Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 8:16 pm Title: Chapter 23

What's happening with the time warp thing is utterly terrifying! I can't even imagine the fear coursing through them when that shit happens! I'm getting goose bumps when I read it. All the possibilities! 

What all did Marylin say to Ted? What names was he given? What is ted going to do with any information he now has?

Who the F is beind all of this? I swear I'm having mini anxiety attacks reading this. All this shit happening to the family. Beingsent back then forwards, bacj adn forwards. this life or another one. 

Who is capable of doing all this? How are they able to use such power? 

Update is required soon please!! We need to know what the hell is going on and who's doing it and even better....what shit is going to hit the fan once this person is found out...........

Cheers

Elaine

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2017 3:45 pm Title: Chapter 23

We're getting close to finding the culprit. Can't wait.

Mel makes a good candidate for screwing everything up. First the baby gets the name she wants. Brian gets the promotion,  moves to NY and out of her life, which she wants. Only how is she doing it and who is helping her? 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2017 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 23

Okay what is happening?  That would be so scary especially finding Gus couldn't move or Blake now breathing.

I'm very interested in who Marilyn is talking about.

Update soon.

Hugs,
Jessica

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2017 5:05 am Title: Chapter 23

That was a great chapter. Really scary.