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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 10:29 am Title: Life Of The Mind

Gus seems traumatized. Poor little guy. 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

Gus has been through a lot, but Brian will help to heal him.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2017 7:20 am Title: Life Of The Mind

Poor gus is tormented ...he is having panic attacks at such a little age..brian will be angry when he finds out about the torture gus experienced the same he once got from his own parents .



Author's Response:

 

nkaur,

Brian is realizing that Gus has been hurt.

It tears him up to see the reactions in Gus that he used to feel himself.

Things will get better.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2017 3:43 pm Title: Life Of The Mind

Excellent chapter: they start to be at ease together, and with the kids; Brian starts to think Gus might be his kid.

The only touchy thing is that Gus is really traumatized and it's dramatic; it would be worse if Brian can't keep him; I don't use the verb won't because I don't see him going any other way.



Author's Response:

 

SNO,

They would be a great family.

Brian will make sure Gus is well cared for.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2017 9:13 am Title: Life Of The Mind

I love this chapter like a nice family! Thank you for the update!



Author's Response:

 

Marie,

They would make a great family. 

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2017 12:53 am Title: Life Of The Mind

Alright well Brian is putting 2 & 2 together & realizing that Gus is probably his son. The BBQ was so adorable...poor Gus, thinking that Brian is going to be angry with him all the time.

Yeah Brian, you WILL call Justin! Lol Go get him!



Author's Response:

 

Glo,

Brian will eventually find out everything he needs to know.

Everyone will get what they need.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2017 11:24 pm Title: Life Of The Mind

Poor, Gus :( hearing how scared he was to make a mess broke my heart.

I really can't wait to find out Lindsay's story. I feel like there might be more to it than I first thought.

Brian, I HOPE HE CALLS JUSTIN :)



Author's Response:

 

Sally,

Brian will make sure Gus is well taken care of, always.

There will be more about Lindsay coming up.

More happy stuff soon.

~Tag and Lorie~

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2017 8:41 pm Title: Life Of The Mind

What a wonderful picnic on the roof.  Brian is so sweet to comfort Gus.  Somehow I think the midget is staying and I'm pretty sure Justin will be getting a call.



Author's Response:

 

YumYum,

Brian only wants the best for any child.

This will be a happy story.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

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