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Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 8:50 pm Title: Plans are Afoot

I'm already hooked for this story... this is gonna be FUN!!!! I wanna be on that cruise just to see it all!!!! :) 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 8:23 pm Title: And We're Off and it's Definitely...We!

Yeah, Blake is there with Leda, Rodney and  Carl!!

I love this line, showing the relationship between Mel and Brian: “Yes Gus, definitely knock!”  Mel snickers and Brian sticks his tongue out.

Eww, Ethan, Ian I mean!

“Leather Bear”: only Brian could come up with that!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 7:59 pm Title: Plans are Afoot

This is another wonderful start and a delightful end of chapter!

This relation between Brian and his son is beautiful. Emmett, Ted and Debbie are quite realistic concerning Michael who is already a pain in the ass!

I can't imagine Mel finding out what Lindsey did, in fact she didn't do what she was supposed to.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 4:41 pm Title: And We're Off and it's Definitely...We!

Michael's self serving plans are already falling apart. thank goodness! He's going to get blocked at every conceivable opportunity I hope. Should make for some really amusing times. for us at least, ;) His "misunderstanding" (lol) re: Brian's suit was funny! What an assumption that was! I mean really...too funny for words.

So pretty much everyone is going on the cruise, and almost all will have a wonderous time. I'm thinking Ian...er, Ethan and Michael will be amongst the few who won't but then again....who cares!

Justin will aready have an "in" with Gus. However, being the lovely man he is, won't be using it to his advantage as many others would. The child whisperer is the perfect place for him. 

So I'm guessing that Rodney will meet vic, Carl, Deb, Ted, blake...Mel, Leda. (always like her)

Let the games begin!! Another story to sink our teeth into. Am so looking forward to everything that you have up your sleeve. should be a great trip.

Will Lindsey and Sam become a part of it as well? Hmmmmmmm....

thank you!! So looking forward to updates on both of these! 

cheers,

 

Elaine

Reviewer: Erbear4474 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 3:16 am Title: Plans are Afoot

OMG! OMG! I'm so excited about this story, need more.  I can't wait for Brian and Justin's "meet cute"!

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 3:15 am Title: And We're Off and it's Definitely...We!

Fabulous beginning.   Hopefully Mikey will fall overboard?!

Love the friendship/family of Mel and Brian.

Thanks for sharing.

JoAnn

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 2:57 am Title: And We're Off and it's Definitely...We!

Hehe.  Michael's having no luck at all.  And the gangs all here, can't wait to see how you get them together.  

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 2:56 am Title: And We're Off and it's Definitely...We!

Awesome chapter! Love Justin the 'kid charmer'! And it looks like Mel might have a very nice time on this cruise as well! I always thought she belonged with Leda. They were a much better fit than Mel and Lindsay.

Poor Brian! Stuck with both Mikey and Ian... I mean Ethan. :)

I can tell Michael is his usual delusional self. How he could think that Brian would ever want him always amazes me.

Nice to see that Rodney got to take the cruise as well and hopefully will get to meet Vic. Love that he drug Carl with him!

Wonder if Teddy has any plans to meet up with a certain blond named Blake? And what about Emmett? Wonder who he will get to meet. :)

Looking forward to much, much more!

Deb Tanner

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 2:39 am Title: Plans are Afoot

Oh now this is delicious.  Brian and Mel?  Mikey cheating to get Brian alone on a cruise?  I'm so glad that Ted and Emmett and Vic are going along and best of all Deb, Mel and Gus are going too.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 2:24 am Title: And We're Off and it's Definitely...We!

Thanks Michael!!

Due to your machinations everyone got to come on the cruise and he should really enjoy that glimpse of Brian's Suite because he is not getting in That Bed!!!!

Justin is the Kid-Tamer and Ian the chin rat is a sleaze... Good to Know lol

Nice introduction of Blake, Leda, Rodney and Carl hopefully it will be a few chapters before Lindsay and Sam show up.

Already Loving These Two Stories and Looking Forward To More :)

 

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 1:04 am Title: Plans are Afoot

Poor Mickey, getting c*ckblocked even before the trip starts. (EWWW I need Brain Bleach now with the visual I gave myself)

 

Glad that he is bringing Mel, Gus, Vic and Deb along. 

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 12:14 am Title: Plans are Afoot

Very nice start!

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2017 12:14 am Title: Plans are Afoot

I love it!!! So happy you snatched this little bunny up. Can't wait to read more!

Deb Tanner

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