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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2017 9:27 am Title: Nitpicking, Picnicking and Rose's Tongue has Thorns

He must be a saint. That's the only explanation. 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2017 11:58 pm Title: Nitpicking, Picnicking and Rose's Tongue has Thorns

David there are those who deserve a chance and then there are others shouldn't be given one at all.

Michael has abused David's trust, home, kindness, generosity, patience it is time to kick Michael back to the curb where he belongs.

Michael only wants what he wants and after his continued rude behavior I would act like I never saw him before.

Good for George to tell off Michael too bad Michael only hears the voices in his head. (Though He Is Not Crazy)

Andrew and Grady seem like fun and it was nice of Andrew to buy David New clothes to replace the ones that got wet lol

Love that Gus is calling Michael Mr. Michael perhaps Gus is calling him that because Michael hasn't been much of an Uncle and at four he is not going to continue to placate Michael and his silliness anymore<giggles>

Despite Michael's antics it was a very sweet chapter :)



Author's Response:

Oh that Gus paragraph is eerie...you've been visiting again haven't you?

MissMerlot

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2017 6:11 pm Title: Nitpicking, Picnicking and Rose's Tongue has Thorns

These "family" scenes are wonderful to read. New members are coming in regularly.

Grady and his "father" are going to make a huge shadow over Michael's future. Too bad he wasn't able to make some effort to calm David.

Poor Gus and Justin, getting the flu; at least, Brian was able to take care of them.

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2017 4:52 pm Title: Nitpicking, Picnicking and Rose's Tongue has Thorns

Ooh new guy! Yeah!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2017 12:28 pm Title: Nitpicking, Picnicking and Rose's Tongue has Thorns

I never thought I could feel sorry for David, but I do.  I have a feeling that Andrew and Grady are going to be additional cast members.  This is one interesting chapter and I wonder if Mr. Mikey knows he has one more chance?

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2017 10:59 am Title: Nitpicking, Picnicking and Rose's Tongue has Thorns

David is a saint.  I don't know how he can even stand Michael at this point.

It was so sweet of Brian to take such good care of Justin and Gus while they were sick. 

 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2017 6:11 am Title: Nitpicking, Picnicking and Rose's Tongue has Thorns

David , get out while you still can.

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