Date: May 14, 2017 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 7
As smart as Cole thinks he is, he can be easily caught since Gus didn't know (so he couldn't share the info) that the codes are assigned to a person and I'm sure they will use Gus' code when he is with his parents at some point and will be caught, but not after stealing plenty and destroying Gus' heart and Gus will learn a difficult lesson!
Author's Response: Gus will learn but it will be painful.
Date: May 14, 2017 1:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
Cole pilfering from the Loft alone would be enough for Brian to kick his ass.
Love the idea of the fractals series from Justin :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Cole is going to get what he deserves.
Date: May 14, 2017 6:38 am Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for this new chapter of the Sunshine's files! It's always a deep pleasure to follow this crazy family!
Author's Response: So glad you like it.
Date: May 14, 2017 6:18 am Title: Chapter 14
Great interactions between father and son! It allowed Gus to get closure and to re-open the path to Ray.
Author's Response: Exactly. Thank you.
Date: May 14, 2017 5:13 am Title: Chapter 13
Good job Carl!! Why Cole is so anti Briana?
Author's Response: Bree is on to him, I think.
Date: May 13, 2017 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
I'm very interested in Justin's new art idea.
No more loft! Cole is just going to keep using Gus. I hate that he is going to be broken hearted. I wish he'd meet a nice boy.
Author's Response: Gus has a hard lesson to learn.
Date: May 13, 2017 9:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
Lindsay was not who I expected Gus to talk to.
Brew is going to make a good doctor. She feels so responsible for what happened. It was an accident. He'll be okay.
Author's Response: We do throw a few surprises into our stories. LOL
Date: May 13, 2017 1:45 pm Title: Chapter 4
I hope Patrick isn't too overwhelemed by everyone coming for a visit. I'm sure Bree will take good care of him though. It wasn't really anyone's fault, boys will be boys as Steve said.
I do hope if Gus cannot confide in Brian or Justin he does confide in someone. Cole really is a bad influence and I don't want to see him force Gus into doing something he really doesn't want to do.
Author's Response: Cole is no good. And Patrick will be fine. LOL
Date: May 13, 2017 1:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh, no poor Patrick. I hope he isn't hurt. I don't like to see him and Brew fighting.
Gus needs to be a kid but Brian's gut isn't usually wrong. I do hope they have a chat soon.
Author's Response: Patrick and Bree will have their moments throughout this story.
Date: May 13, 2017 1:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm glad the Village is officially open.
Please let Gus be receptive to Brian's chat
Author's Response: Teenagers are never receptive to parent's talks.
Date: May 13, 2017 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love Curtis. He's going to love swimming.
I despise Cole. Brian needs to get rid of him soon. Poor Gus is going to get his heart broken.
Author's Response: Gus getting his heart broken is very likely.
Date: May 13, 2017 8:53 am Title: Chapter 12
The trap is getting ready: so glad to see how everybody helps.
Cole can see the dollar signs each time he sees a new painting/drawing: too bad, he won't get any!
Author's Response: It's not over yet.
Date: May 12, 2017 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is the first BIG thing to happen to one of the kids... tough to deal with
Author's Response: For sure.
Date: May 12, 2017 5:52 pm Title: Chapter 11
Yeah, go get them!
Author's Response: Yay!
Date: May 12, 2017 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 10
Crisis almost over! Good to read that Gus has support from the family. Except Mel who can't accept he is a teenager with needs that hide all the rest. She wasn't better when she cheated on Lindsey!
Author's Response: Interesting how some people learn and others don't.
Date: May 12, 2017 5:11 pm Title: Chapter 9
Gus got quite an interesting and wise advice from Joan.
I hope Hunter will act with Carl very soon.
Author's Response: Joan has become a valuable member of the family.
Date: May 12, 2017 4:55 pm Title: Chapter 8
Now, Carl and Hunter are aware of something and will hopefully stop what's planned.
Author's Response: They will try.
Date: May 12, 2017 4:36 pm Title: Chapter 7
Whoa! Things are getting serious with Cole and his cousin! Gus will be crushed when he will find out.
Author's Response: A hard lesson for Gus.
Date: May 12, 2017 4:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
kids being kids again... at least it was just a broken arm
Author's Response: Could have been worse.
Date: May 12, 2017 4:20 pm Title: Chapter 6
At least, the tracking in the loft security system will records that Gus came.
Author's Response: ;)
Date: May 12, 2017 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
Tough lesson for Briana and Patrick!
Gus didn't talk much to his mom; I hope he will try with somebody else.
Author's Response: That remains to be seen.
Date: May 12, 2017 4:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
kids will be kids... and eventually Patrick and Bree will have that stage where they just bicker a bunch lol the poor guys dealing with that!
Gus knows parts of this feel wrong.. but he is so insistent that he "be" with Cole... now he's lying, and he even admits to Cole not being what he REALLY wanted... :(
damn hormones! lol
Author's Response: You're right about the hormones. Patrick and Bree will have their moments throughout this story.
Date: May 12, 2017 3:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Brian is too smart to NOT figure out what Cole is up to... and I'm hoping it will be quickly
Author's Response: The sooner the better.
Date: May 12, 2017 3:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I feel so awful for Gus... he is going to be crushed that he fell for Cole and even more crushed when he finds out he was used
Author's Response: Not a pretty picture.
Date: May 12, 2017 3:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
I hope Gus will talk to someone who is smart enough to feel something is wrong.
Author's Response: He has lots of choices of people to talk to. Who do you think he will choose?