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Reviewer: Wendy Dawn Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2017 3:22 pm Title: Life Happens

OMG!  This is one of the best stories I've read. 

Gus is so cute! He totally steals your heart with his cuteness and observations. Through the eyes of a child everything is so simple and easy to explain. I laughed so hard at his observations on male anatomy.

Well written and believable. The opening of each chapter with Brian's insight was brilliant! (Especially the geode comparison.) More like this please!



Author's Response:

 

Wendy Dawn,

Thank you very much.

Gus is definitely precocious, and as brutally honest as his father.

The credit for the openings of the chapters goes to Tagsit.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2017 3:09 pm Title: An Amusing Life

Just imagining Brian on all those kiddie rides is too cute for words. 



Author's Response:

Susi,

Brian wants to make sure that as long as Gus is with him, the boy has the best time he can provide.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2017 11:53 am Title: Life With Others

i want to go too. Can I?



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

There are many of us that would be willing to join them.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2017 11:30 am Title: Changes In Life

Does Michael ever think about anybody other than himself?



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

He never does because is is still a spoiled brat.

At least Brian has his blond love to help him feel better.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2017 11:04 am Title: A Grown Up Life

Michael will be a pain in the ass. I'm sure of it. 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

Some people will always be their entitled selves, especially the weasel.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2017 10:04 am Title: Kid's Life

Poor Gus. Whatever he went through, it must have been devastating. 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

Gus went through several things, the last of which was being abandoned by the only parent he had ever known. His reaction isn't unusual, but with caring men like Brian and Justin around, he will be fine.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2017 9:04 am Title: The Easy Life

Can Michael stay in Europe? He won't be as accepting as the rest of the family. 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

Michael will be back.

Don't worry though, the weasel will be put in his place.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2017 8:31 am Title: Life Lessons

I love that Brian had his first time with Justin. 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

Brian will have many 'firsts' with his blond.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 6:02 pm Title: A Dog's Life

Now he just needs a house with rose bushes at the front. By the way I love all the things you come up with for Brian to say instead of fuck. 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

It may take him a while to get there.

Brian did try to keep it G-rated in front of Gus.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 12:27 pm Title: Living One's Life

It sounds like an amazing first date to me. 

 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

The first date was great. More fun to come.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 11:58 am Title: Hunger For Life

I hope Emmett will have time to watch the kids. Daddy Brian is absolutely hilarious. 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

Like Brian said Emmett loves kids. He is also a closet matchmaker.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 11:23 am Title: Life Alterations

I would love to see Brian with painted toenails. 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

It's hard for Brian to say no to his Midget.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 10:29 am Title: Life Of The Mind

Gus seems traumatized. Poor little guy. 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

Gus has been through a lot, but Brian will help to heal him.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 9:49 am Title: Life Experiences

Poor Justin and Molly. It must be devastating to go through that. 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

It was a horrible experience for them but they stayed together and got the help they needed.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 9:36 am Title: Zoo Life

So they finally meet. Love the zoo experience. 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

Things will get more interesting now.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 9:20 am Title: Life In The Slow Lane

Brian is pretty good at this. I wonder how long it will take him to realize that Gus is his. 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

It will be a while before the truth is out.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 8:37 am Title: Life Unexpected

I'm laughing my ass off here. I love how uncomfortable Brian is. 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

Brian's discomfort may happen again, and again.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 8:25 am Title: The Life of Brian

Sooo cute. I hope Brian will survive this weekend. 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

Brian will definitely have an interesting weekend.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 8:08 am Title: Life Happens

OMG That's so adorable and sad at the same time. I can't wait to see how it goes with these two. 



Author's Response:

 

Susi,

It will be an interesting ride for these two.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2017 2:17 am Title: The Best Life

Finally had a chance to read this wonderful, fulfilling tale! What an Unexpected and Amazing life indeed!

HUGS Y'all!

~Chelle



Author's Response:

 

Chelle,

Thanks.

Glad you finally got a chance to read our story.

~Tag and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2017 7:40 pm Title: The Best Life

Love it! A great & happy ending for this wonderful family! I want to move into their home myself, sounds like heaven! Tag & Lorie, you're right, that is how life is...unexpected <3



Author's Response:

 

Glo,

Thank you.

They deserve to be happy.

I want to be adopted by them.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2017 5:47 pm Title: The Best Life

Wonderful story! I guess Gus' coffee making and breakfast for Sunshine were based on your kids' experiments.

Glad that Brian didn't get too angry as Gus just wanted to eat and be nice for his daddies.

Molly's claim was so moving and so right: it was a difficult position for her after the news about Gus' adoption by Justin.

Thank you for entertaining us with this powerful and very funny tale.



Author's Response:

 

Sno,

The coffee making came from my (Lorie's) youngest sister making coffee for our aunt. The chicken in sauce was my son Matt eating cold spaghetti out of the fridge one morning when he was 2. He really was orange after that. 

Brian is learning to be a patient and loving parent from Justin.

Molly was great and very mature. She was upset for herself but not jealous and blaming Gus because of it, she loves the little boy enough to be happy for him.

So glad you enjoyed this story.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

 

Reviewer: DavidR Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2017 5:22 pm Title: The Best Life

     Thanks for this wonderful story.  Brian has come such a long

long way.  However, you must give credit to Gus, Justin, and

Molly.  The four of them are a terrific family.  Each one adding a

piece to the now/new Kinney family.  It was fun to read about

them.  It was also fun to read some of the hilarious comments

that didn’t go unnoticed.  Such as Gus comparing the shower in

the Cabin to a Person Car Wash.  There were many more such

coments.  

    Anyway, once again, thanks for the story I did enjoy it.

DavidR



Author's Response:

 

David,

Thank you.

We're very glad you enjoyed reading our story.

It's great hearing from people who enjoy what we write.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: OBabyRN Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2017 3:08 pm Title: The Best Life

Great story!  



Author's Response:

 

OBabyRN,

Thanks.

Glad you enjoyed it.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2017 12:35 pm Title: The Best Life

Amazing story ! Happy end happy family and happy me !!!

Thank you very much ladies !



Author's Response:

 

Marie,

You're welcome.

They do make a beautiful family.

Glad you enjoyed our story

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

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