Date: Jun 05, 2018 6:15 pm Title: Chapter 51
Whoa, Joan got the balls from her late husband!!! Great part; I loved how she managed Claire and what she told Brian, even if it's too late.
Are they finally out of the woods or will Lindsay come back and try to derail their lives again?
Date: Jun 05, 2018 1:52 pm Title: Chapter 51
" I would have loved him anyway." I swooned.
" I have conditions.", so Brian.
Going to miss them when this is over.
Date: Jun 05, 2018 1:55 am Title: Chapter 51
great story. Glad they got their forever together.
Date: Jun 04, 2018 5:57 pm Title: Chapter 51
I forgot a couple of things I wanted to say....
The whole turn around with Joan. Came as a shocker, especially the yway she spoke to claire. Very refreshing. At first I thought maybe she went back or forsard in time allowing herself a nother chance. This was just needed for Brian to fulfill his destiny though.
Elaine
Date: Jun 04, 2018 5:55 pm Title: Chapter 51
*sniff sniff* so sweet!
Gotta say though, Brian has BALLS OF STEEL facing down the angels never mind God! (nice touch putting Him in Vic's body!)
Loved this!!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Jun 04, 2018 4:31 pm Title: Chapter 51
Absolutely LOVED this chapter, StarBaby!! Brian forgave Joan for her inaction and mistreatment of him throughout his life. It was a HUGE thing for her to admit that she was incapable of being the kind of mother he wanted and needed. It was actually a very nice change from the sanctimonious harridan we have all come to know and hate. Claire...well, talk about a greedy, nosy and judgmental chick who just needs to be SLAPPED to sleep!! She's a straight 'Poor man's Lindsay', but that's another tirade for another time, LOL.
The talk with the Angels, as always, is interesting. Add God himself to the mix and WHOO! Yes, I actually cheered aloud when he showed up! I love the fact that Brian and Justin's testing phase is finally over. I was completely enthralled as the reason for Brian's creation was revealed to him at long last. Ironically, I have always viewed Brian's character as a person with a definitive moral code, even if it lived and breathed outside of societal norms. You did an amazing job portraying that here.
This series is one of my absolute favorites and has kept me intrigued. Thank you so much for sharing this gift with us!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2018 4:28 pm Title: Chapter 51
I do believe this chapter maybe my favorite one :)
At long last Brian and Justin are going to live their lives without anyone else's influences, not Heaven or Hell can change destiny now and Lindsay along with everyone else will finally get what's coming to them.
Forgiveness is strong, but Love is more Powerful than Hate or Envy, Especially True Love ;)
Date: Jun 04, 2018 4:22 pm Title: Chapter 51
Great chapter. Great writing.
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2018 1:15 pm Title: Chapter 51
Tests! At least they are living the life they should have.