Date: Aug 22, 2017 5:55 pm Title: Chapter 25-SEMANTICS
What was Justin doing at St James Academy? Getting some stress back to wake his muse up?
Date: Aug 22, 2017 4:50 pm Title: Chapter 24-CONTRITION
The span of emotions is huge in this chapter: from hilarious to full drama.
The beginning had me laughing hard: the kitchen's rebellion! I loved this quote "“The hell you will. That’ll probably trigger the F.B.I. It’s bad enough that they’re already calling Brian…damn tattletales.”"
The arrival of Brian and the hours following were high on emotion. The only positive thing about it is that Brian disclosed being at the hospital every night.
Date: Aug 22, 2017 4:00 pm Title: Chapter 23-DOMAIN
Oups! Did Gabe give the secret away? I thought Brian didn't know about Justin and Zeek.
The whole car/devices is hilarious and informative at the same time. I hope all is actual, just not from your imagination.
I loved this part "It was your personal policy not to publicize the fact that you were on a ‘wellness regime,’ and you were hoping that Justin hadn’t noticed you surfing the ‘net on your honeymoon trying to find the true fat content of young artiste-ejaculate. (Because let’s face it, you weren’t giving that up.) iWWINN® found the answer for you and after receiving a firm ‘no’ when asking if you were willing to remove that from your meal plan, informed you that an extra seventy-five to ninety minutes a week of aerobic exercise would negate the intake altogether. That you could do. Plus, you could still eat his ass all you wanted. According to iWWINN®, eating ass was ‘not recognized as a significant caloric contributor."
Date: Aug 21, 2017 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 22-AFFILIATIONS
I feared the next meeting between Zeek and Justin would happen in front of Brian, but it seems not. I hope they cleared the air and that what happened in NY will stay in NY.
The campaigns for Brown were clever and daring.
Brian had a good idea to calm the press and the public opinion. Will it be enough?
Kyle makes me think about Kip.
Date: Aug 21, 2017 6:17 pm Title: Chapter 21-INTERSECTIONS
Dirty dancing and Baby in the corner... Emmett often calls Justin "Baby".
It's funny that Brian told Ted about the fisting; yet, he knows Ted wouldn't say anything; for one, he's discreet and he doesn't drink, so he can't spill it once drunk.
The post-its were a great idea with the walnuts.
The news regarding the relocation of the plant is going to put a strain of the transition.
Date: Aug 21, 2017 5:23 pm Title: Chapter 20-ACCELERATE
The rabbit hole scene was amazing; as for the last one, it's another step they have taken: 100% trusting. It happened at the right moment, they were so in synch and the honeymoon was over. Even if it didn't happen, it was a wonderful period, but with this, it will be etched on their memories for a long time.
Date: Aug 21, 2017 4:33 pm Title: Chapter 19-FIDELITY
I love the end when Justin says to Brian he doesn't want to fuck and after Brian told him he wasn't trying, Justin asked why he didn't want to: sure, he wasn't really awake, but he was wondering.
Nate and Sarah have kinky ways... and so are Brian and Justin, who found and prepared accessoiries... Hot hot hot!
Date: Aug 21, 2017 3:48 am Title: Chapter 18-RECEPTION
I'm not sure Brian is right when he says he can dance...
Date: Aug 20, 2017 11:50 am Title: Chapter 17-FORTUITY
Oh no, Gabe with Jeffrey the scammer: his standards weren't met with this guy.
Ha ha ha, Molly following Justin's steps! Funny and not at the same time: the guy is a homophobe.
Date: Aug 20, 2017 9:45 am Title: Chapter 16-INVITATION
The walk in the street after Brian took Justin with him in the loft: this was the first time they were alone outside the loft, in the plain light. It was interesting to see how Brian was acting.
Only Brian would notice Justin's pointed toes while fucking him.
Gabe seems to have high standards regarding the person he wants in his life.
Brian, his glasses and Justin: what a sexy trio!
Date: Aug 19, 2017 9:24 pm Title: Chapter 15-TRANSITIONS
Zeek is quite hard to manage.
Gabe and Debbie fighting about food and dress code: Brian had to step in.
The doors of Brian's office must be fun to look at. Does that even exist for real?
Date: Aug 19, 2017 6:54 pm Title: Chapter 14-MILESTONE
Hilarious and hot! Great chapter!
Justin's freaking about the fridge and the dishwasher, then The Car! Mr 1500 on my SAT isn't comfortable with modern technology.
Brian is as always, horny and direct, but also very attentive too Justin's needs, feelings.
Date: Aug 19, 2017 1:32 pm Title: Chapter 13-SEGUE
It's hard to say goodbye, but Brian was waiting for him, so that wasn't that difficult to pack.
I loved how Justin was remembering when he had to go thru the airport, heartbroken so many years ago.
It's odd that he feels that's Brian's room while the house was bought for him.
Date: Aug 19, 2017 11:45 am Title: Chapter 12-CONTEXT
Bittersweet chapter with some sweet moments.
Justin and Alan's talk was very informative.
Justin and Amelia were just adorable.
Justin and Daniel were on a weird part of their relationship; but when your mother dies, I guess it can be hard to get through it.
The end though is one of the key moments of Justin and Brian's life.
Date: Aug 19, 2017 8:49 am Title: Chapter 11-IMPRESSIONS
Great chapter: funny, sexy and angsty. The dreams are disturbing.
Drunken Justin is really funny. Their banter about "Bionic Twat" and during the whole meal was hilarious. The socks seem a good gift; if only Jennifer knew how it turns Brian on, she would blush like her son.
The peeing scene as a couple was funny and showing how they have grown as a couple. They have such a complicity.
Date: Aug 18, 2017 8:12 pm Title: Chapter 10-AMENITIES
Amazing! Beautiful! What a chapter!
It's raw emotion, hot sex, fusion between two men who are finally on their own and right time.
I loved how you described the old Brian leaving, as he was shown during the "after white party" with Ben and Michael, in Ben's apartment. The new Brian wondering if the new Justin saw the old Justin follow.
As for the sex scenes, they are so well written that I could almost feel the power of their love (the emotional part).
I loved this quote from Brian: "You’d missed that, watching him smoke, watching him do anything with his mouth."
Date: Aug 18, 2017 5:55 pm Title: Chapter 9-ASSOCIATIONS
Another amazing chapter!
Daniel saw Brian and maybe will have a clue.
Having Cody harassing Chris and his family is a nice twist. I just hope he won't harass Justin or Brian. He is really nuts.
The scene with Craig was very calm and I was surprised that Brian could remain this quiet.
Date: Aug 18, 2017 4:20 pm Title: Chapter 8-ACCOMODATIONS
I fear when Brian will link Justin with Eggo...
The scene with Psycho was funny: I could imagine Justin freaking about a shower curtain.
Date: Aug 17, 2017 9:21 pm Title: Chapter 7 - LATENCY
I don't feel Daniel; I hope he won't get what he wants.
It was interesting to get Justin's POV about his meeting with Brian.
Date: Aug 17, 2017 8:43 pm Title: Chapter 6 - COMPLIMENTARY
So, if I understood well: Zeek and Justin happened, while Zeek sometimes works for Brian. As Zeek calls Justin Eggo, Brian wouldn't know even if Zeek would talk about him.
Alan stole Justin's computer: maybe would he be able to tell where it is?
Date: Aug 17, 2017 7:49 pm Title: Chapter 5 - INSPIRATION
I love when Brian is drunk: his filter doesn't work very well and he let some of his feelings out.
I've got a bad vib about Justin's studio: fortunately, it's "only" a theft, very damaging for his show as he hadn't a backup. But, it's only material.
Date: Aug 17, 2017 6:58 pm Title: Chapter 4 - SECURITY
The scenes with Zeek are to die for: hilarious, yet meaningful. I loved when Brian got completely stoned/drunk at the loft while Zeek was fixing the elevator.
Date: Aug 17, 2017 6:29 pm Title: Chapter 3 - OPPORTUNITIES
Hot and bittersweet; Brian seems to want Justin in his life; I guess he doesn't want to ask him to come back.
Date: Aug 17, 2017 5:55 pm Title: Chapter 2-THRESHOLD
Wonderful! I love how you had them talking about that first night, in an honest way. They were finally where they were comfortable with each other, they really were sharing their love and their commitment; it was another "first" for them: sealing their lives.
Date: Aug 17, 2017 4:53 pm Title: Chapter 1 - INDICATION
Brian can be so clueless sometimes or is it just his "uncaring" side that shows up?