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Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 2

You're havin my baby... Oh p, how much fun.  I love pregnant Brian. Brandon is saw awesome in this story.  Brian should have told him, but a lot been goin on so, I can see it not coming up.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 8:02 pm Title: Chapter 3

Another great chapter! I'm glad Ted and Brandon spotted Michael! Now they will all know to keep an eye out for him and his new partner in dumbness, Miles. And Ted and Brandon are getting married! Yay!

Sure hope Justin survives Brian's pregnancy! He might not be able to sit down until after the baby is born! :)

So happy to hear that Mel, Ted and Brandon are going to parent Katie together.

Wonder if it will be decided to just turn Emmett loose on Mikey and Miles or if he will have to sneak off to kick their asses.

Looking forward to more!

Deb

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 3

Welcome to the world Katie!  I can't wait for Ted and Brandon to get married. :)

Now we just need to deal with Michael.  I say let Emmett go after him. ;)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 8:21 am Title: Chapter 3

Congrats to Mel and Ted! Can't wait to see who will find out next about Brian.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 8:04 am Title: Chapter 2

Lindsay is completely out in her own world. What a pain it must be for Alex to have to listen to her and Nancy.

As hard it must be for Justin to find out about the cancer, he knows Brian would have told him

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 4:44 am Title: Chapter 3

How nice that Mel had her baby and Ted along with Brandon.  Nice that Emmett wants to take Michael out.  Can you imagine Michael mind being blow when he finds out Brian is pregnant.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2017 3:42 am Title: Chapter 3

YAY!! Katie's here! Brandon, Ted and Mel are going to make fabulous co-parents! Plus Ted has found his forever with Brandon. I couldn't help beaming at that. Teddy deserves happiness and so much MORE!

Brian pregnant and horny is adorable, LOL Justin is going to have his hands FULL with Mr. Taylor-Kinney but at least he will have loads of support among the family.

I'm glad that Brandon and Ted saw Dumb the First before he saw them and have put the warning out there. I'm sure Michael was hoping for the element of surprise. He and Dumb the Sequel are in for a big letdown if they think it's going to be easy to get to Brian and Justin. I'm with Emmett... Michael needs his ass kicked! Both him and Miles have the IQ of a couple of plain M&Ms (sorry M&Ms. I love you but you have about the same nutritional value as Twinkies which are notoriously bad for one's sanity, LOL I'll be sure to grab a bag later though). I wonder if the 'Mom' Faction will be on their way to Chicago. The way I see it, the more to hand Michael his ass, the merrier for me to read!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2017 7:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

So glad Justin didn't freak out when he found out that Brian had cancer.

Well, well, well... why am I not surprised that Mikey wouldn't see his own behavior in Miles? They are both so delusional!

Lindsay - wow! She sounds like a sociopath with psychotic overtones! Poor Alex, having to listen to both Lindsay and Nancy!

Deb

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2017 4:31 am Title: Chapter 2

It's interesting that Michael can see how Miles is with Justin yet doesn't recognize himself being the same with Brian.  Lindsay lives in 'Lindsay land' and Alex sees that her mother had a lot to do with making her that way.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 6:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

What an event to come! Michael will have a heart attack when he will find out.

Glad Miles is out of the game, at least partially.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 8:51 am Title: Chapter 1

Brian is pregnant!!!!  Didn't see that one coming.  I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 3:57 am Title: Chapter 1

So much to say about this first chapter of IP!!!

First, Mikey and Mikey Jr both need to be put in a crate and shipped to Siberia with no one but each other's complaining ass for company! Hopefully both of them will end up in jail for whatever plots the two brain cells between the two of them, come up with. Desperate dumbasses! They should probably hook up and save other poor unsuspecting souls from being subjected to their brand of obsession. Hopefully Miles doesn't know where the new house is otherwise Brian and Justin could be moving again before they have a chance to get settled. Can't wait for Michael's head to explode when he finds out that Brian and Justin are indeed MARRIED!!

As for the Peterson women: I especially enjoyed reading about what has befallen all of them. It's way past time Ron had a brain and will of his own. Nancy must have pissed herself when she found out that she was NOT walking away from the marriage without a few thousand a month, if that. As for Lynette and her marriage-frenzy, well I'm thinking she is about to stay broke. Maybe she'll be qualified for a job at the Big Q, after all, Michael was. As for Lindsay, this trick just doesn't give up! Not only that but there is so much evidence to dispute her lies....SMH I wonder if the lawyer has been privy to that information or is he still in this losing battle because he was promised something beyond a paycheck. And so another episode of Dumbass Divas is about to premiere. There's a saying that the fall doesn't kill but the abrupt stop does.I'm certainly looking forward to that HARD STOP!

Love the idea that Brian and Justin are adding to their family... and this time it's Brian who is carrying their offspring! I know they weren't ready but, even with all that's coming, I think this is a good thing in so many ways. Brian has his chance to be there- to experience it all- from the beginning with Justin. Keeping with the Kinney persona, he'll probably be moody but again that's a good thing. Brian on a normal day doesn't suffer fools, so with Michael deciding that him and Miles should continue to try breaking up the Taylor-Kinneys, Brian will be less apt to sugarcoat his feelings. As for Justin, Dumb the First and Sequel are apt to get the business end of his fist and foot if they think to mess with his family. I wonder if Trina's other father will be any help in containing Miles. That should make an interesting twist plus Mel is there for backup.... YEAH, Mikey and his Twin-in-Delusion aren't ready for this!

Looking forward to MORE!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 2:16 am Title: Chapter 1

So Miles is beyond stupid and soon he will be hopefully sharing a cell with Michael who needs his Ass kicked along with Lindsay, Nancy and Lynnette, also hope because they are just as stupid that they share a cell with Lindsay.

Ron was smart to walk away and his family was smart to get a prenup.

Miles has no idea that by going down this route with Michael he is going to lose everything <smh> Stupid Is, As Stupid Does.

Brian is Pregnant!!! Way To Go Justin!! lol

Michael, Lindsay and Miles heads are going to Explode!! Might actually improve their look <giggles>

 

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 1:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Now that was a surprise.  Brian pregnant.  Michael has a problem and he's taking Mile's down with him.  So the Diner is now a Vegan Cafe?  Amazing.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2017 1:54 am Title: Chapter 1

This is off to a wonderful start. Can't wait to read more!

Deb

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