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Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2017 9:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love Curtis. He's so unsure of everything in life and he's finally getting something he always wanted...a real family.

Poor Brian and Justin.  They are definitely suffering...well them and the family because of this new project.  I hope they can get back to normal soon.  I miss their time together.



Author's Response: It's great that you like Curtis. He's had a hard start. This project is all consuming at the moment.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2017 10:47 am Title: Chapter 14

Great story! Thank you for entertaining us like this.



Author's Response: You are very welcome.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2017 9:59 am Title: Chapter 13

Sure, Brian isn't dead nor blind!



Author's Response: LOL

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2017 9:39 am Title: Chapter 12

Will Craig let his old feelings aside and see Brian for who he really is?



Author's Response: Not likely. LOL

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2017 9:20 am Title: Chapter 11

Bree and Gus: adorable duo!



Author's Response: Yes they are.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2017 9:05 am Title: Chapter 10

The tension is getting high. Maybe it will give Brian some leverage on Sidney.

Bree suffers, but shares: I love when she says that.



Author's Response: Thanks, we kind of like that line too.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2017 8:27 am Title: Chapter 9

Michael is a real piece: what does he have to lose on this project if it fails?

Not sure Brian will be supportive if Justin spends too much hours a day, again, on a project that will last months!



Author's Response: Michael is a doofus in our story.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2017 7:17 am Title: Chapter 8

Those gardening moments with Bree and her Dada: it's like a breeze of fresh air and a ray of sunshine thru clouds.



Author's Response: Thanks, that was such a lovely thing for you to say.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2017 6:23 am Title: Chapter 7

Congrats to the new family!

I don't know if what you describe as Justin's project is something that might exist in real life or if it's your wild imagination, but it seems fabulous!



Author's Response: Thank you, it was all Sabina's doing.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2017 6:00 am Title: Chapter 6

Always real life like! I love that speech from Brian to Gus.



Author's Response: Thanks so much.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2017 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 5

Bree really is worried; I hope someone will let Brian know.

The date night seems to go well. Let's see how the rest of the evening will go.



Author's Response: Yes, let's hope things improve.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2017 6:24 pm Title: Chapter 4

Difficult period that brings Brian's worse old habits: scaring people and the duo Bree/Patrick didn't help, though, they were right.



Author's Response: It's funny how we revert to old habits in times of difficulty.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2017 5:54 pm Title: Chapter 3

Thank you Jennifer for being so observant and straight forward with Justin; he needed an external voice saying that he must take care of his husband.

Ted is resisting Brian's anger well.



Author's Response: They all just want to help.

Reviewer: mcm Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2017 1:02 am Title: Chapter 2

That's what/how true parent(s) respond.

Perfect loved how you showed that a child can honer their birth family w/o losing the love of the adopted all bc of a last name..

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2017 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 2

Justin is going to cause a disaster if he isn't careful. Brian is faithful, but he's neglected and if some hot receptionist decides to see if he still has some stud blood in his veins, maybe he won't resist very long.

And the kids are aware of what is happening; they aren't blind nor deaf!



Author's Response: It is a difficult situation that all marriages go through.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2017 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

So happy to see a new chapter! Though, it's not a fun one. I hope Brian doesn't have anything that provokes nightmares.



Author's Response: It won't be too bad.

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