Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jun 23, 2017 4:42 pm · Chapter: Chapter 5

Another famous line to "kill with kindness" and the roses; if Brian organizes a pick-nick, Justinn will run away.

The outing of Michael was hilarious.

The scenes with Gus and Jussin, then Brian are wonderful.

Name: BellaDonne (Signed) · Date: Jun 22, 2017 9:24 pm · Chapter: Chapter 5

Gus didn't do it either? What's it going to take?? He is just putting Brian through his paces isn't he? 

Im on the edge of my seat. :)


Name: Glo (Signed) · Date: Jun 22, 2017 12:29 pm · Chapter: Chapter 5

Yay he's starting to remember! And double yay go Gus!! That's right Brian, kill him with kindness...go full circle...

Name: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: Jun 22, 2017 7:04 am · Chapter: Chapter 5

I love Gus. Mickey is such an pass.

Name: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: Jun 22, 2017 5:33 am · Chapter: Chapter 5

LMAO!!!! Michael outed at work by Justin!!!! for that one! It's clear that his whining ass is more suited for Pre-school than the Big Q so having that mealy-mouthed monkey fired shouldn't be too hard. And he STILL didn't apologize for his accusations, behavior or insults to Gus! What a turd!

As for Gus.....WOW!!!! Gus remembers Justin?! What a moment! I keep wondering what will be the catalyst to jog Justin's memory. But even still, the fact that Gus remembers his Justin is so big. Even if it may take awhile longer for Justin to remember, I think Gus could be instrumental to getting Brian and Justin together. 

I'm really looking forward to the rest of this! I'm also loving the dynamic between Justin and Hunter this go round. Things may be screwed up but in some ways, they are better ie. The Whining Twins are now a couple and shall not be inflicted on someone else; Hunter and Justin aren't frienemies, but just plain old good friends.. so much good literary gumbo going on here!

Happy Writing and HUGS,


Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Jun 22, 2017 3:22 am · Chapter: Chapter 5

Oh, this is working out wonderfully.  Love how they manage to piss Mikey off.  Hahaha.

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