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Reviewer: Mysid Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2018 3:12 pm Title: Coming Home

Just FYI: The cruise ship couldn’t dock in Pittsburgh.  Pittsburgh is far inland, away from any coast. It is on a river, but that river isn’t navigable by that large of a ship. It would be more realistic if the ship docked in Miami or New York (the two largest cruise shop port on the East Coast), and then everyone flew back to Pittsburgh from there.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2017 8:54 am Title: Coming Home

Lindsay is back? Damn, I was hoping she would stay away. 

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2017 9:28 am Title: Coming Home

" a bitchy witch with a slack twat " omg...that one was good.

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2017 9:41 pm Title: Coming Home

Poor Gus; it was heartbreaking to read the separation with his Mr Justin who found something to help the long 7 days and nights to go by faster.

Oh no, the wicked bitch is back.

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2017 10:47 pm Title: Coming Home

The Wicked Witch of the West is back!! 

It was to good to be true for her staying out of the lives of Brian and Gus. 

I guess she will find Justin in her way guarding Gus like a pitbull. Let him rip her head off and let Brian do the same to Widdle Whiney Wankerboy. 

Most likely they will try to do their worst but I know the entire Liberty Av family AND the Seabird crew will do everything they can do to foil each attempt.

Gus, the untold star of this story, can count himself lucky to have such a family.

Can't wait for the next update.

XOXO

Meriam

 

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2017 5:09 am Title: Coming Home

"Enough already! You're hips are moving and he's starting to climb!" He hisses.  LOL! I could picture this very easily!

Holy crap! Lindsay!!! Yikes! And she's with Mikey! Double Yikes!! That bitch can only mean trouble!

Cynthia is Awesome! (Yes that's Awesome with a capital A!)

Deb



Author's Response:

I am bowing down to the awesomeness, with a Capital A, because of the plot bunny you let me have.

Glad you are enjoying it.

Nicole xx

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2017 4:35 am Title: Coming Home

Gus is happy, happy.  Where has Lindsay been and why is Michael stalking Brian?

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