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Reviewer: nickknack Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2017 10:03 am Title: Life Happens

Fantastic story. I loved it - you can never complain about a happy and loved Brian :-)



Author's Response:

 

Nickknack,

Thank you.

Glad you enjoyed our story.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2017 9:55 am Title: The Best Life

I soo enjoyed the story...perfect ending...such a awesome job u guys had done...congrats...lots of love..keep sharing..keep writing..be happy.



Author's Response:

 

Navneet,

Thank you.

So happy that you enjoyed our story.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2017 3:10 am Title: The Best Life

Great ending-  nice, sweet, little angst and B/J together.  Loved the story- thanks



Author's Response:

 

sfscarlet,

You're welcome, Glad you enjoyed our story.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: Sallyo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2017 2:27 am Title: The Best Life

Thank you. This is going to be a favorite to reread. 



Author's Response:

 

Sallyo,

You're welcome, and thanks for reading our story.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2017 1:41 am Title: The Best Life

Sorry as I am to see this end this chapter was fantastic.  Learning that Molly wanted to be adopted and being very willing to do it makes Brian and Justin happy that they are all Kinney's.  Yes, I did enjoy it muchly.



Author's Response:

 

YumYum,

Thank you.

We just wanted the family to be whole and happy.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 11:38 pm Title: The Best Life

I read all the chapters and it ended the way it should with them being a wonderfully happy and all of them being at peace in their new life together.

I loved this journey it was full of laughter a few tears and lots of love.

Thank You for such a Wonderful Story :)



Author's Response:

 

BlueMyst,

Thank you. 

We're very happy that you liked the way we wrapped up the story.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 11:13 pm Title: The Best Life

What a wonderful story!  Thanks for sharing it!



Author's Response:

 

Chadmom,

Thanks.

We are happy that our story was so well received.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: Kurenohikari88 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 10:30 pm Title: Life Happens

I loved it! Amazing end, it's a perfect life for the perfect couple.



Author's Response:

 

Kurenohikari,

Thanks. 

They really are the perfect couple.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 10:05 pm Title: The Best Life

Loved this Tagsit and Lorie!!!!

Thanks for a wonderful AU story of our favorite couple/family.

Hugs,

Jessica



Author's Response:

 

Jessica,

Thanks, glad you enjoyed our story.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2017 11:49 am Title: Relaxing Life

Rofl...hahahhaha...that was hilarious..thanks for the entertaining chapter...loving it sooo much..great job guys.



Author's Response:

 

Navneet,

The new family can be a lot of fun.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2017 11:24 am Title: Life Full Circle

Aww...soo good...they cleared their status..huh..awesome.

Camping kinney-taylor style..is sure fun.



Author's Response:

 

Navneet,

They needed to clarify their relationship.

Camping can be fun, especially if it's in a real house in the woods.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2017 4:11 pm Title: Relaxing Life

First off...love the plug! :) Obviously a very proud mama.

What a wonderful time for the newly forming little family. Justin, Molly and gus are all helping to bring out the youthfulness in Brian. His fears of fatherhood are no differnt than anyone else's and Justin is asuaging his fears. Gus in his exuberance is allowing Brian to shake off his own image and be the dad he wants to be. He's starting to see the little joys through his son's eyes. Apprecatin the little things, like blowng on fluffy flowers and skinny dippig.

Had to laugh out loud at Gus playing poker. Too funny! I could totally imagine the shocked faces of the others as he cleaned up. Looks like they are going to have to practise a bit. ;) 

Loved this chapter. A much needed sense of peace for all. I guess we'll see what happens when they get back to life in the Pitts. See what challenges lay ahead for them. At least there's the knowledge that they will always have this place to get away from the stresses. I'm sure they will be taking  advantage of it.

Well done!! Already looking forward to the next chapter.

cheers

Elaine



Author's Response:

 

Elaine,

Brian needed a break and to see how much fun it could be just to be together as a family.

More soon.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Matt really was a card shark at that age. He loved to play and was good, even then.

~Lorie

 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2017 12:39 pm Title: Relaxing Life

Ahhhh camping Taylor and Kinney style! Lots of fun & games. So Gus is a card shark huh. awesome! lol Yeah he's gonna have a lot of fun when he gets back to his preschool class! 



Author's Response:

 

Glo,

Gus is a great kid and will surely keep both his dads on their toes.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2017 10:50 am Title: Relaxing Life

I can't stop laughing.  Gus needs special pants now. HaHaHa.

Wow Lorie!  I think I've actually seen him play on TV before. 

Thanks for a great update.



Author's Response:

 

Jessica,

Gus certainly is a trip.

More soon.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Matt has been on TV several times. It's certainly better than watching it live. I did that once. I love my son, but watching him, or anyone, play live is about as exciting as watching paint dry. Plus it makes me cry because he really is very sweet when someone gets knocked out of a tournament. I'm so proud of the man he has become. The best part is that when I miss him I can put in Matt Stout Poker on you tube and see him whenever I want.

~Lorie

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2017 10:31 am Title: Relaxing Life

It should be called "The great adventures of Kinney boys into the Wild": wonderful, funny, full of joy and laughter!

It's amazing that Brian is discovering all the joys of "camping" with his son; they can share beautiful moments and enjoy the peace and absence of disturbances that exist in their usual places. Brian can take time to live basic joys. Justin already experienced that, but it has been on hold for so long. I love the family they have.

Thank you for bringing the "pokey dicks" again; now that Gus needs some special pants too, Brian is going to hope that this joke stays in their close family. I don't think the schoolteachers will see that as a just a joke, which it is.

It also shows that Gus needs to learn boundaries which Brian is teaching him with Justin's help. In each chapter, there is a new one: it will help Gus to build a solid and respectful personality while remaining a funny and free spirit.

Great job!



Author's Response:

 

Sno,

They certainly are having a lot of fun adventures together.

They will definitely have to explain things to Gus, especially things like 'pokey dicks'. Some things need to be for only at home. I (Lorie) had to explain to one of my son's before he started school that 'dammit' was not part of his name. He will be 35 this year and still looks at me and says 'what' if I say it.

Both men will help Gus and Molly to grow up to be wonderful people.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2017 8:36 pm Title: Relaxing Life

Wow.  Congratulation's Lorie.  Now about your story, I see this as a continuing story line as Brian learns how to deal with everyday problems.  You know skinny dipping, poision ivy, and card sharks for a son.  Great job.



Author's Response:

 

YumYum,

As wonderful as this story is, it will be ending soon. 

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Thanks, Matt is a great kid (and some of Gus' antics are from him).

~Lorie

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2017 6:14 pm Title: Relaxing Life

Such a cute chapter! Nice to read while I sit thru Hurricane Irma!

 

and congrats on your son!



Author's Response:

 

Chadmom,

Brian is learning that it's good to be a family.

Stay safe during the storm.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

I'm very proud of my son. He also runs a charity tournament. 

~Lorie

 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2017 6:02 pm Title: Relaxing Life

i like the chapter this is a good life ! Than you !



Author's Response:

 

Marie,

They are having a great time.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2017 9:19 pm Title: Life Full Circle

Things are definitely moving along.  I'm so glad that they are happy.  I know Brian is scared but he's jumping in with both feet.  I'm so proud of him.

Gus is just adorable.  Who knew a little boy would get so much enjoyment from peeing outside? lol

Thanks for an amazing update.

Hugs,
Jessica



Author's Response:


Jessica,

That scene came from the first time Lorie's middle son went camping after he was toilet trained. Little boys love to pee outside.

More camping fun in the next chapter.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

PS. Actually, little boys love to pee, period. They will pee on anything that isn't moving . . . LOL. TAG

 

 

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2017 7:20 pm Title: Life Full Circle

It's nice that Brian is getting to do the things he never did as a kid.  The cabin is fantastic and I think Justin was ready to remember the good times spent there.  A new place for them all is a wonderful idea.



Author's Response:

 

YumYum,

Brian now gets to live his life as he should have but now he will do it through the eyes of his child.

Brian has already done a lot to help his lover heal from what happened to him.

They can have a fresh start as a family.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2017 5:12 pm Title: Life Full Circle

Sweet chapter! I want to see the new family with Brian and Justin married happy ending All deserve this, after  their sad or bad lives. Thank you for the update



Author's Response:

 

Marie,

The end will definitely be a happy one.

There is just no other way with those two.

Love always wins.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2017 4:51 pm Title: Life Full Circle

Well they are just too cute for words! "Will you be my main squeeze?" lmao That cabin sounds lovely, like a home away from home. That's MY version of what camping is lol 



Author's Response:

 

Glo,

That is definitely the best way to camp.

They do make a great couple.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2017 3:48 pm Title: Life Full Circle

Yeah, Brian is "camping", sort of. It sounds to be more than a cabin, though.

They did take the right decision, to officially leave together.



Author's Response:

 

Sno,

That's Brian's idea of 'camping', which is why Justin called him 'Madam Queen'.

The decision to live together will benifit all of them.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: DavidR Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2017 6:17 pm Title: Answers In Life

Hi,

Thanks for this terrific chapter.  I have been waiting and waiting

and waiting for Brian to get the results of THE TEST.  Well – it was

worth waiting.  Everyone but Brian was sure Gus was his son. 

Now it is official and I am so happy that Brian is happy, that Gus is

happy, and Justin and Molly are happy.  It was a wonderful

moment when Justin read the results.  To top it off, Gus is now

calling Justin, Papa.  That was just terrific.

Thanks for the story and thanks for this wonderful chapter.

 

DavidR



Author's Response:

 

David,

Brian just needed that last bit of proof that the little boy he had fallen in love with was indeed his and that no one could take him away.

The four of them will make a wonderful family.

More family fun in the next chapter.

~Tagsit and Lorie~

 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 07, 2017 4:56 pm Title: Answers In Life

First of all, I'm shocked that Jack/Joanie gave Brian any birthday present at all! Wow, how disappointing for him...Absolutely loved the conversation between Brian, Emmett & Deb. They were so sweet to him, saying yeah duh, it's about time and thank God you found someone! Loved it.

Gus was so cute with the video and finding out that Brian is indeed his daddy...and asking Justin to be his other daddy...awwwwwww the feels! 



Author's Response:

 

Glo,

Parents, even bad ones can have moments. Not that it turned out well.

Brian got the support he needed from the people that matter.

Gus is a very lucky little boy.

~Tagsit and Lorie~ 

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