Date: Jul 14, 2018 7:59 am Title: Chapter 15
At least they meet. The rest will come.
Date: Jul 14, 2018 7:30 am Title: Chapter 14
Brian has to meet Carl. It will be good for him.
Date: Jul 13, 2018 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 13
I think Brian should give Carl a chance.
Date: Jul 13, 2018 9:03 pm Title: Chapter 12
Joan and Carl? Interesting combination.
Date: Jul 13, 2018 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
I was hoping for Justin to be a bit more enthusiastic at the news.
Date: Jul 13, 2018 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 10
Aww. Brian is Lily’s other father? Will he tell Justin?
Date: Jul 13, 2018 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 9
They have to get Vic out of there.
Date: Jul 13, 2018 12:10 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ted seems to make some real progress.
Date: Jul 13, 2018 11:43 am Title: Chapter 7
It’s nice to have some more background information.
Date: Jul 13, 2018 11:24 am Title: Chapter 6
Justin and Lily seem like a godsend to all of them.
Date: Jul 13, 2018 8:20 am Title: Chapter 5
Right now I want to hurt the girls and Michael.
Date: Jul 13, 2018 8:13 am Title: Chapter 4
They are all suffering because of some stupid assholes. It’s so unfair.
Date: Jul 13, 2018 8:05 am Title: Chapter 3
It’s amazing to see what that tiny baby does for Gus.
Date: Jul 13, 2018 7:55 am Title: Chapter 2
Ethan is an ass. It was so nice of Brian to come and rescue Justin and Lily.
Date: Jul 12, 2018 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, what a beginning. Everything is so screwed up. I hope it will be better in New York.
Date: Sep 21, 2017 7:28 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow, it really is better for Gus that Lindsay and Melanie won't be around anymore. It will take a lot of time for him to heal properly. It's heartbreaking and hits too close to home for me.
Date: Sep 21, 2017 6:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, what a beautiful chapter. There was a direct bond between Brian and Justin. Gus was really sweet. I can't wait for them to become a family. Emmett and Ted seemed to like Justin, too. Ethan sucks. He needs to leave Justin alone. He doesn't deserve someone as good as Justin.
Date: Sep 21, 2017 6:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes, they have to get away from the four abusers. Thank God Emmett noticed what the girls did to poor Gus. Who knows what would have happened to him if nobody had noticed. I really want to torture Michael for the way he treats Ted. It's not love when you stand by and watch your partner almost killing himself. It was pure luck that Brian showed up. And Michael deserved the punch.
Good start. I have the feeling that this story is going to be very interesting.
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2017 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I didn't scroll through all the reviews, but I often wondered this. I'm wondering if it was spelled this way out of spite? According to info I found its Deborah "Debbie" Jane Grassi Novotny. In this story you have it as Debra. Was this intentional?
I love the story, it doesn't take away from it at all. Just curious 😊. Excellent story!
Date: Sep 02, 2017 1:39 pm Title: Chapter 35
I like the way it ended but I don't think Michael & Lindsay deserved to be that happy.
Date: Sep 02, 2017 4:55 am Title: Chapter 35
I thought I had reviewed this story, but either it didn't post and I didn't notice it or I simply forgot to do it. Don't know which, but anyway... this is such a moving, wonderful, at times difficult to read story. I was hesitant at first to read it because I get too upset with child abuse stories, but I am so glad I did read it. Wonderful, wonderful story! I really love it.
Deb
Date: Jul 29, 2017 4:44 am Title: Chapter 35
Omg I love the ending... not happy that Michael and Lindsay got their preferred endings... but glad Debbie was able to get better and she was able to reconcile with Vic but also glad brian didn't let her back in their life
Date: Jul 29, 2017 4:39 am Title: Chapter 34
LOVE the name change... perfect! I'm sure Carl will be so touched
Date: Jul 29, 2017 4:31 am Title: Chapter 33
I'm so happy for brian and Justin, Ted and Blake, and Emmett and Drew
Date: Jul 29, 2017 4:31 am Title: Chapter 33
I'm so happy for brian and Justin, Ted and Blake, and Emmett and Drew