Reviews For After The Fall
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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 21, 2018 5:28 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh no. I hope Patrick didn't hurt himself. 



Author's Response: Soon to be revealed.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2017 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 3

Children will be children, whether they are five or sixteen.  I'm pleased the JR didn't weigh in causing more troubles.  She's one of the many nice characters in spite of her mom.



Author's Response: JR seems to have gotten the best from each of her parents.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2017 1:24 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh, no poor Patrick.  I hope he isn't hurt.  I don't like to see him and Brew fighting.  

Gus needs to be a kid but Brian's gut isn't usually wrong.  I do hope they have a chat soon.



Author's Response: Patrick and Bree will have their moments throughout this story.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2017 4:03 pm Title: Chapter 3

kids will be kids... and eventually Patrick and Bree will have that stage where they just bicker a bunch lol  the poor guys dealing with that!

Gus knows parts of this feel wrong.. but he is so insistent that he "be" with Cole... now he's lying, and he even admits to Cole not being what he REALLY wanted... :(

damn hormones! lol



Author's Response: You're right about the hormones. Patrick and Bree will have their moments throughout this story.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2017 4:25 am Title: Chapter 3

Yeah, Gus is busted! His father can smell BS so easily!

Patrick learns the hard way not to tease Briana.



Author's Response: True on both counts.

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