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Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2017 3:57 pm Title: Chapter 8

I love that Michael can't even fathom that Brian would bottom to anyone... especially Justin... that should speak volumes, but then again, Michael would have to read those volumes and he's just too dumb 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2017 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 8

I don't think Michael is clever enough to do the right thing. Or sane enough. 

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 11:26 am Title: Chapter 8

I think people should stop talking to Michael.  He doesn't seem to understand words.  Suggest stick figures on plain unlined paper.  Preferably in crayon so he can truly gave a chance of understanding.  How many different ways can one say, leave Brian alone?? At least Mom came, maybe he gets it now. Ugh! He should just go to jail.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2017 6:35 pm Title: Chapter 8

I think Charles was an excellent choice  to give Michael some cold hard truths. Whether he ever takes anything to heart, who's to know. Michael more than likely see him as too Pro-justin, but, what he said was excellent. 

Brian puking on Michael was..........EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!! bloody well nearly peed myself laughing. Another one of those scenes you wish you could actually see. LOL.

Was HUGELY impressed with Deb including herself in the assumption that they know everything. Her parting words to him were definitely ones that should make him stop and think. Not sure whether he will or not. He always seems to have the idea that nobody would ever follow through with threats. That nobody would ever go against him, yadda yadda yaddda. I'd laugh myself silly if Deb actually did open the store! LOL.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2017 5:32 pm Title: Chapter 8

The whole chapter is great and I really loved these parts:

Michael stood there blocking the alley, and well, the baby seemed to think Michael needed a little something extra. I think I vomited breakfast and lunch, and maybe a late night snack that I had thought was a good idea. Michael stood there staring at me, shaking out his shirt.

“Fuck.” Was all I got out before puking in his hair. “This baby is going to be the death of me.” I tell him, hailing a cab and leaving him staring at me.

“How are you today my little hero?” Justin asks, as he kisses my belly.

 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2017 10:28 am Title: Chapter 8

Wow.  Charles was definitely nicer than I would have been.  Yes, go home Michael.  Even the baby doesn't like you.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2017 5:46 am Title: Chapter 8

That's telling the little  brat.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2017 3:08 am Title: Chapter 8

Love how Charles told Michael the truth.  Shame Michael doesn't take it in.

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