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Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2017 3:09 pm Title: An Amusing Life

Just imagining Brian on all those kiddie rides is too cute for words. 



Author's Response:

Susi,

Brian wants to make sure that as long as Gus is with him, the boy has the best time he can provide.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: LauraB725 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2017 12:41 am Title: An Amusing Life

Very fun chapter and great description of the park! I love love love our Gussy. He's a terrific alligator lol. The scene on the kissing tower was awesome. Maybe you don't kiss good enough... as if! LMAO. I love this softer family Brian. 

Then we have Brian the stallion. That was one hot ride they went on. Fantastic way to end the first day of their excellent family vacation. I can't wait for day two!

Thank you for the wonderful update!



Author's Response:

 

Laura,

Gus is a great kid, and a lot of fun to write. We both have kids so Gus gets to be a combination of all of them. Family Brian is great to see.

Those two have the best sex. For them it just comes naturally.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 2:43 am Title: An Amusing Life

great descriptions of the park- really felt that I was there-  I just loved Gus on the Kissing Tower-  he is rather amusing-  seems like Brian is really warming up to the family idea-  I like that



Author's Response:

 

sfscarlet,

Gus is a great little kid. 

Brian is realizing that this is what he may want and need in his life.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 4:58 pm Title: An Amusing Life

Yee haw!



Author's Response:

 

Chadmom,

Glad you liked the ride.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



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Ride 'em, Cowboy Justin! LOL! TAG & Lorie!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 4:34 pm Title: An Amusing Life

Gus was an excellent alligator. ;)

Wow that was a very hot ride.  My kind of vacation.  Thanks for the fabulous update.

Hugs,

Jessica



Author's Response:

 

Jessica,

Gus is a great kid.

Definitely a hot ride. That's the way it is with them.

More soon.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 4:06 pm Title: An Amusing Life

Out of the mouths of babes...Gus really knows how to embarrass Justin & Brian. "Maybe you don't kiss good enough" Nice! lol He had everyone laughing! 

What does Brian mean...IF Gus is his son, come on now, he can just look at him to see he's his. Great chapter, lots of fun



Author's Response:

 

Glo,

Gus is just being honest about how he sees things.

We haven't gotten the DNA results yet. Soon.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 2:30 pm Title: An Amusing Life

I really love the intro with the geode metaphor; it suits Brian so well!

As for the rest, it's great to see the family building up, with Daphne to help.

The cowboy's ride was epic and HOT!

Thank you for the update.



Author's Response:

 

SNO,

Yes it does suit Brian well. That part is thanks to Tagsit and Hotesse.

Their sex is always HOT.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 11:55 am Title: An Amusing Life

What a fun chapter ! Gus is so lovely and good "alligator" i love that family Thank you for the update



Author's Response:

 

Marie,

Glad you enjoyed it. 

Gus is a great kid.

More soon.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 11:39 am Title: An Amusing Life

What a wonderful chapter.  I love how Brian let Gus be alligator.  Gus did a fine job.  I've never been to Hershey and it sounds like so much fun!  Can't wait for the second day's adventure.



Author's Response:

 

YumYum,

Kids can definitely surprise you with what they are able to do.

Any place where there are happy kids is good.

More fun and silliness coming.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: Mychad Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 6:28 am Title: An Amusing Life

Thanks for the update!

That's funny, I opened the site thinking that I wished there was a new chapter of that story that I could read before going to sleep and there it was! (Hum, maybe I should try to think "I wish I had a million dollars" while checking my bank account and see what happens...)

Anyway, that was a fun chapter, I like the family dynamic that is developing and the presence of Daphne as well. Can't wait for the rest!



Author's Response:

 

Mychad,

Sorry for the wait. But hope it was worth it.

If your other thought worked we could quit our jobs and just write.

Hopefully we will have more for you soon.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2017 5:23 am Title: An Amusing Life

Simply marvelous....very very fun and lovable chapter.

Thank u very much for the update.



Author's Response:

 

Navneet,

Thanks, this was a fun part to write.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

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