Date: May 24, 2017 5:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
The whole chapter is great and I really loved these parts:
Michael stood there blocking the alley, and well, the baby seemed to think Michael needed a little something extra. I think I vomited breakfast and lunch, and maybe a late night snack that I had thought was a good idea. Michael stood there staring at me, shaking out his shirt.
“Fuck.” Was all I got out before puking in his hair. “This baby is going to be the death of me.” I tell him, hailing a cab and leaving him staring at me.
“How are you today my little hero?” Justin asks, as he kisses my belly.
Date: May 24, 2017 10:28 am Title: Chapter 8
Wow. Charles was definitely nicer than I would have been. Yes, go home Michael. Even the baby doesn't like you.
Date: May 24, 2017 5:46 am Title: Chapter 8
That's telling the little brat.
[Report This]Date: May 24, 2017 3:08 am Title: Chapter 8
Love how Charles told Michael the truth. Shame Michael doesn't take it in.
Date: May 22, 2017 8:24 pm Title: Chapter 7 Clash of the Blonds
Gotcha' Linds. Too funny she tried to fake amnesia then abandoned that and charged at him, lol. Alex, it's ok, you're a silver fox stay strong. Linds is a very special case.
Justin, you are so right and so wrong, taunting that poor unhinged failure, lol.
Date: May 22, 2017 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 6
I think narrator got it wrong. They laid in bed making out not making plans... cuz Ted and Brandon are certainly in the running for cutest couple. I hate that you fiction makes me wish I lived in the stories, lol. No one us as thoughtful as Ted just appeared. I'm jealous.
Poor Deb, sucks to be a Novotny, lol.
Linds is twisted metal, simply hopeless.
Date: May 22, 2017 4:04 pm Title: Chapter 7 Clash of the Blonds
Great analysis of Brian's way of "telling" what he feels: Justin can read Brian when he focuses on what's important.
Date: May 22, 2017 3:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
Well done Brandon: she needed to hear that from someone recent in the family.
Date: May 22, 2017 9:19 am Title: Chapter 7 Clash of the Blonds
I loved this scene. You wanted a WASP Lindsay well you got one that can play the game better than you.
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2017 2:15 am Title: Chapter 7 Clash of the Blonds
I'm loving this sequel! Great fic Darling!
Hugs Kathleen
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2017 12:08 am Title: Chapter 7 Clash of the Blonds
Justin played her like a violin. Wonder what she say if she found out that Brian was the one pregnant.
Date: May 20, 2017 3:26 am Title: Chapter 6
That was really sweet, good for Brandon.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2017 12:28 am Title: Chapter 6
Love how you had Ted turn away from Deb for Brandon. Brandon's mom won't offer unsoliced advice.
Date: May 20, 2017 12:26 am Title: Chapter 6
I'm so in love with Ted and Brandon. I love that Ted is happy.
Deb needs to mind her own business. Pronto!
Date: May 18, 2017 10:25 am Title: Chapter 5
I'm glad Emmett knows about Brian being pregnant. He can help protect him from both Lindsay and Michael.
Can't wait to see what Justin has in store for Lindsay.
Date: May 17, 2017 6:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
LOL! Poor Brian! I remember those days well. I still can't eat Snicker bars to this day because of the recurring nightmares when I was pregnant. Just as I would get ready to bite into it, it would blink its eyes open, frown and grow a pair of teeth. The faster I ran, the larger it got and began to chase me....LOL Yeah, pregnancy was a PAIN in more ways than one. Thank goodness, he's addicted to Hershey bars instead, LOL
I'm glad that Em knows about the pregnancy. I always love a protective Emmett. He was always underestimated but I always say a gay boy is tougher than any tough guy out there because they would have had to be to survive the ignorant. Gay or not, he's still a MAN! So, I look forward to seeing more of the Butch side of Emmett.
Man-oh-MAN!! Am I looking forward to a confrontation between Justin and Lindsay! She can't pull any wool over his eyes because he's seen the best and the worst the actress can be. She'll be so busy trying to prove herself right and threatening Justin that she will careen head first into the cement walls of prison. Not only will her rights to Gus be revoked but so will any hope for freedom due to mental illness. They probably won't even need to go to court. I can't wait until the WASP showdown! No doubt Justin's words and his unbothered countenance will sting Lindsay's fake ass real good!
And now we have Dumbass the First, screaming down the walls of Brian's office. Really, Sir?! REALLY?!!! Too bad the security men weren't able to carry stun guns. I would have paid good money to see Michael jerking, then Michael being carried out and dumped none-too-gently on the pavement outside of the building. He really is an idiot to the likes I've rarely seen, even in real life. The threat of Deb showing up had me ROLLING!! I hope she's still coming to Chicago so that she can punch the voice out of his throat. Maybe for good measure, she would be so kind to knock sense into Miles desperate, dumb ass too! It would serve him right for being a Mikey Jr.!
So so SOOOOOOoooooo GOOD! Can't wait for MORE!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: May 17, 2017 5:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
I loved how Emmett had Brian "begging" for candy and telling his secret! Excellent!
Date: May 17, 2017 9:26 am Title: Chapter 5
Naughty Em. Poor Brian. Sadly, I could have been bribed by those items preggers or not.
Lindsay, take her to court. She's going to try something if Justin shows up.
Michael and Miles, hysterical.. I'm sure you know 98% of men are terrified of their mothers, lol. Run Mikey, run.
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2017 4:59 am Title: Chapter 5
I can't wait to see how Lindsay deals with Justin talking to her. Michael is more afraid of his mom.
Date: May 16, 2017 4:52 am Title: Chapter 4
I'm thinking that maybe Miles is related to Mikey in some way. Hmmmm... maybe Deb actually had twins, gave one up for adoption thinking she could only handle one, and Miles is Mikey's fraternal twin!
Way to go, Emmett!! He got them to turn on each other and then fight, well sort of fight! Ha, Miles turned a hose on Mikey.
Uh-oh. Emmett has figured out that Brian's pregnant!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Deb
Date: May 15, 2017 8:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ha ha ha, Miles and Michael acting like 4 years old kids on the playground!
Yeah, Emmett found out the secret!
Date: May 15, 2017 6:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
Emmett was BRILLIANT! Oh I love him. He's always been one of my favorite character on the show. He's really trying to explain things to Miles. He's trying to clarify everything for him. Michael comes along and of course has to add his 2 bits. Anything that he previously said to Miles to get him on his side is now shot. He defeated his whole purpose of using Miles. they are both complete idiots! what a mess they are. Unreal. Both only see what they want to see. the fight between them though was hilarious and would've loved to see it. I'm sure I'd have been a big ol' mess from laughing.
Emmett put 2 and 2 together. He's figured out Brian's secret. Also glad he's going to Vegas with Charles! more happy couples. :)
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: May 15, 2017 10:21 am Title: Chapter 4
I love Emmett! Why would Miles believe anything a complete stranger told him? He's a complete idiot. Now we have a trio. lol
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2017 5:13 am Title: Chapter 4
You almost have to feel sorry for Miles for believing Michael.
Date: May 14, 2017 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
Busted already Michael. Miles and Mikeybcant be more pathetic. I love the checking for the damaged testicle, that was so sweet. I'm calling it, Justin's going be pregnant too. I Love it!