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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2019 9:01 am Title: Life Alterations

Never liked Lindsey.  She never even teach Gus how to speak, he sounds like a 2-3 year old. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 11:23 am Title: Life Alterations

I would love to see Brian with painted toenails. 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

It's hard for Brian to say no to his Midget.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 19, 2017 8:28 am Title: Life Alterations

Omg....that was sooooo exciting and fun and soooo much spectacular ...i enjoyed it soo much..thanks for excellent story. 



Author's Response:

 

nkaur,

Every child should have someone like Brian.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2017 3:59 am Title: Life Alterations

The "booty/beauty" remark is excellent and so are the texts' exchanges.

Emmett's lessons of life are a masterpiece.



Author's Response:

 

Sno,

Gus tries to relate things to his favorite movie.

Emmett may be silly and campy, but his 'lessons' do have a point.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2017 6:39 pm Title: Life Alterations

So sweet! I love Gus  I want to see brian with his toenails painted !!!!!



Author's Response:

 

Marie,

Who wouldn't, with those sexy feet.

Sometimes I wish they would just act out the stories we write.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: Mychad Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2017 5:40 am Title: Life Alterations

I just started reading that story yesterday and completely fell in love with it! It turns out to be a beautiful idea and really well executed. Gus is absolutely adorable and so is the relationship that he and Brian are developing.


 


I was really curious about how you were going to introduce Justin in this. That was surprising, but in a good way! I like that you got Molly into this, she is such an underused character (including in the serie) and I really like "mature and responsible" Justin. It's gonna create an interesting dynamic with Brian. I can't wait to see how their relationship will evoluate. That's interesting to see Brian face such a life altering situation, that happens to him all of a sudden, and the impact it's having on him.


 


The only thing that I didn't really understand is what is happening with social services finally... Did he call them or not after talking to Carl? Carl kind of advice him to retain some information or let say "edit" the story regarding his paternity and maybe also the situation with Lindsay, so if he did call, what exactly did he tell them and what are they going to do? I think this would need to be clarified...


 


I can't wait for the next chapter! :)



Author's Response:

 

Mychad,

Yes Brian did call CPS. He told them that he is the father and that Lindsay just sent him Gus without any warning and then disappeared. He asked them to help him locate her. This way Gus will be left with him while they try to find her.

Glad you're enjoying the story.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2017 3:28 am Title: Life Alterations

Super sweet.



Author's Response:

 

Wellreadbunny,

Thanks.

More soon.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2017 2:18 am Title: Life Alterations

Why doesn't Brian take Gus to the hospital for a DNA cotton swap test?  I'm surprised they haven't done that yet. Love the text messages! Their so adorable! Now is Leather Bear ever going to get another outfit? Lol



Author's Response:

 

Glo,

We'll get to that, be patient. ;).

At least they're communicating.

Not sure.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: Tena Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2017 10:55 pm Title: Life Alterations

Loving this adorable story. Gus is precious. Looking forward to more. 



Author's Response:

 

Tena,

So happy you are enjoying the story.

Gus is a special kid.

More soon.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2017 10:36 pm Title: Life Alterations

Was Brian going to call CPS even after Carl suggested he didn't? *shakes head*

Gus making the love letter for Brian's "booty" was so cute.

Love the text exchange between B&J :)

 



Author's Response:

 

Sally,

Carl suggested that Brian not tell them that he not the father, because then they would have to put him in foster care and Brian wouldn't be allowed to have any contact with him. They will leave him with Brian if he says he's the father.

Gus likes Justin and he thinks Brian needs to have someone.

Brian is trying to change, maybe Justin is just what he needs.

~Tag and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2017 9:03 pm Title: Life Alterations

Awww.   Brian taking his mini-me to work.  Ted had a great idea of Emm watching the little one.  And Gus learned how to paint nails.  Maybe Brian can do the same when he takes Justin or Booty as Gus calls him to dinner.



Author's Response:

 

YumYum,

Yes, Brian was getting a little stressed with Gus there, but he handled it well.

More interesting stuff to come.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

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