Date: Nov 19, 2017 9:42 pm Title: Gus Asks A Question
Gus organized everyone. That's so great.
Date: Nov 19, 2017 9:09 pm Title: Off to the Island and Back in Pittsburgh
Their first time and Brian on the bottom. He must be in love.
Date: Nov 19, 2017 8:38 pm Title: Storm and Calm
I have a feeling that Michael and Ethan won't stay away.
Date: Nov 19, 2017 5:22 pm Title: Sabotage, Foot Massage and Betrayal
That's so bad.
Date: Nov 19, 2017 4:31 pm Title: Counting Down...to the Pitch Obviously!
Oh that was a great joke on Justin's part. What is Michael planning to do now?
Date: Nov 19, 2017 3:34 pm Title: A Little More Conversation
They are so cute together.
Date: Nov 19, 2017 3:02 pm Title: Wine, Whine and Parental Fail
Those comics are not for kids. Surely Michael must have known that.
Date: Nov 19, 2017 2:41 pm Title: The Bitch, The Pitch and The Smudge
I love that Brian tells him how it's supposed to be.
Date: Nov 19, 2017 1:37 pm Title: Sofa So Good
OMG I'm laughing so hard at Michaels bad luck. That nobody even missed him is very telling.
Date: Nov 19, 2017 9:53 am Title: Fishing and BBQ
Can you contain Michael for the whole story? I can't wait for Justin to eat the oysters.
Date: Nov 19, 2017 8:26 am Title: Pitching and Bitching
And even less time for Michael.
Date: Nov 19, 2017 7:58 am Title: Reading, Hunting and Fishing
All the flirting going on is so adorable.
Date: Nov 18, 2017 10:45 pm Title: Captain Oh My Captain!
Gus is just too cute.
Date: Nov 18, 2017 10:27 pm Title: Rhubarb, Gus and Brian
Does Brian know that Michael thinks they should be alone on the cruise?
Date: Nov 18, 2017 9:56 pm Title: And We're Off and it's Definitely...We!
Michael just can't seem to get his way. It's just too funny.
Date: Nov 18, 2017 9:05 pm Title: Plans are Afoot
A great start. The whole family is going on a vacation. They seem to need it.
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2017 1:07 pm Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
Just read this entire story and couldn’t put it down! Another triumph! Thank for continuing to write your B & J stories. Well I’m off to start reading your new ones! 😘
Date: Nov 07, 2017 2:48 pm Title: Let's Party...Part 2
Omg I never thought I'd get to a spot where I have to wait for the next chapter. This is so good. Keep writing!!! AWESOME JOB!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I've only been writing for just over a year and love it. Glad you are enjoying it.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 30, 2017 3:04 pm Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
I just finished reading your story. I always wait until a story is completed before reading so I wait until the end to leave a review. I absolutely love your work and look forward to reading more of it. You introduce such rich characters into the family. Of course anti Mikey and Lindz is done so purposefully. Thank you for sharing your talents with all of us!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 28, 2017 9:11 pm Title: Dinner
Wow! Lindsay has been gone two years and Melanie is still pregnant! Damn! Brian has some super sperm! Although if I was Melanie, his sperm would never 'do the backstroke up my fallopian tubes' again! Lol...loving this story though. You are the undisputed queen of the Mikey/Lindsay smack down!!!
Love it!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2017 11:47 pm Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
Loved it and the recipes
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Sourcing the recipes did slow the writing down a tad as I stopped to drool...
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 18, 2017 9:15 pm Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
WOW that was a great story and I'm so sorry to see it end.
Thank you for this
Date: Oct 18, 2017 3:49 pm Title: He Keeps Trying and Cruising to Their New Lives
I suppose all good things must eventually come to an end. *sniff*
Sorry for not reviewing previous chapter, I was away for a few days and only had my phone. The bull was...I have no words. I highly doubt that Micheal would ever get the metaphor behind it. I laughed my ass off though.
Christmas with the whole gang, family etc was lovely. Best of all the little shit wasn't there. Amazing how a person can delude himself to such a degree. You'd think after being told point balnk on numerous occassions, he might get it. Not him though, he schemes, manipulates and excuses his actions, or blames others. Sheesh. I wonder if the phone will finally make it click. I some how doubt it for some reason.
What a wonderful life they are all going to have now. Deb, Carl, Vic, Rodney et al at Britin and the others on the ship. *sigh*
All's well that ends well as they say, and this ended well for all. Maybe not in Michael;s eyes, but really...do we care about hsi opinion? ;)
Another WONDERFUL story! Will of course be adding it to my Kindle for future reading.
Thank you!! thank you for sharing this with us. It's such a treat to have deliciously long chapters, in a brilliantly long story that has so much intruigue, angst, passion, laughter etc (I could go on forever)
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Oct 18, 2017 1:57 pm Title: Plans are Afoot
Great story! Love it sooo much! Brian, Justin, originals - they are perfect!
thank you!
And I really hope that for the one of the next stores you will chose one of this plot bunnies: http://www.kinnetikdreams.com/Adminftp/eFiction355/viewstory.php?sid=356&chapter=59 or http://www.kinnetikdreams.com/Adminftp/eFiction355/viewstory.php?sid=356&chapter=77
Author's Response:
Hiya...oh yes that one is on my list of stories to write!
So glad you enjoyed Cruise, it was a joy to write!
MissMerlot
Date: Oct 18, 2017 10:20 am Title: Plans are Afoot
such a great story. i love everything you write. While I hate to see this one end I can't wait to see what is next from you. Well done!