Reviewer: aglaja5 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2017 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 13: A Close Call

First, thank you for not letting this conversation stop where it ended in the show. You’ve given them another possibility - and in my opinion, it’s a real good one. And regarding the tricking… I always imagine Brian to less tricking as time goes by, as a natural development. It was kind of funny for me because this was one of my reviews for another story (one by Wren):

“And I haven’t understand this whole marriage discussion. Why not getting married? You don’t have to change everything so fast just because of that. For me it feels as if it would have been good for them, just some kind of small commitment, just an official sign that they belong together no matter what, no matter if Brian still tricks a little bit or if Justin goes to NY or stays in P., drawing there, maybe with an agent who supports him. Why had it to be all or nothing. Life is about growing up and also about compromises. And maybe it would have been good, giving Brian a little more trust in Justin (in case he would have gone to NY) and Justin a reason to return….”

I would have loved to see your version in the show, because the end they’d showed us, broke my heart. And after all Brian and Justin went through they haven’t deserved such an end. You’ve done a great job and I’ve loved to read your story – although it was also sad and heartbreaking, but the end was worth it all (although I would have loved to read more...) Thanks for the whole story but especially for this last chapter. It was hot, awesome, cute, beautiful….  Thanks for sharing this story! Warmest regards, a.