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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2017 8:26 am Title: Pitching and Bitching

And even less time for Michael. 

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2017 4:05 pm Title: Pitching and Bitching

Great great great.....😁

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2017 3:42 pm Title: Pitching and Bitching

poor wittle Mikey... not getting his own way... LOVE it!!!

Gus taking such care and having a good fashion eye for his daddy is just so awesome.

Dont get me wrong, I love Brian and Justin, but Gus is by far my favorite... when the three of them are together... just such a happy cookie!!!

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 11:14 am Title: Pitching and Bitching

I see you're at it again my lovely....this is shaping up to be a great story.



Author's Response:

Thank you, so glad you're reading.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2017 11:19 pm Title: Pitching and Bitching

Michael is getting more and more annoying! How can Brian not explode at this behaviour?

I love the relation you built between Mel and Brian.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2017 10:06 pm Title: Pitching and Bitching

This is so much fun. All the obstacles in Michael way are so funny, may he gets lost on the island and no one notices. In the beginning I thought Vanguard wanted Brian out of town so they could steal some business now it looks like Brian might steal theirs.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2017 9:57 pm Title: Pitching and Bitching

Awesome move by Mel keeping Michael away from Brian and she didn't even appear to do it intentionally, just simply mentioned that ‘we' were on the Beach Deck. Ha!

Michael is such a selfish jerk! Gus will NEVER be his stepson!!!!! (I think I'm safe saying that since I'm pretty certain you would never do that to Gus and Brian.)

Gus is definitely Brian's son because not only does he know fashion but he also knows how to make a pitch!

Wow! Mikey could be on a free shopping spree with everyone else but instead choses a comic book store. Does he really think he's a grown-up?

Love how Brian puts a stop to Mikey's tantrum, letting him know in plain words that he will never answer to Mikey for anything he does.

Those bands are very impressive! Something like that would even help senior citizens.

It sounds like Mikey might be spending a lot of time alone on this cruise! Yay!

Can't wait for more!

Deb

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2017 9:51 pm Title: Pitching and Bitching

Looks like this is going to be a working holiday.  Winning the cruise lines advertising will be a feather in Brian's cap.  But Michael is against it while everyone else thinks it's a good idea.  The shopping trip was unbelievable and all free!  I wish I could win a trip like that.  Michael, of course, decides to buy, buy, buy, but he needs Brian to be there to be put on the prize bill.  Thank you for having Brian's phone put in Leather Bear's pocket.  Love the button that can keep Gus safe.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2017 7:08 pm Title: Pitching and Bitching

Ethan is so creepy, Michael is such a Dumbass!

Brian doing the pitch for Seabird is going to be good because he is a genius and Vance deserves egg on his face.

Michael not knowing about the unlimited spending is a good thing, I wonder if Custard and Rhubarb would like to rub up against Michael and sleep on his bed? lol

I like the band that would be a great idea for schools especially when they are on trips at big places with other schools and huge visitors it is quite easy for kids to get lost or separated  from their groups, especially when they are out with family.

Michael cockblocked again rofl

I am So Loving This Story :)

 

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