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Name: Glo (Signed) · Date: Aug 23, 2017 4:06 pm · Chapter: An Amusing Life

Out of the mouths of babes...Gus really knows how to embarrass Justin & Brian. "Maybe you don't kiss good enough" Nice! lol He had everyone laughing! 

What does Brian mean...IF Gus is his son, come on now, he can just look at him to see he's his. Great chapter, lots of fun



Author's Response:

 

Glo,

Gus is just being honest about how he sees things.

We haven't gotten the DNA results yet. Soon.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Aug 23, 2017 2:30 pm · Chapter: An Amusing Life

I really love the intro with the geode metaphor; it suits Brian so well!

As for the rest, it's great to see the family building up, with Daphne to help.

The cowboy's ride was epic and HOT!

Thank you for the update.



Author's Response:

 

SNO,

Yes it does suit Brian well. That part is thanks to Tagsit and Hotesse.

Their sex is always HOT.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: marie-france (Signed) · Date: Aug 23, 2017 11:55 am · Chapter: An Amusing Life

What a fun chapter ! Gus is so lovely and good "alligator" i love that family Thank you for the update



Author's Response:

 

Marie,

Glad you enjoyed it. 

Gus is a great kid.

More soon.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Aug 23, 2017 11:39 am · Chapter: An Amusing Life

What a wonderful chapter.  I love how Brian let Gus be alligator.  Gus did a fine job.  I've never been to Hershey and it sounds like so much fun!  Can't wait for the second day's adventure.



Author's Response:

 

YumYum,

Kids can definitely surprise you with what they are able to do.

Any place where there are happy kids is good.

More fun and silliness coming.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: Mychad (Signed) · Date: Aug 23, 2017 6:28 am · Chapter: An Amusing Life

Thanks for the update!

That's funny, I opened the site thinking that I wished there was a new chapter of that story that I could read before going to sleep and there it was! (Hum, maybe I should try to think "I wish I had a million dollars" while checking my bank account and see what happens...)

Anyway, that was a fun chapter, I like the family dynamic that is developing and the presence of Daphne as well. Can't wait for the rest!



Author's Response:

 

Mychad,

Sorry for the wait. But hope it was worth it.

If your other thought worked we could quit our jobs and just write.

Hopefully we will have more for you soon.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: Aug 23, 2017 5:23 am · Chapter: An Amusing Life

Simply marvelous....very very fun and lovable chapter.

Thank u very much for the update.



Author's Response:

 

Navneet,

Thanks, this was a fun part to write.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: ADreamer (Signed) · Date: Aug 20, 2017 3:21 pm · Chapter: Life With Others

Love this story!

 



Author's Response:

 

ADreamer,

So glad you're enjoying our story.

More soon.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

 



Name: Gcleft77 (Signed) · Date: Aug 20, 2017 1:48 am · Chapter: Life With Others

I love this Brian update soon, please



Author's Response:

 

Gcleft,

We will update as soon as we can. Promise.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: Aug 19, 2017 4:24 pm · Chapter: Life With Others

Linds doesnt deserve gus..she is a bigger bitch than the ice queen ..

Such an heart warming and funny chapter...i loved it.

Thanks for the chapter...u guys have done a excellent job.



Author's Response:

 

nakur,

Some people definitely shouldn't be parents.

You don't get to drop them off when you get tired of them.

The group is in for a fun trip.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: Aug 19, 2017 3:37 pm · Chapter: Changes In Life

That was soo emotional chapter ....heart breaking even.



Author's Response:

 

nkaur,

At least they know they can depend on each other to be there.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: Aug 19, 2017 3:25 pm · Chapter: A Grown Up Life

Omg...the whiney is back..jesus..i dont like him already..lols..will see is he gonna create trouble for britin or not .



Author's Response:

 

nkaur,

Don't worry about the whiney weasel, he has a very short part in this story.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: Aug 19, 2017 2:02 pm · Chapter: Kid's Life

Too good...awesome work guys...i cant seem to stop smiling while reading this..thank u sooooo much.



Author's Response:

 

nkaur,

We're trying to make this a happy story, even though like in real life there are some not so happy parts.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: Aug 19, 2017 1:25 pm · Chapter: The Easy Life

Aaammmaaazzziiinnnggg...i sooo love jealous and Possessive brian ...super hot...this brian is not stubborn and scared of relationships..he is more mature in here...i like that. Thanks for the great chapter. 



Author's Response:

 

nkaur,

Brian has realized that he needs to grow up and has found someone who he is not opposed to share that with.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: Aug 19, 2017 12:53 pm · Chapter: Life Lessons

Marvelous..really enjoying it..thanks



Author's Response:

 

nkaur,

Glad you're enjoying the story.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: Aug 19, 2017 10:36 am · Chapter: A Dog's Life

New member in the family...soo cute sunshine the dog...amazing going ...i am soo glad i decided to read this today.

Thank u very much.



Author's Response:

 

nkaur,

Sunshine really was an amazing dog. 

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: Aug 19, 2017 10:04 am · Chapter: Living One's Life

Fanfuckingtastic...loved it.



Author's Response:

 

nkaur,

Those two never have bad sex.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: Aug 19, 2017 9:50 am · Chapter: Hunger For Life

Omg...gus was super adorable and the center..brian is behaving like he is really gus's dad..soo sweet...these 3 have a such great connection with each other....bj phone sex was hot.

Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

 

nkaur,

Gus was happy to have something fun to do. 

Any sex with those two is bound to be hot.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: Aug 19, 2017 8:28 am · Chapter: Life Alterations

Omg....that was sooooo exciting and fun and soooo much spectacular ...i enjoyed it soo much..thanks for excellent story. 



Author's Response:

 

nkaur,

Every child should have someone like Brian.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: Aug 19, 2017 7:20 am · Chapter: Life Of The Mind

Poor gus is tormented ...he is having panic attacks at such a little age..brian will be angry when he finds out about the torture gus experienced the same he once got from his own parents .



Author's Response:

 

nkaur,

Brian is realizing that Gus has been hurt.

It tears him up to see the reactions in Gus that he used to feel himself.

Things will get better.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: Aug 19, 2017 6:42 am · Chapter: Life Experiences

Our sunshine is soo f***ing strong...i love him.

amazing chapter...that was really unexpected twist again.

 



Author's Response:

 

nkaur,

Justin has definitely been through a lot. 

Brian needs someone who is strong, but in a different way than Brian is, to show him that life can be good even if you show your feelings.

~Tagsit and Lorie~



Name: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: Aug 19, 2017 6:04 am · Chapter: Zoo Life

Finally they met...cant miss the sparks...lol...totally amazing ...they are naturally close to each other at the first meet.

Thanks for the lovely update.



Author's Response:

 

nkaur,

Those two always have sparks when they are near each other.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: Aug 19, 2017 5:13 am · Chapter: Life In The Slow Lane

Aww...that was sweet chapter...soo gus was too harmed by his soo called parents sam and linds..hmm...going great.



Author's Response:

 

nkaur,

Brian knows what it's like to live and be scared all the time. He just wants to protect Gus.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 



Name: BritinForever (Signed) · Date: Aug 12, 2017 9:10 pm · Chapter: Life With Others

Wow, Lindsay is a piece of work.  I'm glad she made everything so easy for Brian though.  Gus is his whether the DNA test comes back as suspected or not.

Can't wait for their fun adventure at Hershey Park.



Author's Response:

 

BritinForever,

Some people just don't deserve the great things they've been given.

What she did was done out of selfishness, not to help Brian, but to make it easier on her. The tests will be back some time after the trip.

Hershey park will be fun for all of them.

~Tagsit and Lorie~



Name: Glo (Signed) · Date: Aug 12, 2017 8:57 pm · Chapter: Life With Others

Wow, fucking Lindsay...goodbye is right! She doesn't deserve Gus! I'm glad Brian & Justin will have Gus all to themselves with no legal problems. 

A family vacation...nice! Wish I had a Hummer lol



Author's Response:

 

Glo,

Yes, now we just wait for the DNA results.

It will be a fun trip.

Of course Justin has a nice car. 

~Tagsit and Lorie~



Name: marie-france (Signed) · Date: Aug 12, 2017 12:06 pm · Chapter: Life With Others

Gus is so lovely defending his B'ine !! I can't wait for the next chapter to see the family at the park ! I'm glad Daphnée is here !



Author's Response:

 

Marie,

Gus really is a special little boy.

They will have a lot of fun at the park.

Daphne is a great character. We only want to keep the crappy people out.

~Tagsit and Lorie~



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