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Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2023 5:12 pm Title: Chapter 12

This was great!! I loved that Brian conquered his fears and went back to the office. And good for him in beating out Kip Thomas for the Jacobson account. That guy and his sorry attitude really need to get knocked down a few pegs. And I totally love Dougie and love how he has befriended Brian and will seem to do just about anything for him!!! LOL

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Love your comments.

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 12

Another beautiful story of yours. Im so happy reading this series. Reading about brian progress and all of his problem. Very realistic story.



Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you found it believable.

Reviewer: bellawu Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2018 9:24 pm Title: Chapter 5

He is such a bully. I hate how he treated brian



Author's Response: Not a nice person.

Reviewer: LeatherCuff Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2017 7:23 pm Title: Chapter 9

Just a small thing but isn't Gus supposed to be under 6 months? If so he would only be having breastmilk or formula, no water or juice. Even if he were under two he would be unlikely to be having juice as most parents (esp educated ones like L and M) know that it can really damage milk teeth 😊



Author's Response: You may be right.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2017 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 12

I can't help but love Dougie!!! lol

and this new Brian is great and so nice to make sure Jasper is making a little extra (probably a lot extra) money... taking care of the good people!



Author's Response: Glad you like Dougie. I like him too.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2017 7:59 pm Title: Chapter 11

I don't see why Justin should have a problem with this, except it would mean more working for Brian, but it is more back to normal than most things!



Author's Response: It's all new to both Brian and Justin. They have to feel their way.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2017 7:52 pm Title: Chapter 10

Hell yes that was better treatment of Kip than he deserved and it probably got under his skin way more than just losing the account LOL



Author's Response: You could be right.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2017 7:43 pm Title: Chapter 9

times like this Mel pisses me off... 

so sweet seeing Brian soften up with Gus... so sweet!



Author's Response: Brian does have a sweet side ... occasionally.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2017 7:24 pm Title: Chapter 8

yay, the house sounds great and I think Dougie is adorable and yet another person who isn't bothered by the chair... even thinks it's cool lol



Author's Response: Dougie is a great kid.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2017 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 7

I can't wait for Justin and Brian to find a place to live so they don't have to deal with morning Grump anymore LOL

and I LOVE Cynthia!!!



Author's Response: That would be nice.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2017 7:08 pm Title: Chapter 6

I don't trust Kip at all... almost seems like you are setting this up for the bike to go missing...



Author's Response: Keep reading and see.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2017 7:00 pm Title: Chapter 5

Kip is going to get caught saying those disgusting things sooner or later... and Brian is going to enjoy when Kip gets what's coming to him (I know I will!!!)



Author's Response: We all will.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2017 6:42 pm Title: Chapter 4

As annoyed as he can get, I'm sure Brian appreciated and almost enjoyed knowing his family had his back...

Kip bette watch out lol



Author's Response: Brian appreciates loyalty.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2017 6:29 pm Title: Chapter 3

I love that Justin was ready to go kick Kip's ass... I'd love to see that too!!!



Author's Response: Nobody messes with B/J and gets away with it.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2017 6:20 pm Title: Chapter 2

I really like Jasper... he has a good perspective of things!



Author's Response: Yes he does.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2017 6:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think Kip is in for a rude awakening... he is not going to be happy that he isn't as good as he thinks he is! lol

 



Author's Response: Who would be.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2017 6:03 pm Title: Chapter 12

Thank you for this wonderful new chapter of the story! Can't wait for the next part!



Author's Response: Thank you very much.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2017 5:42 pm Title: Chapter 11

Kaboom! That's a great opportunity to get rid of Kip, who will wait the right moment to make a bad move.



Author's Response: True.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2017 5:14 pm Title: Chapter 10

Great job, once more! Brian did get the account and crashed Kip without him noticing it too much.



Author's Response: Brian is so good!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2017 4:54 pm Title: Chapter 9

I hope they will be able to get Gus more from now on; Brian is so captivated by him.

Maybe Lindsay will be able to get Mel to agree; one can hope.



Author's Response: That would be a big improvement to Brian's life.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2017 4:33 pm Title: Chapter 8

I bet Dougie will be over the moon when he will see that Mister Brian bought the house!



Author's Response: I believe he will.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2017 4:16 pm Title: Chapter 7

Another great day for the Master of the Ad's world.

He managed the client with so much punch that there was no escape.



Author's Response: Well expressed.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2017 3:57 pm Title: Chapter 6

Brian shouldn't be so confident; Kip was in this office before and maybe he still has the key to open it.

At least, Brian has the idea for the ad.



Author's Response: Some silver lining.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2017 3:20 pm Title: Chapter 5

Brian should leave with Cynthia if he wants to avoid dealing with Kip.

I hope he will find a way to get his potential client to moderate his opinion on people on wheelchairs and at the same time get the account.



Author's Response: Maybe he can find a way.

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2017 1:31 am Title: Chapter 12

Thyme:

 

Is there a Close to Home IV?  I would love to see what happens with Dougie and the house.  Also would love to see if Brian buys Ryder.  I love this series and am so glad to see your writing on this site.



Author's Response: Yes, there is a Close to Home IV, but that's the last part.

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