Date: Jul 09, 2017 5:48 am Title: Chapter 13
Excellent and funny; again, we discover new things about Ben.
So glad Blake joined the gang of B&J team.
Date: Jul 08, 2017 7:42 am Title: Chapter 12
Yeah, Jennifer appears!
I love how you build and write this story.
Date: Jul 07, 2017 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 12
Yay, Jennifer!! Life is about to get good. Cynthia good job finding the needle in the haystack.
Date: Jul 07, 2017 5:23 pm Title: Chapter 11
Haha!!! Gus knows Cynthia too. Cindy, girl what you up to?? I'm so glad Justin is back!!
Date: Jul 06, 2017 1:41 pm Title: Chapter 12
I knew something was up with Cynthia! And there it is...so glad Jen is back in the picture. Of course she'll take the job, 2 daughters for her? Hmmmm this is getting intriguing.
Emmett going over everything with the moms was cute.
Date: Jul 06, 2017 3:57 am Title: Chapter 12
Oh boy getting goooood.
Date: Jul 05, 2017 7:30 pm Title: Chapter 11
Gus recognized Cynthia and she didn't say anything; that's odd.
I loved the food jokes:
“The shells make it extra crunchy.”
“I don’t like food people have to explain.”
Date: Jul 05, 2017 1:55 am Title: Chapter 11
Cynthia has me worried...what's going on with her?
Date: Jul 01, 2017 1:20 pm Title: Chapter 10
Loving these parents! I think Jen & Molly are there but they just haven't met them yet. Any truth to my prediction?
Yes Hunter, they ARE on a trip but it's a one this time around...
Date: Jul 01, 2017 10:07 am Title: Chapter 10
I could only imagine Emmett's mom who taught him Gossip 101: excellent!
These moms are great for Brian and Emmett; the fathers seem OK too. That's a major change for them.
[Report This]Date: Jul 01, 2017 4:59 am Title: Chapter 10
Another delectable chapter. Love that Justin, Brian, Emmett and Gus know what's going on. You gave Emmett a great family! Now Gus has to become Brian's, Blake has to meet Ted and Kira has to show up.
Date: Jun 28, 2017 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 9
Can't wait to see the family reunion with Gus, Justin and Brian's parents!
Date: Jun 28, 2017 3:35 am Title: Chapter 9
Interesting concept. I hadn't thought of that.
Date: Jun 27, 2017 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 9
Love love LOVE Brian's now-parents. They are such special people! Also love how Brian and Justin gave them the truth without going into all of the details, LOL
As for Ben... you know... THAT actually makes sense! If one really stops to think about the whole Brian-Justin-Ben triangle, it makes a helluva lot more sense than a Michael/Ben alliance. Let's rationalize this a bit...
Lifetime# 1:
Ben was just a trick, same as Justin was SUPPOSED to be. Ben is probably thinking 'Why Justin and not me? What was so damn special about the kid?' Since no one knows what happened the morning after their tryst at the White Party, the ultimate fuck-off is open to interpretation and speculation.
By the time Ben arrived on the scene in Michael's company, Brian and Justin were going through their own non-relationship troubles. Of course, this can be looked at in so many ways but from Ben's POV, the fact that B & J broke up shortly after his arrival, then got back together, only to break up again would only spell how incompatible they are from the outsider's point of view.
Ben also would have noticed that while B&J had issues, it was also a mature relationship in that Brian was never made to feel like he was having to be Parent, Teacher, husband and lover to Justin. Whereas Ben often had to be ALL those things to Michael. No wonder he wanted a different life! Which brings us to...
Lifetime#2:
Ben realizes that Michael is a waste of space and time in his life. So he does what he can to free up the one person he feels is worth his time...Brian. Only it didn't work that way since through EVERY life, Brian and Justin are together.
Seeing that, he decides to go back to the 'best friend' to keep his link to Brian alive. In that respect, it seems that he and Michael had more in common than a little bit. As long as Brian talks, sees and acknowledges him in some way, Ben would have felt important. So here we are at...
Lifetime#3:
Sure Justin has a life that he didn't live where Ben may have hit on him. However, it doesn't change the fact that Ben is neither Brian or Justin's type for more than a one-night stand. I suspect that Ben is also 'teaches' in bed... 'Insert tab a into slot B...go left, right, left, in, out, in...etc' at which point dirty talk- or lack thereof- would have had Brian and/or Justin producing a ballgag since his incessant instructional chatter would have messed up the whole idea of boinking without a conscience. Personally I would have gagged him anyway but that's another situation entirely, LOL
Anyway, out of the entire group, Ben is the ONLY other person to have Brian sexually. He knows what the man is capable of. After two lifetimes of the Whining Windbag Michael, I really can't blame him for wanting to finally get a piece of Brian. Sadly, he miscalculated the idea of fate and destiny. Also apparent is that Ben is adopting the Michael-ism cycle of whine-insult- tantrum-stalk-pout-shout-REPEAT, and thinks it will get him what he wants. I can't wait for that hard fall he's bucking for!
LOVE this story Star!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2017 9:58 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh I like this everyone knows but Brian's parents. So Ben really wants Brian but knowing that Brian wants Justin he tries to make it seem he wants Justin? Crazy.
Date: Jun 27, 2017 9:54 pm Title: Chapter 9
Hmmmm. Interesting theory re: Brian and Ben. kinda creeps me out a bit seeing how Ben is behaving in this life, but yea...I can see it. Now this is a plot twist that could go many ways!
So glad Justin is bak now. Glad he stayed even after sleeping.
And how thrilling was it for him to meet Brian's parents! He wanted brian to experience all the good things that proper parents had to offer. the yare so excited over a new grandson and Justin! really happy form Brian in this life for that reason alone, never mind teh rest!
thank you!!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Jun 25, 2017 6:00 am Title: Chapter 8
Yes, he remembers finally! And Ted got away from Ben.
The scenes with Emmett and Drew were hilarious!
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2017 2:02 am Title: Chapter 8
Yay. Justin finally remembers. Ted's letting Ben loose which means we only need to wait for Blake to show up. Love Daphne and Emmett in this. Drew is comic relief. I live for your updates. Thank you!
Date: Jun 24, 2017 5:10 am Title: Chapter 7
Yes, Daphne is here! More fun to come!
I love the scenes with Ian and Babe.
Ben is a real bad-ass in this new life.
[Report This]Date: Jun 24, 2017 3:44 am Title: Chapter 7
Ben's really asking for it. It's strange that Daphne and Justin think everyone is crazy, but you have to admit that's the way it sounds.
Date: Jun 23, 2017 5:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
I don't like Ben at all; he is working a plan that has no future, but he still tries.
Gus is so funny looking for Jussin!
Brian on a date! That's the next step after the flowers.
Date: Jun 23, 2017 4:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
Another famous line to "kill with kindness" and the roses; if Brian organizes a pick-nick, Justinn will run away.
The outing of Michael was hilarious.
The scenes with Gus and Jussin, then Brian are wonderful.
Date: Jun 23, 2017 4:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love how you picked some lines from the series: “You're both tall.”, “Where you headed?”, “No place special.” and “I can change that.”
Ian and the violin vision: the memories are starting to come back.
Justin clashing Ian then Ben: hilarious!
Hot night at the gallery...
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2017 3:28 am Title: Chapter 6
Ben needs to be given a white coat with the sleeves tied behind him. Where does he get off trying to change this. This is why he keeps getting the short end of the stick. Love that Gus knows Jussin. Can't wait for the business dinner.