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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2017 3:50 am Title: Chapter 20

Well things are moving along and I can't wait to see where it ends.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2017 3:45 am Title: Chapter 20

David deserves to have his Ass kicked along with Michael and Deb!!O

Of course the best revenge is taking everything he holds dear which is his money but more importantly it is his reputation, now that will leave a mark that will sting for years.

He went to medical school, made a name for himself in his field and will lose it because he can't get over Michael was using him?

WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK HE IS DOING NOW DUMBASS?!?!?!!!!!!!!

Love that Brian's Real family is standing by him and not letting Deb exert what little power she has over them.

Hope she has a strong winter coat cause the front heading her way  i is calling for Frigid Temperatures where she, Michael and David will be residing.

Especially when David has to pay back all that money he gave Michael while tricking Brian.

Love Vic telling Brian to do what he needs to do and that he will not turn his back on him, what a wonderful Father Figure Brian has :)

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2017 3:41 am Title: Chapter 20

I have a feeling David knows nothing.

Time to bring Michael down! If need be Deb can go along for the ride.

Reviewer: emac66 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2017 6:57 pm Title: Chapter 19

RE-reading this as it's been so long that I've had the time to read, keep up and review. 

Michael is a massive pile of camel shit. Wow! I mean what kidn of person does that to another. adn Deb!! Man alive?!? they both make me feel ill. I can't even imagine what my reaction would be to meeting people like that in RL. 

Justin grandfather is going to be a force to be reckoned with, and with the rest of teh family clearly on B&J's side now, deb and Michael may find themselves in a hole they can't get themselves out of. I just don't see Deb making a clear stance towards Michael. She's to hardwired to stick up for him, excuse him etc, even at the risk of losing everyone around her. Mainly because she really doesn't believe that anyone would permanantly stand up to her. Michael is cut from teh same cloth, only he's more manipulative. deb does it out of a blinded love for her son. micahel does it because he's a selfish little asshole that only wants for himself and doesn't caare about anyone else. I honestly think he'd throw his mom under the bus if it gave him a better chance with Brian. will Deb ever see that though??

Everyone but those two seem to have finally take the blinders off. Blake and Drew never had them to begin with and are finally going to be able to have proper lives wit their partners. 

Am really looking forward to where this is all going to go. what the ramifications are etc. Loving that Mel is clearly ensconced in Brian's corner. that she and Lindsey want whats best for him and appreciate all that he's done and continues to do.

BTW...What's happening with Molly and Lee? I caught that she hauled him off somewhere. does she feel the same way?????

Brilliant chapter and story thus far.

Cheers,

Elaine

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 4:11 pm Title: Chapter 19

Let Michael tell mommy what big bad Brian said to hurt his little feelings. Let her ask him herself. Then there'd be a whole new bunch of lies floating around.

I really don't understand why Deb feels like everything happening in their little world should be based on her decisions alone. She screwed up letting Michael slide through life on somebody elses back. Payback's a bitch. Fun, but a bitch.

Yeah Lindsay. 

Brian can go after the inventory of the store, collectables and all to recoup his monies. Michael would have to come up with money of his own to restock.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 3:04 pm Title: Chapter 19

Two WASPs protecting Brian, not counting the grandfather; Debbie and Michael have no chance at all.

It's great that the "family" is finally reacting to their influence.

Did Brian and Justin get engaged in two seconds?

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 2:35 pm Title: Chapter 19

Love to see Lindsay on the boys side like this, you go you wicked wasp you! 

Yes Brian, you combine all your assets with Justin, change your POA's and let his grandfather look into things for you....ahhh I feel better now.

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 10:46 am Title: Chapter 19

A wedding in the future! :)  How they ever thought they could live without one another was beyond me.

I'm glad Lindsay actually helped the situation for a change.

Can't wait for more.

Hugs,
Jessica

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 3:45 am Title: Chapter 19

Good question Lindsay asked.

How has Michael been supporting himself these last four years since he hasn't been working?

Any money he got from the other driver's company would have been long gone by and since Michael is not the kind of person to save money for a rainy, how has he been able to keep his apartment, pay for cabs, his cellphone, food (Deb's food can only last so long despite the amount of grease cause congeals inside), light, gas and take out??

Plus how much has he spent of the settlement on his precious toys and how much did Deb give him that will have her pissed off at Michael for lying yet again for five seconds until she finds someway to blame Brian...Again!

Oh the gang has decided to ostracized Michael and Deb to protect Brian and Justin, even Vic and Rodney are joining in, that is going to hurt especially when they come to the girl's house and they can't get in (Of Course They Are Coming, Cause No One Snubs A Novotny!!)

Brian standing up to Deb must really stick in her craw she is starting to realize that her power over the family is slipping BIG TIME!! (If she can't get Brian to bend then the others won't follow)

Brian and Justin Are Getting Married!!

Hope Michael enjoys crying lol

Can't wait to see wait Grandpa Cole finds out?? :)

 

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 16, 2017 3:15 am Title: Chapter 19

Wonderful how they managed to block Deb.  And it looks like Michael will have to find a way to pay Brian back.  Loving this story.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2017 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 18

Brian coming to his Safe Haven is much better than him going out tricking, drinking and taking drugs, he feels safe enough with Justin to let him see that he isn't perfect and to know that Justin won't use it as a weakness against him.

Brian whispering that he never loved Michael into his ear hurt, but I doubt he believes it.

Ted, Blake, Emmett, Drew, Mel and Lindsay are of the same mind to protect Brian and to stop letting Michael and Deb control their lives.

Not surprised Blake and Drew could see the real Deb and Michael, they are the outsiders allowed into the Novotny Sanctum as long as they obey the rules.

I don't see Blake and Drew not doing everything they can to make sure Deb and Michael know how they feel and what they will do about their selfish behaviour.

Deb and Michael will be waiting at the hospital or outside the loft to attack Brian again, it would surprise me more if they acted like adults??

I hope Grandpa Cole can help Brian sue Michael for every cent he spent on his care.

Wonderful Update :)

 

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2017 9:17 pm Title: Chapter 18

I'm glad Justin was able to take care of Brian.  He needs to let people do that more and stop being the one taking care of everyone else.

I love that everyone is effectively shutting Michael and Deb out of their lives.  But let's see how long that lasts.

Thanks for the update.

Hugs,
Jessica

Reviewer: Kateeni Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2017 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 18

I'm really not the best at writing reviews. I just wanted to say that I am enjoying this story as I have all of your others.  Thank you for writing them.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2017 7:12 am Title: Chapter 18

The reactions from Blake, Drew and Mel are great: ban Michael and his blind mother; they are too manipulative.
It's good that Justin found the file of bills; I hope Michael will have to pay back! 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2017 6:16 am Title: Chapter 18

It takes an outsider to shed light when the inner circle can't see for trying. The guys have great partners.

I hope he can prove fraud and drags Michael through the courts. Little fucking weasel. Deb truly is no better.

Justin is his sanctuary,  his safe haven, and he wouldn't have it any other way.

So glad he finally found his backbone.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2017 4:36 am Title: Chapter 18

Looks like Blake and Drew have managed to convince Ted and Emmett that Mikey and Deb don't deserve their loyalty.  That means Brian and Justin will have buffers when needed.  I'm liking Grandpa, will they be able to prove fraud on Michael?

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2017 11:01 am Title: Chapter 17

I'm so proud of Brian.  He has needed to get Deb and Michael out of his life for awhile now.  They just don't want him to be happy unless it's with them.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2017 3:34 am Title: Chapter 17

I'm glad that Ted and Emmett and their partners are backing Brian.  Wonder what Brian told Michael that had him backing away.  And why does Michael think Brian never wanted anyone but him?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2017 3:27 am Title: Chapter 16

Tut tut.  Deb and Mikey aren't thinking of Vic at all are they?  Brian will do what's right and Vic knew that.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2017 2:52 am Title: Chapter 17

I hope he told that whining pissant to hire a good lawyer because it's time to pay back the money!!! I wonder if Michael really spent that money on the doctors since it was a clear case of Obssesion, not Hypochondria.  Did Brian pay the hospital bills directly or just have Brian write a check? Might have missed some key info about those ledgers- I'll have to reread, which is never a hardship with your work...LOL

It's about time he told Deb OFF!! Well Done and LOOOOOOOONNNNNNNGGGGGGG Overdue!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2017 2:29 am Title: Chapter 17

Yes, the slapping has begun! Well done Brian!

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2017 2:29 am Title: Chapter 15

Yes Brian go after the money even if it's only to prove a point to Michael. Deserves to be knocked down a peg or six.

I guess leaving the papers for Deb to read didn't do what Lindsay thought they would.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2017 2:26 am Title: Chapter 16

Cole and Brian are going to get along well. They both want what's best for Justin. 

Smart move on Vic's part.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2017 2:24 am Title: Chapter 17

Ooh what did Brian say to the asshole? I know. He said, " I never wanted you. I want him. I love him not you."

What a fucking great chapter. 

No matter what Michael did to her, she'll never change. He's her son.

 

Reviewer: mcm Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2017 1:43 am Title: Chapter 17

What did Brian say?? OMG the shit is getting deep now

 

Thanks for update love all your stories

 

~Teresa~

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