Reviews For Unexpected

Name: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: Jul 08, 2017 8:01 am · Chapter: Life Unexpected

All hail the need for special pants.

Author's Response:



Wonder where you buy those 'special pants'.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Name: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: Jul 08, 2017 7:57 am · Chapter: Life Unexpected

Omg...that was sooooo brian kinney...thingy reallyyyy...😂😁😀

It was awesome chapter..☺

Love everything soo far..thank u very much guys..❤

Author's Response:



That was fun to write. Just imagining Gus' questions and Brian's reactions.

More fun to come.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Name: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: Jul 08, 2017 7:44 am · Chapter: The Life of Brian

Gus is funny little kid...with his daddy oopps i mean b'ain they rock..😀😉

I am soo looking forward to more...thanks.

Author's Response:



They certainly do make quite a pair.

Lots of new things for them both to come.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Name: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: Jul 08, 2017 7:31 am · Chapter: Life Happens

Love love love it..😊

Interesting start...great plot and well written like always...❤

Thank.u for sharing.

Author's Response:



So glad you are loving the start of this.

Lots of surprises to come.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Name: Lorna (Signed) · Date: Jul 08, 2017 6:35 am · Chapter: Life Happens

Loving the start of the story and looking forward to more 

Author's Response:



Happy you are enjoying the story.

More soon. <3

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Name: Glo (Signed) · Date: Jul 07, 2017 11:35 pm · Chapter: Life Unexpected

Well Brian is sure learning a lot. Gus is the  cutest! Of course he's going to get into things if Brian is going to sleep. Lol Can't wait for more! 

Author's Response:



All things considered Gus is pretty good, he stayed in the kitchen to eat. 

There is more fun stuff coming up. Five year olds can be very interesting.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Name: Cemegh (Signed) · Date: Jul 07, 2017 9:17 pm · Chapter: Life Happens

Moments of this chpt affected me so much with the way you have described poor gus being essentially shoved off to a complete stranger, I actually started to tear up. And by 'tear up' I mean bawl my eyes out.

Please believe that I NEVER cry when reading fanfic, so this is a first. I'm loathe to read on because I'd rather not be a complete Emo for the weekend 😢

Can I get some reassurances here, or do I need to invest in kleenex and prozac to get through this?

Oh, and obviously, loved the story.


Author's Response:



There are very few 'sad crying parts' but there are a lot of funny things and some 'happy crying parts'.

This will be mostly a happy story.

I cried while writing it too.

~Tagsit and Lorie~


Name: gert (Signed) · Date: Jul 07, 2017 2:42 am · Chapter: The Life of Brian

I am enjoying this so much!  Gus is such a cutie.  Being the mom of two boys I love the way you write him.  This has me so curious about what is going to happen.  Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response:



I have three boys and Tagsit has one. It definitely helps with the ideas for Gus.

There is a lot of fun stuff to come.

Glad you are enjoying the story.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

PS - if you have any good stories about your boys, send them our way! We might be able to incorporate them!


Name: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: Jul 07, 2017 12:29 am · Chapter: The Life of Brian

"Are you a clown?" LMAO oh, Gus! I bloody love how kids just speak their minds, and this little one is GORGEOUS. 

Brian's reaction at the idea of Gus being put into a group or foster home was beyond perfect. Like he doesn't want the kid (right now ;)) but he knows the kid has already been through a lot and doesn't want to put him through the trauma of being handed off to yet another new person. He is so daddy material (he just doesn't know it.)

LOL at Brian not remembering when he slept with a woman, he really must have been wasted, bless him.

Seriously so excited for this story, to see how Justin fits into their lives, and to find out more about Brian and Gus and their story :)

Author's Response:



That question was the result of imagining what a child who has never been around someone who dresses like that would innocently ask.

Brian's reaction to where Gus would be put is the result of putting other people and their needs first, especially the needs of a child.

Someone should probably wear a chastity belt if he's going to be out drinking.

Justin will be along in a few more chapters - with some surprises of his own.

~Tag and Lorie~


Name: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: Jul 07, 2017 12:17 am · Chapter: Life Happens

I can't tell you how excited I am for this story, this already sounds sooooo good. I could totally picture Brian's face, his eyes rolling when he was fucking that annoying trick. And then how he completely changed when he was alone with Gus. How he knew how scared he must have been. How he could relate just a little to how scared the kid must have been - that made my heart ache.

Gus is ADORABLE omg. "Are you my daddy?" I could totally see Brian's face in my mind here too lol. Poor guy haha!

I loved Gus's description of guava juice, kids really have a way with words.


*adds to bookshelf*

Author's Response:



This story will be a mostly fluffy and happy with only a little angst.

Brian doesn't think he father material because of his upbringing, but his ability to try and make things better for others makes him perfect for it.

Kids can be fun to listen to, at least sometimes.

~Tag And Lorie~

Name: Sallyo (Signed) · Date: Jul 06, 2017 8:46 pm · Chapter: The Life of Brian

I already love this fic.  Thanks for updating quickly. 

Author's Response:



This will be a (mostly) happy fic.

Very happy you are enjoying it.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Name: Glo (Signed) · Date: Jul 06, 2017 8:43 pm · Chapter: The Life of Brian

Awesome! Gus is so cute! Brian is in for a reality check lol when will Justin come into play? 

Author's Response:



Brian will learn quite a lot from Gus.

Justin will be along in a few more chapters, but Gus has a few more things to teach Brian first.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Name: CarolK1943 (Signed) · Date: Jul 06, 2017 4:25 pm · Chapter: Life Happens

Great start! This is definitely on my "read" list.

Author's Response:



Glad you liked it.

More soon.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Name: starlight (Signed) · Date: Jul 06, 2017 3:33 am · Chapter: Life Happens

I have sooooo many questions, but love the start and can't wait for more. 

Author's Response:



Hopefully we will answer all of your questions in the story. 

Glad you enjoyed the first chapter.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Name: Glo (Signed) · Date: Jul 06, 2017 2:23 am · Chapter: Life Happens

Nice start to what I'm sure is going to be a very interesting AU story. I have to say though, any mother that puts her young child in a taxi alone, doesn't deserve to have him.


Author's Response:

As I'm sure you expect, there's a story behind that... lol. Thanks for reading

Name: chadmom63 (Signed) · Date: Jul 06, 2017 12:11 am · Chapter: Life Happens

Nice start! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response:



More soon.

Glad you like the start.


~Tagsit and Lorie~

Name: Marny (Signed) · Date: Jul 05, 2017 10:51 pm · Chapter: Life Happens

Hmm Brian doesn't know any Peterson? Doesn't know Lindsay? Please more.

Author's Response:



She moved away after college.

More soon.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

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