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Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2017 6:57 pm Title: Chapter 16

OMG, Brian eating everything, especially the sweets has me cracking up lol

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2017 1:23 pm Title: Chapter 16

Maybe Michael will get it this time. Okay I'm just kidding myself. 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2017 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 16

The level of maturity between Brandon, Ted and blake is what all ex's should strive for. nicely done. And talk about in your face to Michael. He has become even more pathetic that I even imagined! 

How will he be now that Justin and Brian are coming back to the Pitts? I imagine he'll get on some kind of roll. Certainly not what justin will need to put up with at this time. Brian will I know protect Justin from all things negative. Michael had better watch out!!

Brian has made incredible strides in his acceptance of Craig! WOW! Really impressive. That's great for Justin too.

Great chapter!!

Cheers

Elaine

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2017 12:21 am Title: Chapter 16

Michael needs a brain transplant - stat.  Some are so stupid, you just have to give up. 

Give Hanna a Cinnabon, then she will understand and sweets.  It's always nice to see a convert. 

This was sad to me.  The whole stupid drunken Mikey thing, juxtaposed against Craig who was bad but now is not, is hopeful tho. If Craig can change Mikey can.  Things are looking up, we've got hope.

 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2017 9:34 pm Title: Chapter 16

I'm glad Justin and Craig have gotten back their relationship.

Brandon and Ted are perfect for each other.  Michael is a total loser.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2017 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 16

Michael is all alone with his drinks now and he has 2 living examples of people who let go someone to be happy. He should think about that!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2017 4:44 am Title: Chapter 16

Michael will never get it and Brian is just happy with having his cake and eating it too.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2017 3:10 am Title: Chapter 16

YOU TELL HIM Brandon and Ted!!! Michael continues to be delusional but now we can add drunkard to the many names I call him. Similar to Hester Prynne in "The Scarlet Letter," Michael needs a letter on his chest. Although hers was an "A" his should be a great big ol' "L" for LOSER or a "J" for JACKASS or even an "M" for MORON or MASOCHIST, since he seems to crave the verbal ass kickings he continually brings on himself. But no matter, the best and most effective punishment for Michael is to see that everyone has moved on and are incredibly HAPPY without him. Everyone please welcome the Village Idiot back to the Land of Obscurity!

I really admire Brian here. He really understands both Craig facing his mortality and how Justin is going to feel when Craig passes. Personally, I couldn't say that I would be so forgiving. But the fact that he could still empathize with a person who treated him the way Craig had, is a true testament to Brian's growth and strength as a person.

It's also a testament to your gift as a writer to make me run the gamut of emotions as you so often do! Great job Star!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

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