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Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2022 2:20 pm Title: Chapter 25

Great ending to a great story!!! I loved that Mel and Lindsay were on the good side of things this go round. Michael and Deb, though, wow. But I'm with Brian - at least Michael ended up with some jail time and didn't just get a slap on the wrist.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 11, 2021 4:33 am Title: Chapter 25

Another excellent story thank you 

Reviewer: Calliesky Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2019 5:21 am Title: Chapter 25

Beautiful story. I really loved how everyone saw the real Brian  

Reviewer: imherenow Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2019 7:51 am Title: Chapter 25

Love this fic. Finished it in one sitting and is already missing these characters dearly.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2019 6:05 pm Title: Chapter 25

Just loved it

Reviewer: Azabeth Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2018 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 25

I really enjoyed this story! Great ending even though I never wanted it to come ;) I loved that Brian was able to see everyone as they really were and so glad Micheal and David got jail time. This was so much fun to read- thanks so much for writing and sharing <3

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2018 9:02 am Title: Chapter 25

Brilliant work..loved it.

Thanks for sharing.

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Date: Jan 23, 2018 4:20 am Title: Chapter 17

What did he said ?? Damnnn

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2018 4:11 am Title: Chapter 16

Mikey is pathetic.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2018 5:05 pm Title: Chapter 13

Ever the romantic justin...cute.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2018 2:31 pm Title: Chapter 7

The plot is thickening ...now the fun part will start.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2018 1:34 pm Title: Chapter 5

Awww....sooo sweet was last part.

Reviewer: nkaur550 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2018 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 2

Excellent story loving it.

Reviewer: Azabeth Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2017 8:44 am Title: Chapter 25

This story was too amazing to fully put into words. The characters were consistent and the story was perfectly balanced with plot and character development. I loved that Michael and David got a proper punishment for the fraud. It is a huge personal issue with me, and I hate people not getting punished for things like fraud and stealing, I was so mad at Brian when he didn’t want to try and get the money back from Michael originally, but I’m so pleased that you changed his mind, and the ending was excellent. This has been one of my most favourite stories, thank you so much for writing and sharing this :)

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2017 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 25

A really great story. I loved it. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2017 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 24

I hope they get some time for this and not just probation. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2017 11:53 am Title: Chapter 23

At least the mother seems to want to clear it all up. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2017 11:35 am Title: Chapter 22

That sounds way more logical than David's story. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2017 9:51 am Title: Chapter 21

David's receptionist did it without him knowing? Somehow I can't believe that. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2017 9:41 am Title: Chapter 20

David is in on it? Wow, I never thought of him. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2017 8:33 am Title: Chapter 19

They are getting married. Yippee. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2017 8:23 am Title: Chapter 18

It's nice to get insight into all their relationships. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2017 8:14 am Title: Chapter 17

Oh I want to know what he said to Michael. It must have been good. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2017 8:08 am Title: Chapter 16

So Debbie is back blaming Brian for everything. I can't say I'm really surprised, just disappointed. 

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2017 8:00 am Title: Chapter 15

Cynthia's reaction is absolutely adorable. 

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