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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2018 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, what a beginning. Everything is so screwed up. I hope it will be better in New York. 

Reviewer: SandyGale Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2017 6:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yes, they have to get away from the four abusers. Thank God Emmett noticed what the girls did to poor Gus. Who knows what would have happened to him if nobody had noticed. I really want to torture Michael for the way he treats Ted. It's not love when you stand by and watch your partner almost killing himself. It was pure luck that Brian showed up. And Michael deserved the punch.

Good start. I have the feeling that this story is going to be very interesting.

Reviewer: JbY Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2017 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

I didn't scroll through all the reviews, but I often wondered this. I'm wondering if it was spelled this way out of spite? According to info I found its Deborah "Debbie" Jane Grassi Novotny. In this story you have it as Debra. Was this intentional?

I love the story, it doesn't take away from it at all. Just curious 😊. Excellent story!

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2017 4:06 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, just wow.... so far off canon... and I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2017 2:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a sad beginning. Very original premise though. TAG

Reviewer: patou235vie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2017 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Je comprends Justin car selon lui entre eux ça va trop vite,mais dans l'autre sens Brian se sesns en sécurité avec lui.

Donc il faut donner une chance à Brian et voir comment les choses vont évoluer, de plus Carl est là pour les aider sans oublier le frère et la soeur,donc il(Justin ) doit laisser faire les choses en douceur.

A bientot pour la suite.

Reviewer: patou235vie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2017 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Je voudrais signaler que pour la traduction google en français les informations ne passent pas, donc j'ai du aller sur l'original du site.

Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

 This is horrible awful, terrible sad and dud I say horrible? That goodness these poor people gave each other. Suffering alone, is double the pain.  Together they can find strength they never knew. Poor Gus, hang in sweetie, I know it gets better.

So happy, Michael knows the inside of a jail intimately..

Thanks for the newest story. :)

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 1:22 am Title: Chapter 1

Your stories just pull me right in! Love this! Well done, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: blossomlegs Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2017 12:07 am Title: Chapter 1

Another beginning to another FABULOUS fic!

Love your writing talent, esp. anti- Mikey, Linz, Deb and Mel.

Thanks for sharing!

JoAnn

Reviewer: Kinneysbitch Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 9:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait for more..... ❤️

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a punch in the guts! Very dark beginning, but I'm hooked already.

I hope Brian will be able to get his money back from the girls; he doesn't care that much about it, but they care and will fight not to give it back. He should make them bleed.

As for Ted, it's horrible what Michael did; I hope he won't get away with it.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 6:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a terrific start! I can tell I'll be checking throughout the day for updates. lol. I can already tell that it's going to be a very emotionally involved story. They are already all over the map and it's just the first chapter.

Utter fury and disgust for how the girls have treated Gus. How are they even able to try to fight to regain custody of Gus? How are not in jail for neglect? IS Mel still practising law? 

I icked at the idea of Ted and Michael having been together. Ugh...and what an absolute heartless freaking asshole Michael is in this. And Deb is right in there too sadly enough. 

Thank goodness Emmett saw what was actually happening with Gus which led to Brian now having him. Now that Ted, Emmett and Brian will be taking Gus with them and startingfresh in New York, hopefully they will be able to at least start to put some of this behind them. Start fresh without those awful 4 hindering all their efforts. The support and belief in Brian's ability from T&E is lovely! both willing to put up $ for his own business.

Intersting that Joan is now involved in a positive way. I like that. she was too late to help brian gorwingup, but she's saving her grandkids. Jack and Claire...well just disgusting!

Seems like neither Lindsey nor Michael are on a "I want Brian for myself" kick. All 4 seem to really hate him.

Fantastic start!

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: Dark_Oreo27 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 5:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Definitely want more of this.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow!  What a beginning.  I'm hooked already.  Great story idea.

Reviewer: Steph94 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 9:28 am Title: Chapter 1

OMG!!!!

WOW this is something that made me cry like a baby....

Hope this is going to be updated often 'cause I can't wait to read more

Reviewer: brandi1111 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 5:20 am Title: Chapter 1

This has me on the edge of my seat. Great 1st chapter. Just wow!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 2:12 am Title: Chapter 1

What a fantastic beginning to a new story.  I love that Emmett was the one to bring Gus to Brian's attention.  And that John called Brian when Peter was being beaten.  Can't wait to see what you have planned.

Reviewer: ConnieMelissa Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 2:03 am Title: Chapter 1

Yeah, what she (Nichelle) said 😁

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2017 1:52 am Title: Chapter 1

WOW! What an opening! I'm really looking forward to this. So many surprises already occurred during this first chapter. Ted dated Michael??!! The strange part is that if Ted had gotten his wish in the series, I believe that somewhere along the way, Michael would have destroyed him. If not with other men then the eternal whine would make Ted look for any way out that he could find. It's sad but I hope that he's healing and will find a love worthy of him!

As for Brian, I'm sitting here rocking, singing Negro sprituals again trying to contain my anger at the Fucked-up Foursome! Mel, Lindsay, Deb and Dumbass really need their asses whipped...SMH! It's sad to think that Brian went from living with a psychopath to attracting Sociopaths. Mel is also one by default. Although Brian can't recoup the money through the courts, hopefully he will sue their asses privately, showing all the stubs that were supposed to go for Gus' support. I'm sure that a great shark lawyer will happily subpoena bank records and receipts. With their parental rights revoked due to neglect, proof that they didn't spend Brian's financial contribution as intended won't be hard to get. 

Such a great beginning to this story! I'm already pissed off! LOL 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

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