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Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2021 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 15

I'm so glad that Cole and Lex were caught red handed and dealt with. And Gus learned a valuable lesson as well.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2018 7:31 pm Title: Chapter 15

I can understand that Justin totally emerges himself in his work. If Brian is worried than its maybe time for a break. 



Author's Response: Time for a break if Justin is willing.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2018 4:52 pm Title: Chapter 14

I loved Brian's reaction. He has grown so much. Gus should listen to Bree. Apparently she has good taste in men. 



Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the interaction.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2018 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 13

That's great. It's over. Now someone has to tell Brian. I don't envy that person. 



Author's Response: I wouldn't want to be the one telling him.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2018 11:51 am Title: Chapter 12

Beau meeting Cole would be hilarious. Well not for Cole. Lol



Author's Response: How true.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2018 9:37 am Title: Chapter 11

I hope Gus doesn't get hurt during their plan. It's a good idea to have Drew there. 



Author's Response: Gus is going to be hurt, but hopefully not physically.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2018 9:24 am Title: Chapter 10

Poor Gus. But apart from Melanie everyone seems to be supporting him. 



Author's Response: That's what he needs at the moment, except for Melanie.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2018 9:14 am Title: Chapter 9

They all appreciate what Brian does for the community and want to help him. Let's hope the can stop Cole and Lex soon. 



Author's Response: It's good they all will stand with Brian.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2018 9:06 am Title: Chapter 8

I'm so glad Hunter heard Cole. Now he and Carl can do something to stop him. 



Author's Response: Let's hope so.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2018 9:06 am Title: Chapter 8

I'm so glad Hunter heard Cole. Now he and Carl can do something to stop him. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2018 8:52 am Title: Chapter 7

As soon as Cole breaks into the loft Brian will know it was him. Who else would know Gus' code and steal something. 



Author's Response: Exactly.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2018 8:39 am Title: Chapter 6

Justin's new idea sounds great. It's so sad that Gus thinks he has his first boyfriend and the guy is such an ass. 



Author's Response: Very sad for Gus.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2018 8:29 am Title: Chapter 5

Typical for the Kinney men to feel responsible for everything. Claire is right, children fall. That's a part of life. 



Author's Response: No one wants their child to be hurt, but Claire is right.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2018 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 4

Since Patrick will probably still be in pain I'm not sure if a party is the right thing to do. I hope Bree will understand that it really wasn't her fault. 



Author's Response: This is a hard one for Bree and Patrick both.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2018 5:28 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh no. I hope Patrick didn't hurt himself. 



Author's Response: Soon to be revealed.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2018 4:55 pm Title: Chapter 2

It's good that Brian is aware of Cole being in Pittsburgh. I doubt he can do anything to prevent Gus from seeing him though. 



Author's Response: That's going to be the issue.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2018 10:46 am Title: Chapter 1

Taking that ring was probably the biggest mistake Cole made. Brian would never keep something of no value. 



Author's Response: Just the beginning.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2017 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 15

And now we have an introduction to a new part of this series.  Except for Justin being totally involved in Fractals, things appear to be back to normal.



Author's Response: Back to normal - as normal as it gets. LOL

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2017 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 14

This chapter makes you think back at the beginning when Justin was the stalker that wouldn't go away and look at them now.  Wow.  I think Ray will be able to take Gus' mind off of Cole.  



Author's Response: Ray may just be able to do that.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2017 9:26 pm Title: Chapter 13

Yeah, it worked.  I like how JR is portrayed in this series.  She has more sense than her dad.  lol.  



Author's Response: Yes she does.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2017 7:25 pm Title: Chapter 12

Wish I had an Emmett near me.  Cooking would be a breeze.  Glad to see that Beau is taking care of things, it would have been funny if he got to go to Liberty Ave and saw Cole.  I agree that he probably would take a bite out of Cole.  Bree is such a flirt and she's only five.



Author's Response: I would like to see Beau confront Cole. LOL

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2017 2:27 pm Title: Chapter 12

Wish I had an Emmett near me.  Cooking would be a breeze.  Glad to see that Beau is taking care of things, it would have been funny if he got to go to Liberty Ave and saw Cole.  I agree that he probably would take a bite out of Cole.  Bree is such a flirt and she's only five.



Author's Response: I would love to have seen Beau meet Cole. Too bad we didn't do that.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2017 1:17 pm Title: Chapter 11

It's good that Brian doesn't know what's happening back in the Pitts.  Though thanks to everyone they have a plan in place.  In the meantime Justin will keep Brian occupied.



Author's Response: Yes, sometimes it's better to keep Brian away.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2017 12:54 am Title: Chapter 10

With Carl and everyone else's help they nab Cole before he manages to get more items.  Bree conned her daddy into giving her cookies and chocolate milk.  I'm not sure if that was a good thing or not.



Author's Response: Little con artists are everywhere.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2017 3:53 am Title: Chapter 9

Cole thinks he's getting away with it.  But I have a feeling that he'll soon be found out.



Author's Response: Let's hope so.

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