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Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 24

They got them!!!  Yes!!!

Now hopefully they will be all tied up with court to but their noses into Brian and Justin's life.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 24

Michael has one again proved himself to be self centered and stupid.  Love it.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 13, 2017 4:40 am Title: Chapter 24

Great update. They dug their holes perfectly timed together. Too bad they're filling up with enough water so quickly they'll sink before they could swim

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2017 8:53 am Title: Chapter 23

Well I would still like to see Brian burn the comics.  David is a piece of work.  I can't believe he'd blame everything on his son.  That's low.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2017 6:30 am Title: Chapter 23

Han is going to be worse than his dad if he keeps this attitude so young.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2017 3:59 am Title: Chapter 23

Thanks for coming back. Hope Michael and David both burn.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2017 2:24 am Title: Chapter 23

Ah, I see a chance to get even with Michael here.  I am so looking forward to the next chapter.  

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 22

At least Deb is staying away for the time being. REALLY glad that Brian is being his normal forgiving  self whenit comes to her. She needs to really understand how far she went and that not everythign is so easily fixed. Will she bide her time though and respect his wishes or will she try to bulldoze him into submission? She can be like that, and it's not something that would be beneficial for her or her future relationship wiht Brian and Justin. (or the rest of the rest of the gang I'm sure)

WOW! DAvid is in deeper that I imagined. To involve his son....my goodness!  Aboslutely unbelievable. Not only will Hank eventually find out the truth about why Michael left, but he's going to end up in soooooooooo much trouble since appatently, Brian isn't the only victom of their schemes. Oh man o man....Soooooo much trouble!! While I feel a teeny bit sorry for Hank, knowing there's every chance his future is screwed, just like cole said, he's 16 and knows the difference between right adn wrong.

Excellent chapter! Getting so exciting!!

Cheers,

Elaine

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2017 4:26 pm Title: Chapter 22

Is the good Dr David trying to get a jail free card too? I don't believe the story he is telling Brian.

I could imagine his face when he understood who the "kid" Brian was partner with!

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2017 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 22

Wow!  How low can you go David? 

I'm glad Cole and Brian are getting closer.  I think that is important to Justin.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2017 1:39 am Title: Chapter 22

Looks like David was in on it from the beginning.  I'll have to wait to find out if that's true.  But it will be well worth it.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2017 1:31 am Title: Chapter 22

Ooh the plot thickens. 

Time for so many secrets and truths to come out. David showing up in Pittsburgh only shows that he's running scared. 

Great chapter.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2017 1:11 am Title: Chapter 22

Wow . Way to David a rat too. Very sneaky.

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2017 12:08 am Title: Chapter 22

David's in trouble now! GOod lol!

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2017 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 22

Brian is smart to trust his instincts and Cole was smart enough to know Brian needed to talk and listened to help figure out what David is really up to.

David Is Such A Humongous A-Hole and he deserves all that Brian and his former clients will heap on him.

Deb like Michael is just bidding her time until she is back in Brian's good graces and can start exerting her power (What little she actually thinks she has <eye roll>) over everyone again with herself <shakes head>

Wonder where Michael is?

Biting my nails waiting for the next chapter ;)

 

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 6:09 pm Title: Chapter 21

Wondering just how long deb will stick t oher guns on this. Will she eventually revert to "we need to help Michael" mode? I mean...he's going to be in one MAJOR heap of trouble! Man oh man! And what the hell was David thinking? Does he really love Michael or is this just an opportunity for him to stick it to Brian? How can he really love Michael still? He needs his head examined! his practice is going to go down the shitter for this! He'll be very luck if he and Michael don't go to jail. (OH but I hope they di!! lol) The receptionist too is in a hole heap of poo. All 3 of them have absoloutely no idea what or who they are up agains. Not even just Brian, but Justin's grandfather as well!

Gotta say...I am anxiously awaiting what's going to come of all this!

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 3:15 pm Title: Chapter 21

Whoa, Debbie saw the light and didn't fall for the usual litany "Brian is hurting me, protect me Ma"; good for her and for Brian as well.

I hope they will crash both Michael and David.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 21

Finally Debbie's eyes are wide open. Good for her throwing Michael out! He & David are so screwed! 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 9:52 am Title: Chapter 21

Looks like both Michael and David are going to be in some big trouble. 

Deb needs to smarten up.  She needs to understand that her son is an asshole. lol  I think she might be coming around....maybe.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 4:26 am Title: Chapter 21

I bet David is going to be pissed when he finds out what his receptionist sent in the bills that Brian paid.  Michael is so stupid.  Hoping for jailtime.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2017 4:19 am Title: Chapter 21

Deb deserves to have her ass kicked for all the crap she put everyone through, especially Brian in her quest to keep Michael Forever Fourteen, by her side , Her Precious Little Angel, and enjoying the power she exerted over everyone with her constant browbeating

I hope David paid Michael from an account under both their names.

Does Boring Dr. Dave actually think he will be able to stop Brian, he can't even get Michael to love him so how the Hell is he going to stop Brian from ripping his life apart??

Michael shouldn't be worried he should be terrified because Brian is not going to back down in his quest to destroy them both.

Dr. Dave's  receptionist might be quite a font of information about the practice, considering they could he could be arrested as  an accomplices to the fact and it would be in his best interest to make a deal first.

Hopefully David is on his way to Pittsburgh?

Will Deb stick to the truth or go back to denial when her baby is hauled away in handcuffs??

This story gets more thrilling with every new chapter :)

 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2017 1:34 pm Title: Chapter 20

Michael & Dr Dave are in so much trouble! I just hope Brian doesn't do anything that will get him sent to jail lol

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2017 9:33 am Title: Chapter 20

I love how much Justin and Brian support and respect each other.  It's a quality that I think was very overlooked on the show.

Thanks for the update.

 

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2017 5:25 am Title: Chapter 20

Now that everybody is asking the good questions, I bet some bad news are going to surface.

I just hope that Deb will see what has been going on since the accident.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2017 4:51 am Title: Chapter 20

Yay. Thievery and secrets.

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