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Reviewer: Galesgal Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2023 3:44 am Title: Life Happens

damn poor kid

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2017 7:22 pm Title: Life Happens

Wowza, well we all know that Brian is Gus' father, so it will be interesting to find out in this universe why he doesn't know.



Author's Response:

 

gotb30,

It will become clear why Brian doesn't know.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: Erbear4474 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 25, 2017 4:15 am Title: Life Happens

I loooooove this story, Gus is so cute and Brian and Justin are to die for! Thanks 

Looking forward to Sunshine and Rainbows. 😊



Author's Response:

 

Erbear,

Thanks.

Glad you enjoyed this story.

Gus was fun to write.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

The first two chapters of Sunshine and Rainbows have been posted. Enjoy.

~Lorie

 

Reviewer: Wendy Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2017 3:22 pm Title: Life Happens

OMG!  This is one of the best stories I've read. 

Gus is so cute! He totally steals your heart with his cuteness and observations. Through the eyes of a child everything is so simple and easy to explain. I laughed so hard at his observations on male anatomy.

Well written and believable. The opening of each chapter with Brian's insight was brilliant! (Especially the geode comparison.) More like this please!



Author's Response:

 

Wendy Dawn,

Thank you very much.

Gus is definitely precocious, and as brutally honest as his father.

The credit for the openings of the chapters goes to Tagsit.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 8:08 am Title: Life Happens

OMG That's so adorable and sad at the same time. I can't wait to see how it goes with these two. 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

It will be an interesting ride for these two.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: nickknack Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2017 10:03 am Title: Life Happens

Fantastic story. I loved it - you can never complain about a happy and loved Brian :-)



Author's Response:

 

Nickknack,

Thank you.

Glad you enjoyed our story.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: Kurenohikari88 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 10:30 pm Title: Life Happens

I loved it! Amazing end, it's a perfect life for the perfect couple.



Author's Response:

 

Kurenohikari,

Thanks. 

They really are the perfect couple.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2017 12:48 am Title: Life Happens

Yay.  I got to read this when it was posted but I didn't have my computer nor my password to post comments.  Loving this.  We know that Gus is Brian's son, but Brian doesn't know that yet, does he?



Author's Response:

 

YumYum,

No, Brian doesn't know for sure yet that Gus is his.

He's not even sure if he wants him to be.

So happy you're enjoying the story.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2017 4:51 pm Title: Life Happens

Very intriguing beginning!

 The talking trick was hilarious!



Author's Response:

 

SNO,

At least the annoying trick made it easy for Brian to answer the door.

The story gets even better.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2017 7:31 am Title: Life Happens

Love love love it..😊

Interesting start...great plot and well written like always...❤

Thank.u for sharing.



Author's Response:

 

nkaur,

So glad you are loving the start of this.

Lots of surprises to come.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: Lorna Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2017 6:35 am Title: Life Happens

Loving the start of the story and looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

 

Lorna,

Happy you are enjoying the story.

More soon. <3

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: Cemegh Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2017 9:17 pm Title: Life Happens

Moments of this chpt affected me so much with the way you have described poor gus being essentially shoved off to a complete stranger, I actually started to tear up. And by 'tear up' I mean bawl my eyes out.

Please believe that I NEVER cry when reading fanfic, so this is a first. I'm loathe to read on because I'd rather not be a complete Emo for the weekend 😢

Can I get some reassurances here, or do I need to invest in kleenex and prozac to get through this?

Oh, and obviously, loved the story.

Kearney



Author's Response:

 

Kearney,

There are very few 'sad crying parts' but there are a lot of funny things and some 'happy crying parts'.

This will be mostly a happy story.

I cried while writing it too.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2017 12:17 am Title: Life Happens

I can't tell you how excited I am for this story, this already sounds sooooo good. I could totally picture Brian's face, his eyes rolling when he was fucking that annoying trick. And then how he completely changed when he was alone with Gus. How he knew how scared he must have been. How he could relate just a little to how scared the kid must have been - that made my heart ache.

Gus is ADORABLE omg. "Are you my daddy?" I could totally see Brian's face in my mind here too lol. Poor guy haha!

I loved Gus's description of guava juice, kids really have a way with words.

MORE :)

*adds to bookshelf*



Author's Response:

 

Sally,

This story will be a mostly fluffy and happy with only a little angst.

Brian doesn't think he father material because of his upbringing, but his ability to try and make things better for others makes him perfect for it.

Kids can be fun to listen to, at least sometimes.

~Tag And Lorie~

Reviewer: CarolK1943 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2017 4:25 pm Title: Life Happens

Great start! This is definitely on my "read" list.



Author's Response:

 

Carol,

Glad you liked it.

More soon.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: starlight Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2017 3:33 am Title: Life Happens

I have sooooo many questions, but love the start and can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

 

Starlight,

Hopefully we will answer all of your questions in the story. 

Glad you enjoyed the first chapter.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2017 2:23 am Title: Life Happens

Nice start to what I'm sure is going to be a very interesting AU story. I have to say though, any mother that puts her young child in a taxi alone, doesn't deserve to have him.

 



Author's Response:

As I'm sure you expect, there's a story behind that... lol. Thanks for reading

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2017 12:11 am Title: Life Happens

Nice start! Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

 

Chadmom,

More soon.

Glad you like the start.

 

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: Marny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 05, 2017 10:51 pm Title: Life Happens

Hmm Brian doesn't know any Peterson? Doesn't know Lindsay? Please more.



Author's Response:

 

Marny,

She moved away after college.

More soon.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

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