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Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2019 6:47 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Once Bitten

Wow, hot chapter.  Love the pics.  As always fantastic writing.  I punished myself and waited to read it today since there are so few stories updated on weekends.  It was definitely worth the wait.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2019 5:42 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Once Bitten

The lines they have to say are so cheesy that I imagine Brian's face while reading them and it makes me smile.

I'm wondering if Brian still had the fake Vamp teeth when he blew Justin. It's one thing to have scratches on the neck, but it must be awful to get some on a dick.

Kudos to Justin for facing Brian and saying what bothered him.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2019 5:16 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Once Bitten

Love all the vamp sexiness & make up & clothes! Come on Brian, get with the pogram & stop being a dick! Pun intended lol

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2019 3:01 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Once Bitten

I think if I were Justin I would have smacked Brian in the face.  But what you had happened came out great.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2019 2:45 am Title: Chapter 11 - Little Red Riding Shorts

Yay! Loved it, so happy you all are back!!! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2019 8:56 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Little Red Riding Shorts

That turned out well.  Wonderful job!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2019 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Little Red Riding Shorts

Bwa ha ha ha!!! The briefs and the lines they had: what a vivid imagination!

The wolf one is great and the optical illusion is well done (I guess it totally depends on the package).

 

So sorry (yeah, I know, it's BS in Brian's world, but I wanted to say it anyway) for all your troubles these past months. Totally understandable that your mojo was off.

So glad you are back on the summer madness!

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2019 1:15 am Title: Chapter 11 - Little Red Riding Shorts

Oh, sorry to hear of your mother's death and your divorce.  You are strong to be able to continue with this story and the others that you have written.  Glad you decided to continue since it is such a good story.  Love the pics.  They really added to the story.  As always fantastic writing.

Reviewer: Lorna Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2019 7:03 am Title: Chapter 11 - Little Red Riding Shorts

Hurrah I’m glad your back sorry for everything you’ve been through i really love this story and can’t wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you. We’re glad to be back again too! This story has such promise. We plan to make it fun! Happy reading! TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2018 5:59 am Title: Chapter 10 - Say Cheese!

Great chapter with a lot of teasing and very hot sex! I bet Brian's first time was a painful disaster.

Beautiful last picture.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2018 5:08 am Title: Chapter 9 - A Walk In The Park

I love how thorough your research is and how inventive Justin is to tease Brian!

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2018 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Say Cheese!

I love it! Sunshine - Up close and personal!



Author's Response:

REALLY close and REALLY personal. LOL. Glad you approved. TAG

Reviewer: soirsagrey Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2018 9:31 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Say Cheese!

Wow, WoW, WOW!!!

This has to be THE best piece of porn I ever read.

Can't really find enough eufimisms to describe this chapter.

SPEECHLESS......

XOXO

Meriam



Author's Response:

Saje gives great porn, huh? TAG

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2018 3:24 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Say Cheese!

Great chapter, great writing and wow, what pictures.  Terrific chapter by all who worked on it.



Author's Response:

I also love those pics we found! Nothing like an up close encounter with Randy's ass... LOL TAG

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2018 2:23 am Title: Chapter 10 - Say Cheese!

Everybody did a great job.  Bravo!!



Author's Response:

I'll second that! TAG

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2018 2:01 am Title: Chapter 10 - Say Cheese!

Saje, you are one fabulous writer babe! I've missed it...and want more please. Glad you're helping our lovely TAG but where is your fic, The Big Picture? It's been quite some time since we've seen an update on that beauty. Love all the porn & can't wait to hear about Brian's bottom experiences, which obviously were very difficult, to put it mildly I'm sure.



Author's Response:

Saje really is a great writer and (no pressure, but) I second your request for her to get her butt back to work on TBP! TAG

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2018 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 9 - A Walk In The Park

Love photography and how it worked in the story.  Great idea.  And, Justin having the upper hand was great.  Terrific chapter.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2018 1:21 am Title: Chapter 9 - A Walk In The Park

Nice to see an update! I liked tagging along with the boys at the park! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 7:01 pm Title: Chapter 9 - A Walk In The Park

How cruel of Thumper to gloat on what Brian missed out on.

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 1:56 pm Title: Chapter 9 - A Walk In The Park

Love the photos and THANK YOU for adding Malik into the story.  I've missed him.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 1:40 pm Title: Chapter 9 - A Walk In The Park

Justin played him well, as did Brian's imagination the night before. Ha!

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2018 1:34 pm Title: Chapter 9 - A Walk In The Park

What a lovely chapter! The bookstore sounded very comfy and entertaining. A creative day at the park, nice. Yes, let's go to my place & look at the shots I took.....hahaha not likely. They'll be looking at each other & their 'other bits'.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2018 3:52 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Say Ahhhh

Great chapter.  Remembered Malik from another story.  Like that Brian doesn't do relationships or believe in jealousy!!!!!  That's what he thinks.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2018 10:27 am Title: Chapter 8 - Say Ahhhh

Daphne and her gaggle are a riot. Csn just picture a sleepover with Brian and Justin. Ha!

Ooh, Brian has some competition. Good. A little to sure of himself and things for his own good.

Sex scene, hot as always.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2018 7:34 am Title: Chapter 8 - Say Ahhhh

Yeah, Malik is back! What a hot (and very corny) scene.

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