Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2018 8:13 am Title: Chapter 16

They are all crazy. I’m sure of it. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2017 7:17 pm Title: Chapter 16

I love how you wrote Brian and Carl's meeting: honest, daring and funny.

Justin seems to want to wait, but will he succeed avoiding the attraction?

Gus is just adorable with the way he's calling Justin and how he's behaving with him.

The last part was great: big battle of losers who see the defaults in the others so easily, but can't imagine doing something wrong.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2017 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 16

Carl handled the situation with total calm and let Brian know that he is not going away but will stand by his son and fight.

I see Deb is exerting her power over Mel and Lindsay boy will she be surprised when she faces Brian, Emmett, Ted and The Family to see that she has no power over them.

So Lindsay is sleeping around and Mel is enjoying the lifestyle she once lambasted Brian with?

Not surprised the money is running out and that Lindsay's parents are getting tired of paying for her stupidity, not surprised that Mel lost her job but how is Brian to blame for her not doing her part to take care of Gus?

So when is the next party the girls will be busted at?

Deb might want to watch her back Mel and Lindsay are getting tired of her mouth and might be getting ready to shut her up as soon as they figure out a plan with their two brain cells lol