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Reviewer: Nanna Nat Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2020 1:56 pm Title: Prologue

I don't reread stories, but this is the exception. The use of shifting perspective and 2nd person POV are categorically my favourite techniques. The whole story has an Extremely Loud and Incredibly Close vibe and I love it. You wrote in canon but the characters had time apart to grow which made it more realistic. I also like that you didn't write anti anyone. Interesting study into the complexities of human beings. I love this, and feel so connected to the characters. I want more but will settle to reread it! Thanks for your dedication in writing this. x

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 17, 2017 4:32 pm Title: Prologue

Intriguing prologue! Brian dreaming about Ian and Justin trying to decide who will watch him.

Reviewer: Saje Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2017 4:16 am Title: Prologue

Abstract and astute.

very well done.

Saje

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2017 12:16 am Title: Prologue

I assume Brian is dreaming?  Interesting look at Brian's mental state.

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