: Plans are Afoot

I love it!!! So happy you snatched this little bunny up. Can't wait to read more!

Deb Tanner

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