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Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2017 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 24

Man alive........so much happening in the prifery of their lives. the out circle however is about to crash into the centre though. This is seriousyly anxiety building. Glad I don't bite my nails! They be chewed down to the quick. Trying to wrap my head around the fact that Michael has such an integral role in the servival. Yikes!! Did he take his previous redeption serious? Where's Ben now?

WOW!

Cheers

Elaine

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2017 10:40 am Title: Chapter 24

Hmmm...that's alot of people working together to bring them all down.  I do hope the gang can prevent any damage they may try to inflict.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2017 3:59 am Title: Chapter 24

Whoa! The list is long and the risk is high!

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2017 3:33 am Title: Chapter 24

So confusing. I can't believe that living their lives with the others in limbo waiting to seperate our lovers all, for better or worse, depends on Michael.  Michael!? Really?!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2017 2:17 am Title: Chapter 24

Well things are just rolling along.  I don't see the bad guys winning.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2017 2:06 am Title: Chapter 24

All caught up and YES I'm CUSSING!!!! Those rat bastards! And the biggest one of them all is....LAWD HAM TURKEYYYYYY!!!!! I just.... I just CAN NOT!!! Girl.....Yeah, anxiety way up and can't wait to see what happens next!

 

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 8:16 pm Title: Chapter 23

What's happening with the time warp thing is utterly terrifying! I can't even imagine the fear coursing through them when that shit happens! I'm getting goose bumps when I read it. All the possibilities! 

What all did Marylin say to Ted? What names was he given? What is ted going to do with any information he now has?

Who the F is beind all of this? I swear I'm having mini anxiety attacks reading this. All this shit happening to the family. Beingsent back then forwards, bacj adn forwards. this life or another one. 

Who is capable of doing all this? How are they able to use such power? 

Update is required soon please!! We need to know what the hell is going on and who's doing it and even better....what shit is going to hit the fan once this person is found out...........

Cheers

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 4:16 pm Title: Chapter 23

This is getting better and better! I love how you twist every story and have this wonderful idea of rewriting backgrounds to suit some Machiavellian(s) who are not happy with what is happening, or supposed to happen.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2017 3:45 pm Title: Chapter 23

We're getting close to finding the culprit. Can't wait.

Mel makes a good candidate for screwing everything up. First the baby gets the name she wants. Brian gets the promotion,  moves to NY and out of her life, which she wants. Only how is she doing it and who is helping her? 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2017 1:21 pm Title: Chapter 23

Omg wow! This is totally crazy, who the hell is doing this? When will we find out? 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2017 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 23

Okay what is happening?  That would be so scary especially finding Gus couldn't move or Blake now breathing.

I'm very interested in who Marilyn is talking about.

Update soon.

Hugs,
Jessica

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2017 5:06 am Title: Chapter 23

That was a great chapter. Really intense and kind of scary.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2017 5:05 am Title: Chapter 23

That was a great chapter. Really scary.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2017 4:20 am Title: Chapter 23

Oh Lord, this is getting so suspenseful.  Looks like Craig and Gardner have joined forces.  Tell me I'm wrong.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2017 9:38 am Title: Chapter 22

I'm so glad Carl remembers.  He is a source of information.  I always loved how close he came to all the boys.

I'm glad they are going to adopt Jenny too.  Can't wait for Kira to complete their family.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2017 5:36 am Title: Chapter 22

What about Kip? I don't remember if they already talked about him.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2017 3:36 am Title: Chapter 22

Hmmm, where is Craig?  Could Kip be a possiblility?  Loving this story.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2017 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 21

Who is doing this then? I always like Carl, he was such a good man.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2017 11:02 am Title: Chapter 21

I love that they have both Gus and Jenny.  Cant wait for Kira to come along.

I'm glad Carl is there to help.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2017 9:54 am Title: Chapter 21

The plot is still thick, even if more and more people remember. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2017 4:26 am Title: Chapter 21

Nice to see that Carl remembers, but it still hard to know who's the friendly and who isn't.  Love that Justin and Brian are taking in Jenny.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2017 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 20

Somebody is playing with the future? Could it be Craig?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2017 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 20

Talk about confusing.  Who is playing with time?  How will they solve it?  Stay tune for more!!!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2017 10:46 am Title: Chapter 20

Hmmm...I wonder who it could be messing with them.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2017 7:36 am Title: Chapter 19

Justin is really clever and a little devil.

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