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Reviewer: BellaDonne Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 22, 2017 9:14 pm Title: Chapter 3

That's as clear as mud, lol. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2017 5:30 pm Title: Chapter 3

There are so much twists in your story: now Ben is trying to disturb the rerun. At least, Ian and Michael seem out of the main stream.

I hope Daphne will come to the rescue of Brian; it should only be logical that she appears soon.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2017 3:42 pm Title: Chapter 3

This is so intriguing! Holy shit...Justin is a mischievous little thing isn't he? lol

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2017 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 3

Yay, Mysterious Marilyn shows up.  So Justin's responsible for their being switched.  And Ben is playing against, so there are going to be hickups.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2017 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 3

OMG...I'm an idiot! Marty! Of course! I'm smacking my forehead right  now. sheesh! I should've clicked onto that immediately but didn't. that he isn't able to see the future puts a bit of a kink in the works. Poor guy must be so frustrated not having that gift. 

I admit, my head is spinning. Ben...what is Ben up to if anything? Now I'm really wondering. I was assuming that this was just the way things were changing to in this life...While the idea of Ted and Ben is interesting, face it, Ben is hot, plus both being intellectuals would be an interesting match. butthen reality hits and realized that the proper couples need to be together for the refit to work.

ADmittedly, trying to keep up with all of their thoughts is exhausting. lol. How you write is beyond me. Must want to sleep for a week after just 1 chapter.

Am am so looking forward to everything. 

Cheersm

Elaine

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