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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2017 5:22 pm Title: Sabotage, Foot Massage and Betrayal

That's so bad. 

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 6:26 am Title: Sabotage, Foot Massage and Betrayal

Thank god...micheal got caught...grear going..poor brian best friend betraying like that..😦😟

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2017 12:58 am Title: Sabotage, Foot Massage and Betrayal

The friendship between Gus and Cynthia is so sweet.

Poor Gus; being sick is hard enough but to also lose Leather Bear makes it even more difficult. But Cynthia is absolutely right! Leather Bear would never reveal Gus' secrets. Hope they find him soon. The little guy needs his best buddy!

OMG! The boards were destroyed! Damn good thing Justin made duplicates! He saved the pitch!!! Let's just hope Brian doesn't kill the asshole responsible. They don't need for him to be in jail!

"Yes I'm coming, I'm coming!"  Mel laughs.

"Thank you momma. Oh wait, momma, you said that earlier to Miss Leda. What were you bringing her?"  Gus asks as the room goes dead silent and Mel and Leda go bright red.

Wow!  HAHAHA! Wow indeed!!!

"Now daddy, tell me how you think your bitch is going to go?  And do you need Leather Bear for good luck?"  Yeah, I'd give him that one, too! Gotta love Gus!!

Franc is on the warpath; everyone beware!

Awwww! Gus and Brian have matching painted toenails! That is the sweetest thing!

Ohhhh! Mikey is dead meat! It's a miracle he's still able to walk after getting punched by both Ted and Cynthia. He's damn lucky that Brian didn't punch him!

Yay! Mikey's going home!

This is so much fun! Off to read another chapter!

Deb

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2017 4:18 pm Title: Sabotage, Foot Massage and Betrayal

Excellent chapter!!

I love this: “Yes I’m coming, I’m coming!”  Mel laughs. “Thank you momma. Oh wait, momma, you said that earlier to Miss Leda. What were you bringing her?”  Gus asks as the room goes dead silent and Mel and Leda go bright red.

Vic and Brian: I would love to have a story which would have them as the main duo, to explain this pseudo father/son relationship they have, just like the one Brian has with Deb.

Gus about his smiley father with Mr Justin: he seems very observant to what happens to his dad.

Michael is getting what he deserves; so happy that Brian was able to do his pitch and that the mess is cleared.

Reviewer: Marny Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2017 9:04 pm Title: Sabotage, Foot Massage and Betrayal

Woww very long chapter. I started reading this morning in bed, but I had to stop because of work. Now in bed reading before going to sleep. Great chapter. Finally bye bye Michael.

Thanks * hugs *



Author's Response:

You'd think he'd take the hint right?  Hope you continue to enjoy.

*hugs* MissMerlot

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2017 12:55 pm Title: Sabotage, Foot Massage and Betrayal

Wow!  It's hard to believe that Michael could be that devious.  And to think he almost got away with it.  Gus will be happy, I don't think he ever really liked Unca Mikey.  But what about Gold?  Surely he knew his card was missing and where is the extra band?  Are is it a mystery?

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2017 12:12 pm Title: Sabotage, Foot Massage and Betrayal

I want tonthroat punch that douche-hat! What the fuck did he think he'd accomplish with that stunt?

gus is so damn cute...

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2017 4:46 am Title: Sabotage, Foot Massage and Betrayal

Michael got punched twice and he is lucky it wasn't Brian because he would be dead!!

Happy that Brian sought comfort with Justin instead of a trick just goes to show how much Justin has come to mean to him.

Glad that Ethan will soon be dealt with and despite Michael throwing a temper tantrum and almost destroying the pitch that everything turned out Great.

Gus being sick, getting better and painting his Daddy's toenails with Mr. Justin was so sweet :)

Now they can just enjoy the rest of the cruise without the Whiny Bitch chasing after Brian.

Awesome Chapter!! :)

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